Post by philly123 on Sept 28, 2008 2:41:27 GMT -5
Hi all!!
This is my first fanfic, so please comment!!!!
Emperor Sharpfins looked around his study, on the table before him are scary forbidden books bound in human skin: book of dark magic, long forgotten.
Each book, seemly alive, each with a horrible face, shrink in fear as the Shark emperor reach for them.
“It will be soon” The emperor said to the books and began to study.
Cut to the castle of King Eric
A blind monk with the help of a young boy walked up to the castle and tried to ask his way in, but the guards refused, but after some time the guards grew impatient with his nagging and let him in, “After all he’s just an old man”
Inside the castle, while the other servants tried to avoid him, the maid Carlotta went up to him.
“Can I help you sir?” she ask cautiously.
“Yes, can you grant me an audience with King Eric and his family, madam?”
Cut to inside Melody’s room.
The locket is on the floor, dusty, and Princess Melody is sulking away, reading, when there is a knock on the door.
“What?!?” Princess Melody snapped.
“It’s only me, princess” Carlotta.
“Oh, Carlotta, I’m sorry, why did you come here?”
“Someone asked for your father’s royal family’s audience, the whole, royal family, and I decided to summon you myself, as I know you are irritated by some others.” Carlotta continued with a knowing simile.
In the audience hall of King Eric’s castle
King Eric, Queen Ariel, Princess Melody as well as Grimsby and Carlotta are there.
“So why did you come here?” King Eric asked.
The old man shifted uncomfortably as the boy tried to help him, but the monk shook him away and clear his throat.
“A prophecy , sir, a dream.”
“The elements of two, where kingdoms rule
As another cross the barriers of old
then dark grow deeds of sharker hearts
for lost to him are holy arts
a one of both comes admist this gloom
to seal the gaping maw of doom”
With these word the old man stumped on a chair, and with the help of the boy, in the glare of everyone’s eyes, says,
“ I must now return home, let’s go, my boy”
And the blind man and the boy left.
“Eric, pay no attention to such nonsense, the senile old man..” then Grimsby saw King Eric was deep in thought.
Cut to Altantica
King Triton sat on his throne.
“Ever since my little Ariel became a human, things seemed different here. Don’t you agree, Dudley?”
King Triton was playing sea-chess and talking the Dudley the turtle.
“Yeeeeesss...”
“Don’t answer that, I was thinking about inviting Ariel and her daughter, Melody to my wonderful kingdom of Altantica.”
“Thhhhhhhaaaaatttttttttttssss gg...”
“Don’t answer that, I was thinking now that Ariel has a daughter of her own she now knows what I go through, well, I did went through her adventuresome daughter stealing my triton, like mother like daughter.”
King Triton chuckled.
Away from the palace, a group of camouflaged sharkanian commandos were watching...
Cut to the beach outside the palace.
Princess Melody is strolling along the beach.
Suddenly a penguin and a walrus bounce out of the sea as well a a bunch of crabs.
“Hi ho!! Crabs scouts!!”
Barked Sebastian.
UTip, the penguin began:“Titanic Tip and Daring Dash haved been joined by the Crab scouts for their bravery for we, as adventurers slash explorers, we...”
Buster, the crab scout interrupted.
“Actually we just stumbled on you guys when we were to deliver the message that King Triton is on his way.”
As if on cue, the sea king with his dolphin pulled chariot appeared, as well as a host of other merpeople.
And King Eric and his wife was out to meet them.
“There’s the tomboy.”
Some noble kid in a mean way said when Princess Melody got close.
“Hello ,Angelfish, this is Urchin.” Arista said pointing to a blonde Mer-boy, “He’s part of the family. We have though about letting you and your mom be mermaids again... hey!! What’s with the attitude?”
“Nothing, its just that why do you want me to me a mermaid again, after what happened last time?”
“And besides who wants to invite a tomboy like you anyway”
Some mean noble kid added in the background.
Ariel looked at the kids then back at Melody.
“Don’t worry dear..”
“It was you and my dad who caused all this trouble in the first place, perhaps with the help of my grandfather as well, come on look at your family, mom, you have countless sisters and this Urchin, if Morgana is sane, why wouldn’t she go after them, oh I forgot! You had to build a wall around the castle to keep her out!! My, even, I could get past that wall, of course Morgana can’t, so you threw my locket away so I would never know my mermaid heritage and probably never would, if Morgana didn’t tell me, yes, she used me but a part of me is still thankful for what she has done.”
Melody told them all in a outburst.
“I’m sorry dear, but my father kept me away from humans, so we are equal..”
Ariel tried to comfort her daughter, but she let out another outburst.
“And with good reason, have you ever heard of fishermen mom? Or maybe about that mermaid that that bunch of pirates captured long before I was born? I think they still kept her in a tub, I heard some of the people in the castle talking about it. And yes, unlike Morgana, humans are a greater threat to the undersea world than she ever be, and yes we are dangerous.”
“A mermaid in human hand?” asked Kind Triton.
“That’s what I heard.” answered Melody.
King Triton turned to King Eric.
“I want to see this mermaid freed” King Triton told Eric.
“It will be done sir.” Eric told him.
“In the meantime, I’ll take my daughter and granddaughter to Altantica, perhaps returning there under much more pleasant circumstances will cheer her up.” He motioned to Melody who glared.
Cut to sharkanian
“Have you ever seen a shark feeding frenzy?”
Emperor Sharpfins, using some dark magic to throw some bloody seal meat out to a school of sharks, suddenly, seemly out of nowhere a large number of sharks began to fight over the piece of meat.
“Amazing itsn’t it? And how similar to my own fish I rule over as well as myself. Indeed, my less cultured cousins will fight over the same prey, and sometimes, one will even continue to feed on the said prey even after they’ve been disemboweled by one’s kin.”
“Now, about your jailing and eventual exile from King Triton’s kingdom, my pilot fish. Don’t you think it was quite cruel? Archimedes the humanologist, your home destroyed, jailed then exiled, just for helping a human in a... Metal Fish?”
“Yes, emperor.” Archimedes told him. “Though I did exposed King Triton’s daughter to humans...”
“Not current making, indeed, I have more reasons to hate humans than King Triton ever did.”
The sharks outside them swam and fight to their seal meat, while Emperor Sharpfish and Archimedes watch them from a shark tower, with statues of frightening shark heads build around.
“I know that King Triton hates humans because the allegedly murdered his wife, Queen Athena while they were on human domain, on land.” The emperor continued.
“I hates humans because they invade my domain, brutally murder my subjects! Violated my home! And treat my waves like trash!!! And in the dead of my kin, they made themselves heroes!!!” Emperor Sharpfish eyes glow with red light, the byproduct of studying forbidden dark magic for so long.
“King Triton, is a plankton in my sensors!! He goes with the flow, I know that, sometime after your exile, his youngest daughter fell in love with a human and married him!!! Worse, they have a daughter!!” Emperor Sharpfins watched Archimedes’ reactions.
“Well we are of the family of life, though such changes are beyond me, perhaps the human helped him in some way?” Archimedes told the Emperor.
“Yes, I would love to see human helping my kingdom. Ha! They would help with their harpoons and nets and destroyed all that I’ve worked so hard for.”
“But remember, emperor, that we studied about humans together, and with their knowledge, and by learning to read their language, that you managed to replace Emperor Sharga and helped you and your fellow fishes build this.” Archimedes motioned to the great Sharkanian city.
“And you’ve done very well to bring civilization to your kin.” he added.
“Knowledge of war it is true, but with time I think that I will surpass even the land dweller’s greatest necromancer.” Murmmered the Emperor partly to himself.
“As for your comment about bring civilization to my kin, that Emperor Sharga, in his obese fat mind took civilization away and made Sharkanians a barbarian race, come, look!” Emperor Sharpfish motioned to a group of sharkanian cavalry-sharks, in their dark armor and several who were tending to their shark-mounts, and feeding the giant white sharks carefully, the emperor continued “ my kin ruled the seas before the mermaids, before land, to the time where there is the sea, and there are sharks. In the absences of the murderous land dwellers, a bull shark can, and will travel to the saltless landline shallows.”
“Altantica needs a regime change.” Muttered Emperor Sharpfins to himself, before Archimedes responded.
What do you all think?
This is my first fanfic, so please comment!!!!
Emperor Sharpfins looked around his study, on the table before him are scary forbidden books bound in human skin: book of dark magic, long forgotten.
Each book, seemly alive, each with a horrible face, shrink in fear as the Shark emperor reach for them.
“It will be soon” The emperor said to the books and began to study.
Cut to the castle of King Eric
A blind monk with the help of a young boy walked up to the castle and tried to ask his way in, but the guards refused, but after some time the guards grew impatient with his nagging and let him in, “After all he’s just an old man”
Inside the castle, while the other servants tried to avoid him, the maid Carlotta went up to him.
“Can I help you sir?” she ask cautiously.
“Yes, can you grant me an audience with King Eric and his family, madam?”
Cut to inside Melody’s room.
The locket is on the floor, dusty, and Princess Melody is sulking away, reading, when there is a knock on the door.
“What?!?” Princess Melody snapped.
“It’s only me, princess” Carlotta.
“Oh, Carlotta, I’m sorry, why did you come here?”
“Someone asked for your father’s royal family’s audience, the whole, royal family, and I decided to summon you myself, as I know you are irritated by some others.” Carlotta continued with a knowing simile.
In the audience hall of King Eric’s castle
King Eric, Queen Ariel, Princess Melody as well as Grimsby and Carlotta are there.
“So why did you come here?” King Eric asked.
The old man shifted uncomfortably as the boy tried to help him, but the monk shook him away and clear his throat.
“A prophecy , sir, a dream.”
“The elements of two, where kingdoms rule
As another cross the barriers of old
then dark grow deeds of sharker hearts
for lost to him are holy arts
a one of both comes admist this gloom
to seal the gaping maw of doom”
With these word the old man stumped on a chair, and with the help of the boy, in the glare of everyone’s eyes, says,
“ I must now return home, let’s go, my boy”
And the blind man and the boy left.
“Eric, pay no attention to such nonsense, the senile old man..” then Grimsby saw King Eric was deep in thought.
Cut to Altantica
King Triton sat on his throne.
“Ever since my little Ariel became a human, things seemed different here. Don’t you agree, Dudley?”
King Triton was playing sea-chess and talking the Dudley the turtle.
“Yeeeeesss...”
“Don’t answer that, I was thinking about inviting Ariel and her daughter, Melody to my wonderful kingdom of Altantica.”
“Thhhhhhhaaaaatttttttttttssss gg...”
“Don’t answer that, I was thinking now that Ariel has a daughter of her own she now knows what I go through, well, I did went through her adventuresome daughter stealing my triton, like mother like daughter.”
King Triton chuckled.
Away from the palace, a group of camouflaged sharkanian commandos were watching...
Cut to the beach outside the palace.
Princess Melody is strolling along the beach.
Suddenly a penguin and a walrus bounce out of the sea as well a a bunch of crabs.
“Hi ho!! Crabs scouts!!”
Barked Sebastian.
UTip, the penguin began:“Titanic Tip and Daring Dash haved been joined by the Crab scouts for their bravery for we, as adventurers slash explorers, we...”
Buster, the crab scout interrupted.
“Actually we just stumbled on you guys when we were to deliver the message that King Triton is on his way.”
As if on cue, the sea king with his dolphin pulled chariot appeared, as well as a host of other merpeople.
And King Eric and his wife was out to meet them.
“There’s the tomboy.”
Some noble kid in a mean way said when Princess Melody got close.
“Hello ,Angelfish, this is Urchin.” Arista said pointing to a blonde Mer-boy, “He’s part of the family. We have though about letting you and your mom be mermaids again... hey!! What’s with the attitude?”
“Nothing, its just that why do you want me to me a mermaid again, after what happened last time?”
“And besides who wants to invite a tomboy like you anyway”
Some mean noble kid added in the background.
Ariel looked at the kids then back at Melody.
“Don’t worry dear..”
“It was you and my dad who caused all this trouble in the first place, perhaps with the help of my grandfather as well, come on look at your family, mom, you have countless sisters and this Urchin, if Morgana is sane, why wouldn’t she go after them, oh I forgot! You had to build a wall around the castle to keep her out!! My, even, I could get past that wall, of course Morgana can’t, so you threw my locket away so I would never know my mermaid heritage and probably never would, if Morgana didn’t tell me, yes, she used me but a part of me is still thankful for what she has done.”
Melody told them all in a outburst.
“I’m sorry dear, but my father kept me away from humans, so we are equal..”
Ariel tried to comfort her daughter, but she let out another outburst.
“And with good reason, have you ever heard of fishermen mom? Or maybe about that mermaid that that bunch of pirates captured long before I was born? I think they still kept her in a tub, I heard some of the people in the castle talking about it. And yes, unlike Morgana, humans are a greater threat to the undersea world than she ever be, and yes we are dangerous.”
“A mermaid in human hand?” asked Kind Triton.
“That’s what I heard.” answered Melody.
King Triton turned to King Eric.
“I want to see this mermaid freed” King Triton told Eric.
“It will be done sir.” Eric told him.
“In the meantime, I’ll take my daughter and granddaughter to Altantica, perhaps returning there under much more pleasant circumstances will cheer her up.” He motioned to Melody who glared.
Cut to sharkanian
“Have you ever seen a shark feeding frenzy?”
Emperor Sharpfins, using some dark magic to throw some bloody seal meat out to a school of sharks, suddenly, seemly out of nowhere a large number of sharks began to fight over the piece of meat.
“Amazing itsn’t it? And how similar to my own fish I rule over as well as myself. Indeed, my less cultured cousins will fight over the same prey, and sometimes, one will even continue to feed on the said prey even after they’ve been disemboweled by one’s kin.”
“Now, about your jailing and eventual exile from King Triton’s kingdom, my pilot fish. Don’t you think it was quite cruel? Archimedes the humanologist, your home destroyed, jailed then exiled, just for helping a human in a... Metal Fish?”
“Yes, emperor.” Archimedes told him. “Though I did exposed King Triton’s daughter to humans...”
“Not current making, indeed, I have more reasons to hate humans than King Triton ever did.”
The sharks outside them swam and fight to their seal meat, while Emperor Sharpfish and Archimedes watch them from a shark tower, with statues of frightening shark heads build around.
“I know that King Triton hates humans because the allegedly murdered his wife, Queen Athena while they were on human domain, on land.” The emperor continued.
“I hates humans because they invade my domain, brutally murder my subjects! Violated my home! And treat my waves like trash!!! And in the dead of my kin, they made themselves heroes!!!” Emperor Sharpfish eyes glow with red light, the byproduct of studying forbidden dark magic for so long.
“King Triton, is a plankton in my sensors!! He goes with the flow, I know that, sometime after your exile, his youngest daughter fell in love with a human and married him!!! Worse, they have a daughter!!” Emperor Sharpfins watched Archimedes’ reactions.
“Well we are of the family of life, though such changes are beyond me, perhaps the human helped him in some way?” Archimedes told the Emperor.
“Yes, I would love to see human helping my kingdom. Ha! They would help with their harpoons and nets and destroyed all that I’ve worked so hard for.”
“But remember, emperor, that we studied about humans together, and with their knowledge, and by learning to read their language, that you managed to replace Emperor Sharga and helped you and your fellow fishes build this.” Archimedes motioned to the great Sharkanian city.
“And you’ve done very well to bring civilization to your kin.” he added.
“Knowledge of war it is true, but with time I think that I will surpass even the land dweller’s greatest necromancer.” Murmmered the Emperor partly to himself.
“As for your comment about bring civilization to my kin, that Emperor Sharga, in his obese fat mind took civilization away and made Sharkanians a barbarian race, come, look!” Emperor Sharpfish motioned to a group of sharkanian cavalry-sharks, in their dark armor and several who were tending to their shark-mounts, and feeding the giant white sharks carefully, the emperor continued “ my kin ruled the seas before the mermaids, before land, to the time where there is the sea, and there are sharks. In the absences of the murderous land dwellers, a bull shark can, and will travel to the saltless landline shallows.”
“Altantica needs a regime change.” Muttered Emperor Sharpfins to himself, before Archimedes responded.
What do you all think?
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