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Post by Ariel on Dec 31, 2010 0:51:14 GMT -5
I just love your story. Looking forward to the next chapter
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Post by josh89 on Dec 31, 2010 1:27:24 GMT -5
oh em gee ! you never fail me sir =) i came up with two ideas.. 1) ariel should take him to her secret grotto && explain everything about the secret grotto && 2) talk more about eric & flounder =) hope you get to use my ideas =) oh & 3)visit ursulas lair
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Post by josh89 on Dec 31, 2010 1:40:41 GMT -5
what ? i love ursula she is a bad chick =) lol but the reason why i say ursula's cave so she can tell him the sacrifice she did all for eric && tell him about ursula && than morgana pops up out of no where or something crazy you know =)
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Post by josh89 on Dec 31, 2010 1:47:46 GMT -5
ohh ok i see...well this is your story i was just throwing ideas out there =)
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Post by josh89 on Dec 31, 2010 1:59:49 GMT -5
HAPPY BIRTHDAY !! hope you have a great one ! this should be your day off =) enjoy it with your friends and family i think we can hold up for awhile lol
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Post by josh89 on Dec 31, 2010 2:07:09 GMT -5
lmao ok =P
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Post by Ariel on Dec 31, 2010 13:11:06 GMT -5
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Post by josh89 on Dec 31, 2010 17:40:52 GMT -5
amazing i wanted to see ariel cry while she spoke about eric show alot of emotion but this was great && i love flounder
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Post by Ariel on Dec 31, 2010 19:29:22 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this.you put alot of detail in the story which made it wonderful to read and easier to picture in my head.I can't wait to read the next Chapter
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Post by josh89 on Jan 1, 2011 4:07:23 GMT -5
love it enough said btw have a happy new year
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Post by Ariel on Jan 1, 2011 18:45:32 GMT -5
very nice Please keep writing!
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Post by Ariel on Jan 1, 2011 20:09:13 GMT -5
Wonderful Chapter very exciting. keep up the good work
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Post by josh89 on Jan 2, 2011 0:37:39 GMT -5
great chapter i enjoyed reading it
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Post by josh89 on Jan 2, 2011 1:43:12 GMT -5
Btw if you don't mind I came up with an idea why don't you use ariel's sisters && king triton in the story
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Post by josh89 on Jan 4, 2011 23:52:38 GMT -5
short but yet cool =DD
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Post by Eric on Jan 17, 2011 1:00:37 GMT -5
Best fanfic in the world!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter
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Post by Eric on Jan 19, 2011 20:46:48 GMT -5
No you didnt mess up it is the best fanfic i have ever read
PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE ( for your fans)
you should be a famous book writer for disney
HEY DISNEY, IF YOU SEE THIS THERE IS A SUPER TALENTED PERSON RIGHT HERE GRAB HIM BEFORE SOMEONE ELSE DOES
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Post by Eric on Jan 20, 2011 20:35:58 GMT -5
UMMMMMMMMMM I Don't have any ideas but about criticism NO ONE IN THIER RIGHT MIND WOULD GIVE THIS ANY CRITICISM ITS THE BEST(THEY SHOULD MAKE THIS INTO A MOVIE)
P.S. do you have any the little mermaid sstuff you are willing to sell to me (i am trying to expand my collection)
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Post by Eric on Jan 28, 2011 23:19:01 GMT -5
Oh ok well I am definitely YOUR fan please write more chapters
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Post by Eric on Jan 29, 2011 22:26:20 GMT -5
Ok well hurry the EXITEMENT is killing me!!!!!!!!!(in the good way)
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