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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 27, 2011 7:28:56 GMT -5
i bet it makes you wish that you all were here in fl in the 70 degree weather and up were you can flip flops all the time.
sometimes we got a cold front but it only last a couple days and were back to the 70's and 80's through out most the time.
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Post by daytripper on Jan 27, 2011 10:48:01 GMT -5
i bet it makes you wish that you all were here in fl in the 70 degree weather and up were you can flip flops all the time. sometimes we got a cold front but it only last a couple days and were back to the 70's and 80's through out most the time. actually no because guess what?? I GOT NO SCHOOL!!!!!!! bye im going sledding but when i get back i promise ill start the next chapter and have it posted by tonight
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Post by daytripper on Jan 27, 2011 17:28:23 GMT -5
Chapter 19 Eric left Ariel to go and get ready for breakfast. Ariel however was lead back into her room by Carlotta who was scolding her for what had happened. “Ariel do you have any idea what could have happened if someone saw you and Eric in the hall asleep together?” Carlotta asked her tone strict and stern but at the same time kind and friendly. “Whats wrong with that?” Ariel asked getting out of her nightgown. Humans had weird customs and expectations Ariel thought. She had no idea what was wrong with sleeping in the hallway. “Ariel do you have any idea what people would think you two did?” Carlotta asked coming up with a theory in her head. “What do you mean we could have done?” Ariel asked. What is wrong with sleeping together? “Ariel... do you know how humans make babies?” Carlotta asked as if Ariel was a little kid. She had to be very careful with this subject so as not to scare the poor girl. “Actually................................................no” Ariel said surprised. The thought had never occurred to her before. She was now incredibly curious as to how humans reproduced. “How?” Ariel asked turning around in her dresser chair to face Carlotta. She looked genuinely worried and very troubled. “Well um... you see Ariel...” Carlotta started while picking out a deep sea blue dress and tossing it to Ariel. Eric was ready and dressed within twenty minutes. Opening the door Eric peered down the hall at Ariel's door which was half opened. Eric finished buttoning up his white shirt and walked down the hall to go to the dinning room. When he walked by Ariel's room he listened to hear Carlotta talking to Ariel. “And the baby grows in the mothers stomach” Carlotta said. “But why?” Ariel asked confused. Oh boy Eric thought glad he wasn't the one to explain this to Ariel. He stated to walk past the door when he heard Carlotta's voice. “Eric I could use some help. She is your fiance after all” She said peering at Eric through the half opened door. Eric gulped and thought of an excuse. Peering into the door he gave a little smile. “Gee id love to but I hear Grimsby calling me sorry got to go!” Eric said running away from the room as fast as he could. It would just be too awkward for him to explain that to his wife. Running around a corner he could hear Carlotta's desperate voice calling for him. “ERIC! EIRC COME BACK HERE!” She yelled angrily. Eric smiled to himself and slowed down as he entered the dinning room. He saw Grimsby sitting at the table reading some documents and making arrangements for the marriage. He looked up when Eric came in and noticed his panting. “Why were you running in the castle Eric?” Grimsby said in a casual / annoyed tone but never taking his eyes off the papers. “Carlotta wanted me to help her explain intercourse to Ariel” Eric said sitting down with a smile. “I managed to escape” he said happily. “Oh well then I don't have any objections” he said placing a paper on top of another.
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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 27, 2011 17:53:23 GMT -5
this chapter is so funny and how carlottee screamed at eric in the hall for him to back.
cant wait for the next chap.
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Post by josh89 on Jan 27, 2011 18:01:21 GMT -5
lol very funny !
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Post by Ariel on Jan 27, 2011 22:01:18 GMT -5
Very funny.I love it
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Post by daytripper on Jan 30, 2011 23:43:34 GMT -5
Chapter 20 A little while later Carlotta walked in with a stunned looking Ariel. Carlotta helped Ariel into her seat then walked over and punched Eric in the arm. “Thanks for the help” She said in a sarcastic annoyed tone. “Anytime” Eric said with a smile. He knew Carlotta was uncomfortable with explaining that to Ariel which was why he didn't kick her out of the castle for hitting him. And also because she was his friend and acted like a mother to him. “You know what I meant” She said in a angry tone before storming out of the dinning room. Eric grinned to himself before turning to face Ariel. She was sitting perfectly straight and looked like an angel to him with her perfect skin, her stunning bright red hair, and her smile that made his heart melt every time she looked at him. He jut stared at her dreamily until the food came. He was unsure what to say to start a conversation so he just remained quite. After all he didn't want to say anything silly in front of Grimsby. After Breakfast Eric and Ariel went out for a walk on the beach for a walk. When they got down to the water Ariel walked out into the water and stood there looking out at the vast endless sea. “Eric do you want to go for a swim?” Ariel asked looking out at the ocean. She didn't even look back to face Eric. Eric was surprised at the question but after a week with Ariel he wasn't surprised. He thought for a second if he had anyone important coming soon and events planned. Ariel turned to look at him with a smile. She saw he was thinking and took his silence as good. “Alright I don't have anything to do today so I guess its fine” Eric said smiling and pulling off his boots.
Ariel smiled widely and pulled off her dress. She threw it back onto shore and dived into the clear blue water. Eric was stunned that she had just took off her clothes and didn't know how to react. Should he jump in with her or ask her politely to cover herself? Will that offend her? “Uhhhh” was all Eric could say as he sat there on the beach with one boot on and another one halfway off his foot. If Ariel was already his wife he would have less of a problem with her swimming nude. But since she wasn't his wife Eric felt if anyone saw them they would think he was taking advantage of her or worse.... going crazy. Ariel's head popped up from the water quite a ways out. She waved to him motioning him to join her. “Ariel!” Eric yelled motioning her towards him. He turned away from her and looked down at te sand as she got closer. He could feel his cheeks getting hot and blush. When Ariel couldn't swim anymore she got up and walked the rest of the way until she was in front of Eric. “Eric whats wrong?” Ariel asked. Eric continued to look away from her unable to bring himself to stoop so low as to take advantage of the situation. Ariel was beautiful and her body was amazing and as much as he wanted to he knew it would be wrong to look. “Ariel... your... nude” Eric managed to stammer out. Ariel looked at him funny. Her brows furrowed and she pursed her lips. “Eric Look at me... I'm your fiance for Neptune's sake... ERIC LOOK AT ME!!” Ariel yelled clenching her fists tears threatening to overwhelm her. Why wouldn't he look at her? Was there something wrong with her? No hes blushing that cant be it Ariel thought. “Ariel in the human world its frowned upon to be without clothes... especially in public” Eric said still looking away from her. Ariel took a moment to register what he had just said. In a few big words he had basically told her to put her clothes back on and that was why he wasn't looking at her. Ariel blushed after a few seconds and ran to get her clothes. Once they were on Eric finally looked at her with a smile. “Its not your fault you didn't know” Eric said walking over to her. Ariel felt a few tears rush down her face. “Its not that its just... I thought for a moment you didn't love me” Ariel said wiping a tear off her face. “Ariel no matter what form you take, mermaid, human, and no matter what you look like your personality is what makes you who you are. And when your yourself I love being around you and will always love you” Eric said softly. He smiled and she smiled and he leaned in and she leaned in. and then their lips met somewhere in between. “Still want to go swimming?” Eric asked as they broke apart.
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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 31, 2011 7:27:34 GMT -5
cute chapter.
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Post by Ariel on Jan 31, 2011 20:04:49 GMT -5
very nice :)keep going!
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Post by daytripper on Feb 10, 2011 22:47:27 GMT -5
okay so heres the thing i cant post long chapter like ive been doing because they ake to long to write and i start to lose intrest as im writing and then do somthing else so wht im going to do is post short hapters and hopfully ill stay focused. ps short chaptrs also build suspense Chapter 21 After Eric helped teach Ariel how to use her legs to swim instead of using them like a fin they went back to the castle. Carlotta was unhappy that they were soaking wet and made tsking sounds as she took Ariel away to be cleaned up. When Eric got cleaned up and put on some new clean clothes he went downstairs to see Grimsby but was interrupted by a small red crab. “Prince Eric... fancy seeing you here” The nervous crab said. “I live here you know” Eric said with a grin picking up the crab and putting him on his shoulder. “Oh yeah dats right” Sebastian said nervously . “SO... what seems to be the problem?” Eric said seeing through the crab. “WHAT?... well um you see da king wants to um... talk wit you” Sebastian said. Eric took a deep breath and sighed. “Should I be worried?” Eric asked. The little red crab nodded his head with a weak smile. Eric sighed again and looked out the hallway window which had a perfect view of the sea. Eric smiled as he thought of Ariel and the fun they had swimming together. He knew that the sea king hated humans and from the way Sebastian was reacting he was probably going to get angry and destroy him. I cant really blame the guy I mean I did take his sixteen year old youngest most beautiful daughter away from him Eric thought to himself. “When does he want to meet me?” Eric asked. “Tonight at midnight” Sebastian replied. Eric was confused shouldn't they meet during the day? When they are all awake? “Why midnight?” Eric asked. “Don't know” Sebastian replied “Well thank you for the message”Eric said sighing. He put the crab on the windowsill and went to find Grimsby.
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Post by danielle1982 on Feb 11, 2011 7:24:47 GMT -5
i dont blame for writing in short chapters i would also get lost in what i was writing. i love this chapter thier is suspence in it on why the king would want to see eric at midnight and i cant wait to read the next chapter. where are you moving to.
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Post by daytripper on Feb 11, 2011 15:41:54 GMT -5
i dont blame for writing in short chapters i would also get lost in what i was writing. i love this chapter thier is suspence in it on why the king would want to see eric at midnight and i cant wait to read the next chapter. where are you moving to. Im moving from greenwich to another part of greenwich
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Post by Eric on Feb 14, 2011 22:31:40 GMT -5
Love it when is the next chapter
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Post by Ariel on Feb 14, 2011 22:49:33 GMT -5
Great chapter! please keep going!
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Post by daytripper on Feb 14, 2011 23:13:20 GMT -5
moving sucks and im too tired at the end of the day to type so for now ALL stories are on hold occasonaly i will update like tonight but there wont be a lot of updating this week sorry
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Post by daytripper on Feb 16, 2011 18:28:17 GMT -5
Chapter 22 Late that night Eric went down to the shore and waited. He was always on time to events and had gotten here early for many reasons. One he wanted to impress the sea king, and two he had nothing better to do other than bother Ariel. Eric sighed and picked up some flat pebbles from the sand. He ran his fingers over the smooth surface and took a step back. He tossed the flat pebble at the surface of the water and watched it skip once... twice... three... four... five times across the water before sinking into the black water. It was cloudy out so there was no moon to help Eric see. To make matters worse it was pretty cold too. Winter would be coming soon and Eric knew Ariel would love to see snow. He smiled at the thought of how Ariel would react. Eric sat down in the cold sand and brought his knees to his chest. He listened to the sound of the waves crashing against the shore and wondered about life under the sea. A few minutes later he heard the sound of someone surfacing. Eric jumped to his feet and scanned he surface of the water. “Good Evening Eric” A deep voice said in front of Eric. Eric jumped in surprise and the voice began to chuckle. “Calm down it me king Triton” Triton said. He made his trident glow so they could both see better. Eric could see the king and the shadows the trident caused on his muscular body made him seem menacing and dangerous. “Your Majesty” Eric said with a bow. Triton dismissed his gesture with a wave of his hand. “Please Eric were family now there's no need for that” Triton said with a smile. Eric calmed down a little and thought that Triton wasn't going to hurt him. “SO whats the meaning of this... um conference” Eric said with smile. “I need to talk to you about the barbaric murder of my people” He said with a frown and anger and hurt in his voice. “What are you talking about my people have never seen a merfolk before... er that is while their still merfolk” Eric said. “I'm talking about fishing” Triton said annoyed. “Oh yes about that” Eric said. Scratching the back of his neck. His people depended on fishing though he had never been one for fish he occasionally did eat it but was glad when Ariel came because it gave him a reason to take it off the menu. “IT HAS TO STOP” Triton said in his deep bellowing voice. He scared the crap out of Eric with his sudden change of tone. Eric sighed. “Your majesty I love all forms of life but humans cant just live off of plants... we need meat and although there is cattle that we can eat it isn't enough around here. My people RELY on fishing to live. We don't have enough land or cattle to give up fishing” Eric said in an almost pleading tone. “There has to be some other way. I finally contact humans and form an alliance and still cant stop fishing??? how is that fair to my people?” “Maybe there is a way” Eric said “If you could provide ships with safe passage into our ports then we could get food from other country's” Eric said with a smile. “And you'll outlaw fishing?” Triton said with a raised eyebrow. He was skeptical but trusted Eric more than any other human. “It'll be the first thing I do tomorrow morning” Eric said with a smile. “Agreed” Triton said with a smile shaking Eric's hand.
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Post by danielle1982 on Feb 16, 2011 21:21:28 GMT -5
i love the chapter are you putting on fanfiction.net as will.
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Post by daytripper on Feb 16, 2011 21:29:25 GMT -5
i love the chapter are you putting on fanfiction.net as will. lol i just did earlier today
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Post by danielle1982 on Feb 16, 2011 21:33:05 GMT -5
im glad that you did because everyone who likes the little mermaid storys they will have a lot of comments about the story and im sure they will like the story.
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Post by josh89 on Feb 18, 2011 1:25:58 GMT -5
awesome !
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