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Post by Lady_Amber on Apr 2, 2005 0:25:10 GMT -5
Thanks Kristen. Sorry for the late reply. I am planning redo some of the parts and add on to the other fan fics as well.
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Post by kristen on Apr 3, 2005 21:43:26 GMT -5
no problem! I love your fanfic...i'll try and keep up with them!!
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Post by Lady_Amber on Apr 17, 2005 15:35:54 GMT -5
Okay, I'm working on it right now. (Btw, I promise not to use anymore "A" names hehe) Ending needs an "umph" lol More info on Amelia and why she's so evil How the bad guys died Un-confuse the part where Amelia runs away When having a conversation put the lines on another line Was that it? :'( :'(
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Post by powerdroid on Apr 17, 2005 18:56:04 GMT -5
I didn't comment on this? Bad on me.
It is a good story and you have asked yourself the right questions to improve it.
If you haven't read "A Cure To Adella", I would, so you have a reference point for presentation of the story.
No one wants to wrestle with reading a story, and it's such a good story, you shouldn't scare people away.
Keep writing.
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Post by gollum on Apr 18, 2005 13:35:48 GMT -5
WOW. that was amazing you could be a writter if you wanted!
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Post by powerdroid on Apr 18, 2005 23:35:58 GMT -5
Pssst! Gollum, you could be a writer, too!
Believe it or not, it's not that hard. Just sit down and let the words flow. Don't worry about grammar or syntax or spelling; you are getting your thoughts down. You can edit later.
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Post by gollum on Apr 19, 2005 13:24:25 GMT -5
I was just saying that story was amazing and loads of people would read it!
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Post by powerdroid on Apr 19, 2005 13:48:00 GMT -5
But you could still be a writer. I know there's a tale in you somewhere. Maybe hiding behind your pancreas, but it's in there!
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Post by Lady_Amber on May 3, 2005 21:56:33 GMT -5
I didn't comment on this? Bad on me. It is a good story and you have asked yourself the right questions to improve it. Keep writing. Hi everyone. Sorry I've been off. I'm really not supposed to be on at all. This was actually one of my very first fanfics. If some of the parts didn't make since to some of you that might be why. Thanks Gollum. I actually want to be a writer. I'd have to write my own stories unless I got permission from Disney to publish some of these I will. If I don't I'll just continue writing about Arina and maybe publish some of those stories.
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Post by powerdroid on May 10, 2005 8:10:45 GMT -5
You could certainly post them here, but Disney get a bit maniacal about "giving permission".
Here. it's safe.
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Post by wishergross on Jul 22, 2005 21:11:43 GMT -5
I loved your fanfic. It was great. I loved how you incorperated other Disney characters into the story. I think it is great so keep writing.
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Post by Rena Bam Bena x3 on Oct 15, 2005 23:19:11 GMT -5
That was a really good story! I love the song!
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Post by arielfloundership on Oct 16, 2005 1:37:10 GMT -5
Oh, boy, Disney mixers! Yay!
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