Post by *Beyond Imagination* on Feb 25, 2005 0:08:36 GMT -5
Hey! I've been writing this story in which Ariel meets Aladdin. I haven't had a lot of time to continue it, but here's what I have. It is based on an Aladdin TV Show episode which I saw the other day, hope you like it!
Chapter One
Ariel and Flounder were swimming far away from home. Ariel wanted some new “treasures” for her human collection.
“Are we going to swim more Ariel? I’m tired and my fins are aching” complained Flounder.
“I can’t believe we are so far from home and I still haven’t found any new item” said Ariel. “Ariel, listen to me! We better return to Atlantica before it gets dark”.
“Oh Flounder, don’t be silly, that’s why we left the palace early, to return early. I don’t think it will get dark soon”.
And as they swam they saw new unknown places, new rocks, funny fish, and many new beautiful plants. Also the water was warmer than in Atlantica. Suddenly, Flounder felt some strange presence behind them. He turned his back and said
“Ariel, I think somebody is following us”.
“Flounder, why you are always scared, I mean, we are in a nice place…”. A sparkle on the sand got Ariel’s attention. “What is that?!” said the mermaid., leaving Flounder alone.
“I don’t kn… AAHHHH!!! ARIEL!!! A SHARK!!!”. “Where?” asked Ariel. “OVER THERE!!” said Flounder as he pointed to a big rock.
“Why, he’s scared of us? What kind of shark is this one?” asked Flounder.
“I don’t know why, I don’t think it is a shark” said Ariel.
“Pleaaseee, heeelp” said the shark who was having a hard time to talk.
“Come out, and we’ll se what we can do” yelled Ariel. “Oh no, don’t call him Ariel” whispered Flounder as he hid behind Ariel’s red flowing hair.
The shark came out from the big rock and said “I’m unnnderr Saleen’s spellll, pleaseee, help”. “Saleen?” Ariel asked “Who is she?”. “She’s a maggiciiian, an eevil meer… AARGG”. Suddenly the shark twisted in pain. “What’s wrong?” asked Ariel. “This thinggg, hurrrts” said the shark. A gold starfish that was glowing was stucked on the shark’s chest. “Don’t worry, come with us, I know where we’ll get help” said Ariel. And Ariel, Flounder and the shark started to swim back to Atlantica.
“But Ariel, how will he enter to Atlantica, he’s, um, a shark!” asked Flounder. “Oh don’t worry, we’ll disguise him as a merman” answered Ariel.
Chapter Two
It was almost dark under the sea, when Ariel, Flounder and the shark arrived to Atlantica. “Now, let’s see…” said Ariel very thoughtful while she looked around. “Yes, this will work! For now…” and she grabbed some old yellowish sea weeds.
She used for to make a sort of wig for the shark. “Listen guys” whispered Ariel “We need to swim as fast as we can. We need to get to the Throne Room”.
The trio started to swim, they were about to get to the entrance of the Throne Room, but suddenly Attina came through. “Ariel!” said Attina, “I’m glad to see you, I need to…”. “You need to…” said Ariel nervously as she looked to Attina’s face which was very shocked to see such a weird merman. “Who, who is your friend Ariel?” asked Attina. “Why, his name is, um, his name is…” and suddenly the shark struggled with big pain. “I’m sorry Attina, but we got to go” said Ariel and they swam directly to the Throne Room. When they arrived King Triton was reading a bunch of ‘important’ papers.
“Daddy, please!” said Ariel as she rushed, “We need help”. “What do you want Ari…” tried to say King Triton, but he was looking to the enormous undercover merman.
“Well Daddy, let me explain you what happened”.
Chapter Three
“Saleen…” said King Triton quietly. “I remember her, she’s a very evil magician let me tell
you. I think she lives somewhere between the Arabian Waters”.
“Daddy, do you think you can undo the spell? He’s suffering because of that gold starfish he has got on his chest” said Ariel. “Well, let’s what I can do for him”. King Triton took his trident and pointed to the shark’s chest, where the gold starfish was.
A luminous thunderbolt hit the starfish which instantly broke into a zillion pieces. The body of the shark turned golden and the face of a young man was seen. The young man couldn’t believe his magnificent transformation. But when the shining stopped and he looked down, he saw something purple, and he knew, he just knew.
“Well young merman, what’s your name?” asked King Triton. “Merman?” gasped the young man who seemed very shocked. “My name is… Aladdin, sir”. “Well, Aladdin, you can stay with us while we have some news about Saleen. I’ll send a warning note to each corner of the oceans. Feel welcome here in Atlantica” said King Triton in a kindly tone. “Thank you, your majesty” said a shy Aladdin. Ariel giggled and said “Let me show you your room Aladdin”. “I’ll expect the three of you at dinner!” yelled King Triton as Ariel waved him goodbye.
Aladdin was very impressed. He couldn’t believe he was in such an amazing underwater world. Flounder swam next to him and gave him a big smile. Aladdin smiled back to the little guppy. “I would have never expect a shark to become into such a friendly merman” said Flounder. “Well little friend, you never know what’s about to came in the corner of the street” answered Aladdin. Ariel looked at Flounder and he returned the glance. “Why he used the human word ‘street’?” thought Ariel.
A few moments later they arrived to the guest room. “Here we are!” announced Ariel. “Wow! What a beautiful room is this one!” said Aladdin. I’m very impressed, um…”. “Ariel, I’m sorry we haven’t introduced yet. My name is Ariel, and this is my best friend Flounder. Nice to meet you Aladdin” said Ariel as she stretched her hand. “My name is Aladdin, but just call me Al, nice to meet you too guys” said Aladdin as he stretched his hand too. “I want to thank both of you for saving me from Saleen’s spell. I don’t know how to pay you”. “Oh Al, don’t worry about it. Just try to forget what happened and relax a little” said Ariel. “Hey guys, it won’t be long for dinner time, so why we don’t we refresh ourselves and after dinner we go take a midnight swim?” asked Flounder. “Sounds great! I’ll see you at dinner” said Ariel as she went out the room. “Oh my gosh, he’s so handsome! But, still, he can’t be a… what a non sense” thought Ariel as she swam to her room.
“Well” said Flounder “I think I’m going to rest my eyes, and…” In just a few seconds Flounder fell asleep. “Sweet Dreams little friend” Aladdin whispered quietly as he grabbed a sheet to cover the tired fish. He stood at the window and thought “Jasmine, I miss you so much…”
Chapter One
Ariel and Flounder were swimming far away from home. Ariel wanted some new “treasures” for her human collection.
“Are we going to swim more Ariel? I’m tired and my fins are aching” complained Flounder.
“I can’t believe we are so far from home and I still haven’t found any new item” said Ariel. “Ariel, listen to me! We better return to Atlantica before it gets dark”.
“Oh Flounder, don’t be silly, that’s why we left the palace early, to return early. I don’t think it will get dark soon”.
And as they swam they saw new unknown places, new rocks, funny fish, and many new beautiful plants. Also the water was warmer than in Atlantica. Suddenly, Flounder felt some strange presence behind them. He turned his back and said
“Ariel, I think somebody is following us”.
“Flounder, why you are always scared, I mean, we are in a nice place…”. A sparkle on the sand got Ariel’s attention. “What is that?!” said the mermaid., leaving Flounder alone.
“I don’t kn… AAHHHH!!! ARIEL!!! A SHARK!!!”. “Where?” asked Ariel. “OVER THERE!!” said Flounder as he pointed to a big rock.
“Why, he’s scared of us? What kind of shark is this one?” asked Flounder.
“I don’t know why, I don’t think it is a shark” said Ariel.
“Pleaaseee, heeelp” said the shark who was having a hard time to talk.
“Come out, and we’ll se what we can do” yelled Ariel. “Oh no, don’t call him Ariel” whispered Flounder as he hid behind Ariel’s red flowing hair.
The shark came out from the big rock and said “I’m unnnderr Saleen’s spellll, pleaseee, help”. “Saleen?” Ariel asked “Who is she?”. “She’s a maggiciiian, an eevil meer… AARGG”. Suddenly the shark twisted in pain. “What’s wrong?” asked Ariel. “This thinggg, hurrrts” said the shark. A gold starfish that was glowing was stucked on the shark’s chest. “Don’t worry, come with us, I know where we’ll get help” said Ariel. And Ariel, Flounder and the shark started to swim back to Atlantica.
“But Ariel, how will he enter to Atlantica, he’s, um, a shark!” asked Flounder. “Oh don’t worry, we’ll disguise him as a merman” answered Ariel.
Chapter Two
It was almost dark under the sea, when Ariel, Flounder and the shark arrived to Atlantica. “Now, let’s see…” said Ariel very thoughtful while she looked around. “Yes, this will work! For now…” and she grabbed some old yellowish sea weeds.
She used for to make a sort of wig for the shark. “Listen guys” whispered Ariel “We need to swim as fast as we can. We need to get to the Throne Room”.
The trio started to swim, they were about to get to the entrance of the Throne Room, but suddenly Attina came through. “Ariel!” said Attina, “I’m glad to see you, I need to…”. “You need to…” said Ariel nervously as she looked to Attina’s face which was very shocked to see such a weird merman. “Who, who is your friend Ariel?” asked Attina. “Why, his name is, um, his name is…” and suddenly the shark struggled with big pain. “I’m sorry Attina, but we got to go” said Ariel and they swam directly to the Throne Room. When they arrived King Triton was reading a bunch of ‘important’ papers.
“Daddy, please!” said Ariel as she rushed, “We need help”. “What do you want Ari…” tried to say King Triton, but he was looking to the enormous undercover merman.
“Well Daddy, let me explain you what happened”.
Chapter Three
“Saleen…” said King Triton quietly. “I remember her, she’s a very evil magician let me tell
you. I think she lives somewhere between the Arabian Waters”.
“Daddy, do you think you can undo the spell? He’s suffering because of that gold starfish he has got on his chest” said Ariel. “Well, let’s what I can do for him”. King Triton took his trident and pointed to the shark’s chest, where the gold starfish was.
A luminous thunderbolt hit the starfish which instantly broke into a zillion pieces. The body of the shark turned golden and the face of a young man was seen. The young man couldn’t believe his magnificent transformation. But when the shining stopped and he looked down, he saw something purple, and he knew, he just knew.
“Well young merman, what’s your name?” asked King Triton. “Merman?” gasped the young man who seemed very shocked. “My name is… Aladdin, sir”. “Well, Aladdin, you can stay with us while we have some news about Saleen. I’ll send a warning note to each corner of the oceans. Feel welcome here in Atlantica” said King Triton in a kindly tone. “Thank you, your majesty” said a shy Aladdin. Ariel giggled and said “Let me show you your room Aladdin”. “I’ll expect the three of you at dinner!” yelled King Triton as Ariel waved him goodbye.
Aladdin was very impressed. He couldn’t believe he was in such an amazing underwater world. Flounder swam next to him and gave him a big smile. Aladdin smiled back to the little guppy. “I would have never expect a shark to become into such a friendly merman” said Flounder. “Well little friend, you never know what’s about to came in the corner of the street” answered Aladdin. Ariel looked at Flounder and he returned the glance. “Why he used the human word ‘street’?” thought Ariel.
A few moments later they arrived to the guest room. “Here we are!” announced Ariel. “Wow! What a beautiful room is this one!” said Aladdin. I’m very impressed, um…”. “Ariel, I’m sorry we haven’t introduced yet. My name is Ariel, and this is my best friend Flounder. Nice to meet you Aladdin” said Ariel as she stretched her hand. “My name is Aladdin, but just call me Al, nice to meet you too guys” said Aladdin as he stretched his hand too. “I want to thank both of you for saving me from Saleen’s spell. I don’t know how to pay you”. “Oh Al, don’t worry about it. Just try to forget what happened and relax a little” said Ariel. “Hey guys, it won’t be long for dinner time, so why we don’t we refresh ourselves and after dinner we go take a midnight swim?” asked Flounder. “Sounds great! I’ll see you at dinner” said Ariel as she went out the room. “Oh my gosh, he’s so handsome! But, still, he can’t be a… what a non sense” thought Ariel as she swam to her room.
“Well” said Flounder “I think I’m going to rest my eyes, and…” In just a few seconds Flounder fell asleep. “Sweet Dreams little friend” Aladdin whispered quietly as he grabbed a sheet to cover the tired fish. He stood at the window and thought “Jasmine, I miss you so much…”
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