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Post by WickedElphie on Apr 30, 2005 18:17:22 GMT -5
Authors notes: Drabble; Separated for the first time since their marriage, Ariel and Eric long for each other’s kiss.
She lingers near the water. She thought she had known what it was like to need a kiss. She was wrong. Now that he is no longer by her side she craves them like her new form craves air. She feels the wind all around her and savors the memory of her mouth meeting sea salt and chocolate. She does not know it but he needs her now; he is as helpless as she in the want of warmth and love. And as that same sea wind rustles his hair he dreams of the ocean mingled with strawberries and cream.
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Post by powerdroid on Apr 30, 2005 19:31:51 GMT -5
Interesting.
have you thought about submitting something in the writing competition? Go to CONTESTS/COMEPTITIONS and check it out!
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Post by dreamer on Jun 21, 2006 2:02:14 GMT -5
Great!
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Post by scarletbubbles on Sept 5, 2006 18:00:28 GMT -5
I thought that was very pretty, and just plain nice to read. You have great style, that's for sure. I love Ariel/Eric!
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Post by ariel7angel on Sept 5, 2006 20:46:45 GMT -5
Yeah i agree very good, i love to read stuff about Ariel & Eric!!!!
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Post by WickedElphie on Sept 17, 2006 0:47:04 GMT -5
*Blushes* I'm glad you guys liked. I love reading stuff about Ariel and Eric too!
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Post by scarletbubbles on Sept 17, 2006 14:47:09 GMT -5
I agree, I just love Ariel and Eric. I think that they're so sweet together! Hey, maybe you should grace us with another story!
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Post by WickedElphie on Sept 17, 2006 15:55:41 GMT -5
Thanks! Actually I have an on-going full length fic already up. It's called Bittersweet Symphony. I think you might enjoy it.
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Post by miklc on Oct 21, 2006 14:46:14 GMT -5
That was really nice, I like you lot also love to hear of stories of Ariel and Eric. This was really nice because it was short and sweet, and scarletbubbles is very right you have a really good writing style, you have really inspired me to write more on my fanfic
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Post by ann on Jan 10, 2007 0:45:25 GMT -5
ariel and eric are my favorite couple , nice keep going .
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Post by Kusanagi on Jan 13, 2007 3:42:24 GMT -5
WOW! now im not usually a fan of love stories but that was great! Well done Keep up the good work
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Post by Morgana on Jan 26, 2007 21:51:40 GMT -5
Simple and sweet. Nice.
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