After Lives of the Disney Princesses...

[jennifer]

My friend and I are writing a short story entitled:
The After Lives of the Disney Princesses: THE BIG MIX UP!
The story goes this way:
Long ago there live King Rupert and Queen Clarice (from Princess Diaries) They have 4 daugters named Ariel, Belle, Mia and Mulan.

One day, while the 4 princesses were day dreaming about their prince charming(Ariel about Eric, Belle about the Beast etc.) suddenly the wall in their room started to become a warp then the 4 of them was sucked. The warp was supposed to bring them in the world of their dreams but... Ariel found herself inside Mulan's tent, Mulan was in front of the beast castle, Belle was brought to Mia's world, and Mia was a little mermaid under the sea. For them to get out of their sister's world they should complete it.

That's the summary. I hope you like it!

[powerdroid]

Initially, it sounds interesting.

One suggestion about formatting the story: small paragraphs.

Readers get very nervous seeing a wall of text. Smaller paragraphs break it up and is much more reader friendly.

Let me suggest my "A Cure To Adella", so you can see one way to present it.

Best of luck and keep writing.

[jennifer]

Thanx!

[powerdroid]

ANy idea as to when you might be posting?

[jennifer]

I don't know yet, maybe August.

[powerdroid]

Take your time and craft us a good one, eh?

[niki121488]

Interesting. I'm planning to sort of write something like that only it will deal with the six disney princesses (Snow White, Ariel, Cinderella, Aurora, Jasmine, and Belle) and it will be a humor type of fanfic.

[Prince Mike]

Those sound like great ideas. That would be awesome to read. I can't write stories at all.