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Post by Merstar on Jul 18, 2005 16:09:02 GMT -5
This story is so beutiful *sob* you've inspired me to write. This is simply outstanding I don't say that about many Fan-fics! Keep up the good work!
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Post by emily on Jul 18, 2005 20:08:30 GMT -5
Wow, really?! Wow that makes me feel great! Thanks SO much! I'll post more soon! =D
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Post by emily on Jul 18, 2005 20:14:44 GMT -5
Christine's heart skipped a beat as her cheek hit the hard wooden floor. She heard her father and Rick in the background shouting. "Dad..." Christine whispered, her eyes slowly fluttered open. He obviously didn't hear her, since the roaring thunder was filling the air. "Christine!" Erik yelled taking her into his arms. Christine opened her eyes and wrapped her arms around her father's neck as he lifted her off the floor. "Are you okay?" Erik asked kissing her forehead and placing her on the bench. "Yeah... I hit my cheek though..." Christine said softly, rubbing her sore cheek. Erik kissed her cheek and wrapped two small blankets around her. "Stay here? Okay?" Erik said staring into her eyes then running back to help Rick.
Where else was she going to go? Out into the storm? This thought crossed her mind and Christine laughed to herself. But then, a more serious feeling settled over her. Why not? Maybe Eric could help. He could help, Christine knew it. But, there was no way for her to escape. She had to, no matter what.
Christine gathered up all the courage and strength inside of her and stood. It's now or never... Christine though, then, she ran to the door and jumped over the edge into the sea. She felt the shock of ice cold salt water hit her face, then settle all over her body.
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Post by Merstar on Aug 11, 2005 13:17:54 GMT -5
Is this is? aw... come on please this can't be the end I wanna keep on reading.
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Post by swemer on Aug 11, 2005 13:27:43 GMT -5
Keep it up. Go REDSOX FREAK!
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Post by emily on Aug 11, 2005 21:37:47 GMT -5
Wow, I didn't think anyone was still reading this! lol But thanks so much, it means a lot. ____________________________________________________________
Erik heard a splash, and saw the door flung opened. His heart skipped a beat as he then figured out Christine has just plunged into the raging sea. "Rick!! Christine just went overboard! Come take over the wheel!" He screamed on the top of his lungs. Rick ran over and took the wheel as Erik tied a rope around his waiste and dove into the icey sea.
Christine was calm, and silent. She floated to the bottom and waited. Just as she felt her lungs began to sqeeze tight a shadow began swimming towards her. "Chrisinte?" It was Eric! Christine began swimming to the surface, Eric helped her make it there faster. "I need help!" She said breahting heavily. "No kidding you need help, you're in the middle of the sea, in the middle of a storm!" Just as Eric said that a flash of lightning filled the sky. "I know... but I need your help, my dad and I are in danger. We won't make it out of this storm unless you help." She said, tears forming in her stinging eyes. "Oh my..." Christine saw Eric's eyes widen, when she turned she saw a figure swimming toward her. "Christine! I'm coming!" It was her father. "That's my dad!" Christine said. "Oh Christine I thought I'd lost you." Erik said taking her in his arms, but then, he noticed they weren't alone. "Who are you?" He asked as the rain pelted down on them. "I-I..." Eric stuttered. "A friend, and he can help us dad! His name is Eric and he's a merman!" Christine yelled.
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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Aug 21, 2005 23:33:00 GMT -5
o my goodness....this story is so good...keep writing....i want to know what happens!!!
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Post by Merstar on May 31, 2006 3:51:26 GMT -5
Well long time no see. I would just like to say that I still have been reading and I still would like to read the end.
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