Post by aurora on Jun 20, 2004 4:07:52 GMT -5
Although the description of this area of the forum denotes images, I thought that fan fiction could be posted here too, as writing is considered a form of art. If you have any stories related to TLM that you have written, please share by posting them or linking to them here. OoogieBoogie suggested I post the opening paragraph of a story I'm writing, so here it goes...
"Ariel, I can’t tell you how happy I am,” said Eric, as he broke from the kiss. His smile was radiant, and his eyes glistened with tears. With one smooth motion, Eric lifted his hand, swept the hair from my face and delicately held my cheek. He searched my face and said, “You are so beautiful.” Filled with love, I wrapped my arms around him and pulled him closer to me. I never wanted to let him go. As I pressed my cheek against his chest, I could finally hear what Scuttle had been listening for, his heartbeat. It was a faint, constant beat that throbbed in time with the rushing waves of the incoming tide. He rubbed my shoulders and played with my long red hair. I looked up at him and said with feeling, “I love you, Eric.”
The story begins when Ariel and Eric are at the beach kissing, and it ends when they are kissing on their wedding ship. That space of time is left out in the movie, so I thought writing about what might have happened would be a great subject for a piece of fan fiction.
"Ariel, I can’t tell you how happy I am,” said Eric, as he broke from the kiss. His smile was radiant, and his eyes glistened with tears. With one smooth motion, Eric lifted his hand, swept the hair from my face and delicately held my cheek. He searched my face and said, “You are so beautiful.” Filled with love, I wrapped my arms around him and pulled him closer to me. I never wanted to let him go. As I pressed my cheek against his chest, I could finally hear what Scuttle had been listening for, his heartbeat. It was a faint, constant beat that throbbed in time with the rushing waves of the incoming tide. He rubbed my shoulders and played with my long red hair. I looked up at him and said with feeling, “I love you, Eric.”
The story begins when Ariel and Eric are at the beach kissing, and it ends when they are kissing on their wedding ship. That space of time is left out in the movie, so I thought writing about what might have happened would be a great subject for a piece of fan fiction.
I can't wait to read the rest of it
