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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Oct 25, 2005 17:02:42 GMT -5
i have a story, but it doesn't have anything to do with mermaids or ariel unfortunately. but it does take place on the ocean, it is about pirates.
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Post by arielfloundership on Oct 25, 2005 17:09:51 GMT -5
Hmmm...fanfiction.com is the best place, but if you want it here....
I'd say just put an OT or a (not Ariel, but still...) on it...
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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Oct 25, 2005 17:19:15 GMT -5
smart idea!
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Post by WickedElphie on Oct 26, 2005 8:38:41 GMT -5
Hmmm...fanfiction.com is the best place I think you mean fanfiction.net . But if it's a completely original work than fictionpress.com is the better choice.
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Post by powerdroid on Oct 26, 2005 20:19:43 GMT -5
Let's split the difference. Post the first chapter and see how it goes.
Thus comes the second question: could you tie in a mermaid somewhere?
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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Oct 27, 2005 15:32:07 GMT -5
well, i could. but mainly it's about and orphan would gets kidnapped by pirates and she loses her true love, yadda yadda yadda. but here is the inro. Once, a long time ago in Ireland there lived a family who dearly wanted a child. Soon there wishes were answered, but it came with a cost. The mother died giving birth to her baby girl, but in her last breath named the baby Miriam, then she finally died. The father was so heart broken from the death of his wife that he soon didn?t have the will to do anything but mourn his dead wife. After 10 years since his wife died, he had lost the will to live, he had left no will, so Miriam had nothing, but before she abandoned home she stole her father?s old musket because it was the only thing he would even look at other then herself after his wife died, so it had to have some meaning.
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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Oct 27, 2005 15:32:49 GMT -5
oops, inro is really intro...give me feed back please of what you think!! ^^
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Post by Merstar on Oct 29, 2005 12:50:12 GMT -5
Peretty cool lukkyaqua! I like it!
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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Oct 30, 2005 13:25:43 GMT -5
ok, i will put the story under the title "master maskut miriam"
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