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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 1, 2007 18:23:36 GMT -5
I finally worte a fanfic. Hope it's ok!
This is part of chapter one
Ariel waved to her father one last time. "I'll see you again son, Daddy!" she called.
Triton waved sadly and sighed. Sebastian looked up at him. "She'll be happy there."
Triton nodded. "But I'll miss her..."
Later, Ariel and Eric were on the beach, talking.
"So you traded your voice for legs-all for me?" Eric asked.
Ariel nodded. "To the seawitch."
Eric shuddered. "I'm glad I'm over being hypnotized-and that we're together."
"I know," smiled Ariel. "I've come a long way to get here." Dhe climbed onto a rock and looked out at the ocean. "I'll miss Daddy."
They were silent for a moment until Eric told ariel dinner would be served soon. They went off together and Ariel thought again abut how different her life would be from now on.
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Post by dreamer on Jan 2, 2007 2:21:49 GMT -5
Just by reading that I KNOW that is is gonna be and awesome fanfic! I hope you get more up soon! Write on attinabubbles!
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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 2, 2007 8:03:55 GMT -5
here's the rest of the first chapter:
As she sat down at the table, Ariel hoped seafood wasn't on the menu. it wasn't-vegetables and chicken soup.
"A lot has happened,you know, since we met, but I wish i knew more...about you. Now that you have your voice, tell me-what was Atlantica like?" Eric asked, poking at a green bean.
Ariel stopped to think, her spoon still in her mouth. "Well," she began, "Daddy always siad that the sea is a special place. It is. I had mer-friends and fish friends-like Flounder! That little guppy! Oh, and I've been on adventures." Ariel sighed. "It was wonderful."
"Keep going," Eric urged. "What about your family?"
"I have six sisiters. Arista, Alana, Attina,Aquata, Adella, and Andrina. And of course," she giggled. "me, Ariel. Father named us well."
Eric nodded. "what is your best memory from Atalantica?"
"Oh, that's a tough one. Let me think...It would have to be the time I spent with my family. I cherish every moment even more now." Ariel looked toward the window.
"And to think I never knew about the merkingdom until now." Eric laughed.
"Daddy was so strict about me going to the surface. I loved human things though. I collected them."
"I can see why your father wanted to protect you."
Ariel smiled. "people aren't really supposed to know about us. daddy wouldn't like it anyways."
"So, one more question," Eric siad. "Are you happy here?"
"There are things I'll miss about being undersea, but I'd give anything-everything-to be here with you forever."
He smiled. "Me too."
I'll get the rest to chapter one up l8tr!!! There is more!!
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Post by ariel7angel on Jan 2, 2007 11:58:44 GMT -5
Great start - cant wait to read more!!!!
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Post by Kimberly on Jan 2, 2007 12:12:05 GMT -5
attinabubbles that is vary good I love it keep up the good work. I can't whate for more.
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Post by dreamer on Jan 2, 2007 15:18:38 GMT -5
Another great addition!
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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 3, 2007 7:37:51 GMT -5
I'll put more up l8tr today-promise!
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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 3, 2007 7:47:40 GMT -5
Here's more!
"Been so lonley here without Ariel," sighed Adella as she swam behind Attina and Arista.
"I know. i wonder if she regrets what she's done;" muttered Arista.
"Arista!" cried Attina. "I, for one, think Arielmade the right decision. So what if she's different now?"
Adella nodded. "I can still see what you mean, Arista. All that for a prince?"
The three of them reached the palace and swam in.
"I think I'll just take one last walk on the beach," Ariel said.
"Do you wnat me to come with you?" Eric asked.
"No, no you go on. I'll be fine. Really, Eric."
He let go of her and left as Ariel made her way back outside.
"Fins for legs," she whispered. "Was it a good trade?" Memories of her sisters and father flooded in. But then Eric's face came into her mind. "Yes, it was."
That's chapter one! Hope you like it!!!!
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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 3, 2007 7:50:33 GMT -5
Chapter Two---
Ariel wpke up the next morning and dressed. What would happen to her today?
A servant entered with breakfast. "Here you are, your Majesty." she smiled.
"Thank you!" Ariel exclaimed.
"I have a message from Eric for you as well," the servant said.
"Oh?' Ariel bit inot her toast. "is he here?"
"No, Highness, no. He set sail a few hours ago. But he received a message from your father. He'd like you to come visit him."
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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 3, 2007 12:16:11 GMT -5
More...
"Visit!" Ariel leaped up. "Wonderful! I'll go!" Ariel forgot her breakfast and rushed out into the early morning sun. The morning air was chilly. Ariel drew her shawl around her and shivered.
She stepped out of her shoes and put one foot into the water. It glowed and tingled. Ariel put both feet in.
The transformation was quick. Ariel stopped spinning and took in a breath of water. The bubbles cleared and soon she had a clear view of Atlantica-her home. Eagerly, she swam ahead.
Ariel peeked into her old trove. Her collection was still there-what was left of it. While humming Part of Your World, she looked around.
"I remerber this," she sighed.
Ariel heard a voice behind her. "Ariel?"
"Flounder!" Ariel swam over to him, joy showing on her face. "Look at me!"
'I know!" Flounder smiled.
"I knew you'd find me," Ariel giggled.
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Post by Kimberly on Jan 4, 2007 7:23:20 GMT -5
That vary good I'm looking forward to reading more. Your good at this and the story has a good flow about it, and I can't Waite to see what happens!!!!!
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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 4, 2007 7:36:34 GMT -5
Thank you! i will have more up later. I've written a lot of it already, more than what's here.  |
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