The Origin of a Golden Locket

[UmbrellaFish]

The Origin of the Golden Locket
by: flounderfish

Chapter One: The Beginning of the Origin

"Flounder! Where are you?" called Ariel against the roaring winds.
"Ariel! Ariel! Is that you?" yelled the small yellow fish.
"Yes! Swim to me!" she answered.
"Oh, oh, okay!" then, Flounder bravely swam over to Ariel.
"Are you okay?" asked Ariel.
"No! Why do you always talk to me into these thing? I coulda been killed!" then, noticing Ariel sad frown, he apologized. "Oh, I'm sorry. Sometimes these adventures can be pretty fun, I guess." Then, a gigantic wave rolled over them.
"I guess we better get back under!" giggled Ariel, the two pals then plunged into the water.
"Hey, Ariel," said the small guppy.
"Yes," answered the little mermaid.
"Tell me what we're looking for again," replied Flounder.
"Okay," answered Ariel, gently floating on top of a rock, "Well, Daddy wants us to find a golden sea-shell locket. It's lost somewhere in the ocean."
"Did he say why you were looking for it?" asked Flounder.
"No. Well, actually, he's told all the court and all my sisters to be on the search for it. He just says it's valuable to his heart." Ariel answered.
"Hmm..." mumbled Flounder.
"Ariel!" called a caribbean voice.
"Ariel! Flounder! Where are you?" it called again.
"Sebastian!" said the two friends in union. Then, out of a patch of tall seaweed popped the head of a small red crab, in his late thirties.
"Now you too shouldn't be out here so late" lectured the crab.
"We know, we know," said Ariel.
"Well, you should. The king's been worried sick about you. After losing that locket of his, imagine how he would act if he lost the two of you," replied Sebastian.
"Yes, Sebastian. We know," Ariel answered as the three swam off to the shining castle ahead.

[ariel7angel]

SOunds good so far, cant wait to read more!!!!

[UmbrellaFish]

ariel7angel said:

SOunds good so far, cant wait to read more!!!!

Thanks for the feedback! I'll be writing more later today or tommorrow.

flounderfish

[jodeefan12]

i like it ill be lookin forward to some more!

[UmbrellaFish]

Chapter Two: Mermaid Sisters Together

"Ariel! You're back!" exclaimed Arista who swam over to hug her sister.
"Hi!" replied Ariel, just fresh from her trip for the locket. She was in the make-up room. The sister hang-out.
Then, the sisters began to tell each other of their adventures. "I looked in the Haunted Seaweed Patch!" "I almost found the treasure!" "I found it and I'll bring it back tomorrow!" and more. but none had really found it. But it didn't matter. They were close sisters and each enjoyed adventures.
"Knock! Knock!"
"Oh I wonder who that could be?" said Arista as she swam to open the door.
"Message for Princess Alana," told the soldier.
"Oh! Really?" she swam over in a rush.
"What does it say?" "Huh?" 'Who's it from?" rang her sisters's voices.
"Quiet down. It's from Pearl," replied Alana.
"Pearl? She's the coolest mermaid under the sea!" exclaimed Arista.
"I know! Anyway, it says... it says..." began Alana.
"Yes...." said Ariel.
"She invited me to her party! YAY!" she began swimming in circles. "YES!"
"Oh! That's great! Can I come with you?" asked Arista.
"Oh, sure. Yes, I guess. If Pearl's okay with it," replied Alana.
"Yippee!" cried Arista.
"What about us?" asked the others in union.
"Um, sure I guess," answered the young mermaid. Then, they all (except for Alana) began to dance and sing. Suddenly, the door burst open.
"Girls! Dinner's ready! Ha ha!" shouted Sebastian.
"Oh great! I'm starving!" said Andrina. Then, the seven little mermaids (and one little red crab) swam off, not to the knowledge that this would be the last time all would be good between the sisters.

[shadows_light91]

Great update. I like the suspense, and I'm interested to see where you're going with this.

[miklc]

Very good, I'm really liking the potentail of this story, and I love to here more about the sisters. Keep it up

[jodeefan12]

i cant wait for more!