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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 28, 2008 10:54:43 GMT -5
That was a great chapter. I can see Ariel as Aurora right now. I'd love to hear Jodi Benson sing Once Upon a Dream. Good job! Can't wait to read the next chapter!  |
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 28, 2008 11:07:52 GMT -5
Thanks i"m really glad you like it . I"m glad you can see Ariel as Aurora Jodi singing Once Upon A Dream will be neat . Did you liked that the chapters are named after Disney songs? . I wonder about Belle's chapter-should i make it that Genie knows that Belle isn't Jasmine. I also have an idea about Jasmine's chapter that Jasmine try to show the enchanted objects Agrabah and they tells her there's no such place and it's like in the Disney merchandise that every Disney character live in a different world,and that Chip knows that Jasmine is not Belle and helps her set things right,you like it? . |
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 28, 2008 11:32:21 GMT -5
Naming the chapters after Disney songs is a beautiful touch. It really adds something.
Genie being a magical creature would probably know Belle isn't Jasmine. If you add Aladdin in the story it might be difficult. Aladdin IS the main character of the film, so Genie usually sticks around with Aladdin. Maybe Genie will notice Aladdin is different, Aladdin/Beast won't notice anything, and Genie will confront Jasmine/Belle about it.
I think it's a cool idea to have Belle/Jasmine try to show the magical objects where Agrabah is. Since Chip is an innocent youth whos best friend is Belle, he's probably notice the difference, thus letting him help Belle/Jasmine change it.
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 28, 2008 12:45:15 GMT -5
Thanks i"m glad you like. Yeah,it's similar to what i thought-before the A Whole New World part Genie tells us about Aladdin and he knows Belle isn't Jasmine and help get to Aladdin,but to make Genie knows that the Beast isn't Aladdin. Why Aladdin is a problem? . I"m really glad you liked that idea . Yeah i also thought he's the enchanted object who like Belle the most (the others,i think,like her because she can break the spell,they don't even call her Belle,they call her "She","The girl" and etc.,only Chip calls her Belle). I think is going to be a problem,i don't know how to fit her to Enchanted's plot,but i have great ideas about Giselle in Wonderland (for exmaple-the Cheshire Cat nows she's not Alice and she came from Andalasia,he even knows about Pip,Rober,Edward,Nancy and etc.). |
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 28, 2008 12:54:37 GMT -5
Well, since you've got the Jasmine/Belle plot planned out, I guess Aladdin won't be much of a problem. I think the Giselle chapter will be great! Can't wait to read that! I wonder, are you planning on making Giselle/Alice human? That is how Giselle found her true love, and then again, Alice doesn't have a "true love" in her own movie. So I can see Giselle/Alice being a problem also, but I think you'll come up with a good idea.  |
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 28, 2008 13:24:47 GMT -5
I wanted to focuse it on Belle as Jasmine . I"m glad you want to read Giselle's chapter . Yeah,i wanted Alice to the real world but the problem... won't that be werid that a grown up like Robert fell in love with a girl that can be his daugther? :( and i also don't know if to make it when she gets rid of the troll or when she's merrying Edward,i can make a story about Alice and Pip rescue Andalasia from a spell that evil spirits casted (like the Enchanted:Once Upon Andalasia GBA game). I guess Alice got a problem  . |
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