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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 13, 2008 13:05:42 GMT -5
All the Disney princesses had their journey to find their happily ever after,but what if they got switched and had to find the other Princess's happily ever after? what if Aurora became a little mermaid? or Mulan became an Native American princess who needs to make peace betweeb her people and the English people? or Alice became a princess who's got banished from her animated world? or Giselle got to Wonderland? the fanfic tells how the Disney Princesses: Snow White. Cinderella. Aurora. Ariel. Belle. Jasmine. Pocahontas. Mulan. Giselle. And Alice (she was add so someone will switch with Giselle) got switched after the Disney villain changed a magical storybook about them. About the switched:Snow White with Cinderella,Aurora with Ariel,Belle with Jasmine,Pocahontas with Mulan and Alice with Giselle. And the Princes will get also switch (for exmaple Aladdin will looks like Beast and he think he's Beast but he's really Aladdin and Jasmine who switched with Belle will know he's Aladdin). Do you like the idea?.
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 13, 2008 15:57:48 GMT -5
Neat idea tnaday1, I can't wait to hear the story!
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 14, 2008 8:30:41 GMT -5
Okay here we go: Beginning: Once upon a time,all the Disney Princesses (Snow White,Cinderella,Aurora,Ariel,Belle,Jasmine,Pocahontas,Mulan, Alice and Giselle) had their lives after each one of them made her journey and found happily ever after. One day,Malefiecent,Lady Tramine,The Queen,Ursula,Jafar and other villain use the Fairy Godmother's wand and switch between the Princess's stories and now each princess had a different story. Can they find the other Princesses's happily ever after?.
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 15, 2008 17:46:00 GMT -5
Chapter One:Someday My Prince will Come. Snow White waked up wearing rags,but not the rags she used to wear when her stepmother was the queen,different rags (Cinderella's rags),she don't remembered wearing this dress,"Dopey? Bashful? Grumpy? Happy? Doc?" she called a few dwarfs but no answer,the place she was unfamilier,"Snow White!" called a voice of an old woman,Lady Tramine entered to room with Drezzila and Anastasia,"Snow White,you have to clean the floor,make breakfast,wash the staires... are getting ready?" Who are you?" asked Snow White,"get ready or you won't have a bed" told the stepmother and left,Snow White was confused and knew that something is wrong,2 mice came-Jaq and Gus,"Lucify is chasing us,Snow Whitie" told her the mice,"oh my,of course i"ll help you" she said,Snow White wasn't sure what to do so she decided to help the mice and do what Lady Tramine until she"ll know what to do,while she cleaned the floor Lady Tramine came in "listen" she said to the stepsisters "The prince is making a royal ball and all suitable maidn is to attend",Snow White was thinking "A prince? could it be my prince,well,i better try to get there anyway,it's my only hope",so she asked Lady Tramine if she can come,Lady Tramine smiled evily "Let's make a deal-if you"ll finish all your work in time and find a dress,you can go",Snow White agreed and looked for Jaq and Gus who were there allready "Snow Whitie,we'll make a dress for you while you"ll finish your work" they said "that's a good idea,thanks for helping" she said. Snow White managed to finish everything but Lady Tramine didn't agreed for her to come along,Snow White didn't knew what to do,The Fairy Godmother came and make her a carrige and new dress with glass slippers "listen" she said "your Prince is at the ball,you need to leave him your glass slipper,someone changed reality and swithced you with a princess called Cinderella,the only way is to change back everything is to find your prince,the spell i casted will be ended in midnight" she explained,Snow White told her she understand and went to the ball. At the ball Snow White met her Prince,wearing a white outfit and thought he's Prince Charming,they danced and in midnight Snow White escaped and left a glass slipper like the Fairy Godmother told her. The day after the prince looked for Snow White and checked the slipper on every girl in the kingdom,Snow White wanted to get down but without notcing Lady Tramine locked her,Snow White found a chair and broke the door with it,she escaped down,and put the slipper on,thought Lady Tramine broken one of the slippers Snow White had the other and it fitted. Snow White met her prince,they kissed and.... it's was all magical. Next chapter:Cinderella's.
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 16, 2008 10:13:06 GMT -5
It's great, but I really can't wait for the Ariel/Aurora chapters and the Jasmine/Belle chapters.
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 16, 2008 10:27:04 GMT -5
Thanks i think the Aurora\Ariel chapters will be my favorite ,i just don't know what to do in the Ariel chapter-make her fell alseep like Aurora in the film or make Ariel break the spell with the Flora,Founa,Merriweather like in the Disney Princess GBA game (in the GBA Aurora first help Flora,Founa and Merriweather after they were transformed into butterflies and then they searched for the king and queen to wake them up and then Aurora had to kill Maleficent ).
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 16, 2008 17:11:35 GMT -5
Well, personally, I'm a traditional person, so I would likely make Ariel fall asleep. Although, Ariel and Aurora are completley different personalities, so Ariel could possibly resist "sleep" or whatever. But you're the author of the story, so it's your decision.
I think I'm most excited for the Jasmine/Belle story. That's just a cool idea.
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 17, 2008 10:11:02 GMT -5
Well, personally, I'm a traditional person, so I would likely make Ariel fall asleep. Although, Ariel and Aurora are completley different personalities, so Ariel could possibly resist "sleep" or whatever. But you're the author of the story, so it's your decision. I think I'm most excited for the Jasmine/Belle story. That's just a cool idea. Yeah,but Ariel won't do much if she"ll fell asleep (thought she can kill Maleficent),so i might use that plot of Ariel wake up everyone . I don't Aurora and Ariel are really different,maybe Aurora is more a shy tyep,i don't Ariel is bubbly at all. That whould be good . I"ll start the Cinderella Chapter.
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 17, 2008 10:54:18 GMT -5
Chapter 2:A Dream Is Wish Your Heart Makes. ---------------------------------------------------------- Cinderella felt werid and found herself wearing stangr brown and purple rags she never seen before,she was holding a bucket and was near a well,"Jaq? Gus?" she called but they weren't there. "Cinderella!" called a voice,Cinderella looked up and saw the Queen in a balcony,"Cinderella,cleaning the stairs will be a good practice for you,how about you try it? after that come to the dinning room" she said and went inside the castle. Cinderella was confused,"what on earth is going on?" she thought,doves flied to her,Cinderella looked inside the wall,the water and saw someone standing with her,she look near her and saw Prince Charming in a new outfit she never seen. "Charming!" she cried,"Charming?" asked the confused prince,"Don't you remember me? it's me,Cinderella",he looked confused,"No,i"ve never seen you before" he said,"but don't you remember?" she asked,"All i"ll say is that i bring one song" and disappeard,Cinderella was confused. Later the Woodman asked her to come to a little walk in the woods,she tired to found something else to wear and found a nice yellow and blue dress. Cinderella explored the woods and heard a baby bird cry and went to him "now now,what's the matter?" she asked,the bird explained her (since Cinderella knew how to talk to animales) that he lost his mother,Cinderella looked around and he found his nest and parents and flied there,then she saw a shadow near her,she turned around and saw the woodman holding a knife!. She was screamed and try to walked back but the woodman dropped the knife,"what's going on???" she asked "i"m sorry your highness,the Queen wanted me to kill you and i can't!" "what???" asked Cinderella,"you have to run and make sure she won't find you! please hurry! can you forgive me?" he asked crying "of course" she said "now please hurry" he said,"i"m on my way she said and run further and further into the woods,she met a bunch of animales and asked if they can help her find a home,they showed her a little cottage,she walked inside "it's pretty dusty in here,maybe if i"ll clean their house they"ll let me stay,can you help me clean?" she asked the animales,they agreed and cleaned the house,and just as she baked dinner,7 dwarfs walked inside "who are you?" they asked,"my name is Cinderella,a queen wants to kill,can i stay here? i can bake and clean" she asked nicely,"Since someone wants to kill you and you're helping us so much of course you"ll stay" said Doc,"how about we"ll make a party?" asked Happy,"that's a nice idea" said Cinderella. After they danced and Cinderella told them to never give up on their dreams,after that the dwarfs give up on their beds for her. The day after the dwarfs went to work,"Now remember,Cinderella" said Doc "We"ll back at night","Yeah,the Queen might find you here" said Grumpy,"She might come here" agreed Bashful "I"ll be just fine" said Cinderella and waved them goodbye as they waved her and went to work. Cinderella baked a pie when a hag showed up in the window,"What are you baking?" she asked,"Gooseberry pie" Cinderella said,"How about an apple? it's better,how about a free apple?" "Why,that's nice" said Cinderella,she got an apple but the animales came to her "he**... what? POISNED???" asked Cinderella,"Curse you meddlesome animales" said the hag and wanted to leave but Cinderella followed her until they got to a cliff,"Who are you?" asked Cinderella,"I"m the queen you fool! and I"M will be the fairest of all!" said the hag,"what???" asked Cinderella,"You're allways prettier but i"ll make sure i"ll be the fairst of all" and the hag tried to throw apples on her,Cinderella dodged them but the hag tried to make a giant boulder fall on her but the hag falled with the boulder,Cinderella looked down and the dwarfs came,"what happend?" they asked,"it was the queen,she tried to kill me but she killed herself",and then Prince Charming came,"How did you got here?" asked Cinderella happily,"i followed some sprakles and found you here" he said,"sparkles?" she asked "but it dosn't matter,i love you" he said,and as Cinderella and he kissed,something magical happend and Cinderella felt werid. Next chapther:Aurora's.
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 18, 2008 15:46:28 GMT -5
My favorite line. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 19, 2008 13:21:41 GMT -5
I"m glad you like it (you know that she was trying to say hello,right?). Before the next chapter-i want Aurora to kill Ursula,what should i do? make her throw the trident into Ursula or make her destory her shell like in the Broadway musical? .
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 19, 2008 16:01:57 GMT -5
Yes, I know she was trying to say hello. I would make her throw the triton. That's sounds a lot more climatic. Although, if we take Anastasia into account, she did destroy Rasputin's "shell", and it was very climatic, also. I think throwing the triton would be a better idea though.
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Post by PrincessAriel16 on Feb 19, 2008 16:13:10 GMT -5
I would make her throw the triton. That's sounds a lot more climatic. Although, if we take Anastasia into account, she did destroy Rasputin's "shell", and it was very climatic, also. I think throwing the triton would be a better idea though. I think that's a good idea. The throwing of the Trident is better.
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 20, 2008 7:53:09 GMT -5
Yes, I know she was trying to say hello. I would make her throw the triton. That's sounds a lot more climatic. Although, if we take Anastasia into account, she did destroy Rasputin's "shell", and it was very climatic, also. I think throwing the triton would be a better idea though. Yay . Okay,i"ll make her throw the trident .
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 27, 2008 8:32:25 GMT -5
Chapter 3:Once Upon A Dream. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Aurora,felt werid,like she was enchanted like when she touched a spinning wheel and fell asleep and then she found out she's underwater,"Aunt Flora? aunt Founa? aunt Merriweather?" she called and swam up and she found that she's a mermaid with green fins and purple shell bra,she knew it's defintly some spell,"Aurora!" she heard a voice calling and saw a little fish swimming to her "Why,hello there little...." she said but the Flounder said something "Quick! a shark is chasing us!!!" "A shark?" asked Aurora and then she saw a shark swimming to them,"Quick!" she said and they started swimming,Flounder was hit by a mast and fainted,Aurora grabed him and she saw an anchor ring,she had an idea-she swam throught it and the shark was stuck inside,"What happened?" ask Flounder while he woked up,"The shark was chasing us but i got him trapped" explained Aurora,"Then you saved the day" he said happily,"I guess" said Aurora,"Wait,oh no! the concert! we missed it!" said Flounder "Concert?" asked Aurora,"Yeah,your father the king will be angry,quick to the palace!" he swam and Aurora followed,"Maybe the king can help me to set things right" thought Aurora while they got into the Atlantica palace. "Where have you been? in the surface again? you could have been killed or got captured by those horrible humans!!!" said Triton angry in his throne room,"I don't want to go to the surface again" Aurora knew he doesn't understand something and so she left the room,while swimming outside she remembered that Flora,Founa and Merriweather that there's nothing more powerful then a true love's kiss,like when she fell asleep and she and Phillip saved their kingdoms by their true love,she then saw a boat and wanted to look what's inside and so she swam above sea level without knowing that Flounder are following her,above she saw a Phillip! he was wearing strange clothes and played with a dog,then and old man brought a statue,Phillip believed looks like him but Aurora knew it dosn't look like him at all,she wanted to call but then remembered what Triton said "You could have been killed or got captured by those horrible humans!!!!",if Phillip thinks he's someone else-she not sure if Phillip or try to kill her and other merpeople like Triton,a storm came and Phillip fell into the sea,Aurora grabed him and took him to the shore,he was still asleep so Aurora sing to him with her voice and then Grimsby and Max came and Aurora dived into the water and watch where they're going from a rock,now she knows where Phillip and the only way to break this spell is to be with him,but now she has to think how to do so. She swam underwater and Flounder told her to go with her,they swam to a grotto full of human stuff and Flounder brought her a map how to get to the castle where Phillip is,but Triton came angry "So did you saved a human???" he asked "How did you..." asked Aurora but one look on the helpless expression on Sebastian's face told her how Triton found out about it,"I don't want you to go to the surface or to humans at all!!!" he said "Look,you don't understand" said Aurora but Triton said "I know what there is to know and you"ll stay away from them" and after that he destroyed the map and all of the human stuff,Aurora had a strange all of those were belong to someone else "How could you do this???" asked Aurora in anger,when he left she slamed to rock and Triton felt bad,Aurora swam angry,"Child,i didn't wanted to tell! your father about this! i tried to keep this a secret but to he...." said Sebastian but then explained Aurora when she claimed down "It's okay,really,but i need to get to the surface,you don't understand but..." "Did you said you need magic?" swam 2 eels to Aurora "Who are you?" she asked,"We know someone who can help" they said,"How?" she asked,"Ursula had great powers" they said,"The sea witch!? no Aurora! don't..." but he and Flounder got,um,tail gagged by Floatsom and Jetsom,"Let's go to her then" said Aurora,they swam and Aurora followed them but Sebastian tried to stop them,Aurora said they needs to help and she can't explained and they all swam to her cave. Ursula made her a deal-she"ll be a humans for 3 days and needs to get a kiss from Phillip to stay a human forever and she needs to give up on her voice,Aurora's voice was importent since it was gift from Founa but she agreed,Aurora was a human and washed up to the beach near the castle where's Phillip,Phillip found her and she got a pink dress,it wasn't like the dress she got for her 16th brithday but she liked it anyway,Phillip loved her,the next they got a tour and Phillip was in love,they almost got kissed with help from Flounder,Sebastian and Scuttle but boat shaked and the moment was popped like a bubble,the other she woked up went to the beach,Phillip said he made a contest to found the voice of the girl who saved him but didn't and decided to merry but just before they kissed... Ursula came,Aurora turned into a mermaid but she ripped Ursula's shell and got her voice back,Triton came and told Ursula to leave Aurora,Ursula explained him the deal and told him that he should replace her,he agreed and while he turned into a polyp,Ursula was now a queen and she becamed giant,Aurora told Phillip to keep her busy and had a plan,she swam to Flounder,Sebastian and Scuttle,"Look,i have a plan to get the tridet back" she said,"what?" asked Sebastian,"You want to save Atlantica?" she asked "Of course" he said,and she explained them her plan. Phillip tried to crush a ship into Ursula but she created a wave that took him away,"Now!" said Aurora,Aurora threw Sebastian into Ursula's arm while Scuttle and Flounder attcked her face,"Fools!" she said and shaked them off her,"Is this what you can't do? send little animales on me?" asked Ursula "Oh,did you lost something?" asked Aurora,only then Ursula noticed and her smile was erased when she saw the trident in Aurora's hands,"Give it back to me! i"m the queen now" said Ursula,"Here,i"ll GIVE it to you" said Aurora and threw the trident into Ursula and killed her,"Nooooo" said Ursula and died,while all the the polyps and Triton turned back into merpeople,Triton found them "Your highness! Aurora killed Ursula and saved us all!" said Sebastian happily,"Aurora,i"m sorry" said Triton "It's allright,i just to be a human" she said,"To be your true love" said triton,"Uh,yeah" said Aurora,she knew he won't understand she's not his daughter,Aurora was a human again and walked to the beach and found Phillip who woked up,"Aurora!" he said,"Phillip!" she said,Phillip was confused,"You"ll understand later" she said and they kissed,something magical happend and Aurora knew the spell was broken. Next chapters:Arie's.
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 27, 2008 9:17:55 GMT -5
Aw, that was sweet. I really enjoyed that chapter. Can't wait for Ariel's!
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 27, 2008 10:49:49 GMT -5
Thanks did you liked that Aurora has more to do?. Me too .
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Feb 27, 2008 11:31:38 GMT -5
Yes, I really did. I thought this was a fantastic chapter! Good job! Can't wait for Ariel's chapter.
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 27, 2008 11:56:22 GMT -5
Thanks i"m so glad you thinks so it's really good to hear it . I"ll wirte Ariel's later or tomorrow and i"ll started the Narnia\Little Mermaid fanfic .
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 28, 2008 10:36:15 GMT -5
Chapter 4:Part Of Your World. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ariel woked up and found herself in a small cottage wearing a strange purple dress,she felt werid like she's in a spell,she opened the window and saw that she's in woods,"Flounder? Sebastian?" she called but no one answered,she walked down stairs and saw 3 ladies sittting around a table looking at a book and when then they noticed her,they closed the book and walked to her,"Oh,Ariel,why don't to go out for a while?" asked Flora,"Outside?" asked Ariel,"Yes,we needs berries" said Founa,"Lots of berries" add Merriweather and put a basket in her hands while Flora and Founa walked with her outside of the house,Ariel was outside while Flora said "Now dear,don't hurry back dear","and don't go too far" add Merriweather,"And don't speak to strangers" said Flora,Ariel looked confused,"Who are you?" she asked,"Why,don't be silly" said Founa,"It's us-your aunts,Flora,Founa and Merriweather" explained Flora,and Ariel went away,still cofused. Ariel kept walking deeper and deeper into the woods and tried to find an ocean,she knew that she's mistaken to someone else,she only found a small place with water and sat near it,putting her leg inside and animales came,"Oh,hello there" said Ariel while a squirrel sited on her leg and she was petting him,"everything is so confusing" she sighed,they walked around and Ariel saw a castle,wondering who lives there,then some animales came with some strange cloths,"Where did you go that?" asked when then a face she knew came,"Eric!!!" called Ariel,Eric was wearing a strange brown outfit and looked confused,"Eric?" he asked,"Don't you remember me?" she asked,"I know you!" said Eric and just when Ariel smiled he then said "Of course! we met once upon a dream!",Ariel's smile was erased,"You don't remember me" sighed Ariel,"Care for a dance?" he asked,she agreed and then they danced a little,"Gosh,i better get going" said Ariel,remembering Flora,Founa and Merriweather,"But when will i see you again?" asked Eric,"There's a cottage in the middle of the woods,i"ll be there,i guess" said Ariel and went away,when she got back to fairies maked her a cake and a pink dress,"Thanks,buy why did you made this?" asked Ariel,the fairies looked confused "It's your birthday" they said,"Well,i...." said Ariel but then the fairies explained her that she's a princess and her father is King Stefan,Ariel explained she met someone she loves and they said she's already betrothed to a prince named Phillip,Ariel didn't knew what to do now,they told her to change clothes,she changed to the pink dress and they walked to the castle,there they gave her a crown and left her,while Ariel was thinking of escaping she then saw a green bubble float,"What's this?" she asked herself and followed it,she walked into other parts of the castle,she didn't liked the look of the rooms ahead and then she heard the fairies telling her not to touch anything and then Ariel found out that she can't even resist following the bubble and then she saw a spinning wheel,"Touch it" she heard a voice,Ariel tried to stop her herself but couldn't help it and touched the spinning wheel,and then everything glow,she found out a witch is standing near her,the fairies came cofusued,"Ariel? you touch it and you arn't alseep" asked Flora,"Oh,i decided to change the curse,this time you have to wake everyone up!" said Maleficent and left with evil laughter,"How can this be?" asked confoused Merriweather,"She can't do that!" said Founa,"No,she never casted that spell" asked Flora,"Let's go out" said Ariel and walked out,the castle was full of thorns,"Now what?" asked Ariel,"True love's kiss is the most powerful thing" explained Flora,"Can you see your true love?" asked Founa,"Well... look! here's Eric!" she pointed and saw Eric in a rock,"That's prince Phillip" said Merriweather,Ariel knew it's useless to explain them he's not so she just said "Well,let's go","but..." said Merriweather,"You can help me get there",the fairies used their magic to get rid of some thorns and Ariel almost found Eric but then Maleficent came,"No! you can't break my spell!" she said and turned into a giant dragon,"Ariel!" called Founa and the fairies created a sword,Ariel took it and threw it into Maleficent,Maleficent died and fell,Ariel came to Eric and kissed him,the thorns were gone,everybody waked,Eric waked up and said "Hey,it you","Yeah" giggled Ariel and then something like a light was gone from Flora,Founa and Merriweather,"Oh,Aurora,why... who are you?" asked Flora,"Well,my name is Ariel and this over here is Eric,you mistaked me to someone else",the fairies looked confused,"You mean to Aurora? the princess?" asked Founa,"Yeah" said Ariel,"Well,i guess it's some spell" said Merriweather,"Yes" said Flora,"You two kissed to break the spell from you,we"ll be right back","Where are you going?" asked Ariel,"To the bottom of this,thanks for helping" said the fairies,"You're wellcome" said Ariel and the fairies were gone. Ariel and Eric kissed and then Ariel felt okay and then something magical happend. Next chapter:Belle's.
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