PrincessAriel16
Sea Cucumber
"What would I give to live where you are..." ~Brianna~
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Post by PrincessAriel16 on Feb 19, 2008 15:39:14 GMT -5
(Author's Note: This story is supposed to be told to you by Ariel, and is supposed to be about if her mother wasn't the mother-type, and was part evil) Chapter One I don't remember much about it, but at a time, mermaids were allowed to go up to the surface. We had to wear armor. Protective armor. So one day, my mother put me in my armor, but she didn't feel like putting on hers. When we got up to the surface, humans in boats came, holding harpoons and nets. They threw the net at me, and the harpoon at my mother. She was hit, but only slightly. "Come on, Ariel!" she urged me to go, but then, a net came, beside a harpoon, both heading for her. But the net hit her, as the large harpoon missed....again. She was pulled up, and strangely gained legs. And just like that, she climbed up into the boat, treading water. I followed her, until she told a human how much she loved him, and she never wanted to go back to being a mermaid again. The two walked into a cabin and locked the door, and you wouldn't want to know what was going on in there. I was shocked..... (to be continued)
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PrincessAriel16
Sea Cucumber
"What would I give to live where you are..." ~Brianna~
Posts: 221
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Post by PrincessAriel16 on Feb 20, 2008 15:16:07 GMT -5
Chapter Two My mother came out, turned back into a mermaid, and told me, "Get lost, kid." Just then, a little seahorse came and said, "Queen Athena, you must come down at once!" He was holding a scroll in his hands. "So what?" she said. "So what's it to me? I don't care." The little seahorse gasped. "Why, Your Majesty, you aren't wearing armor! You'll die!" "And, so what?" the Queen snapped. "Why do you care? Now go away, and leave me alone with my darling, adorable, daughter." Darling? Adorable? That was an upgrade from the week before's "worthless, spoiled little brat". We both swam until my mother returned to her normal state. She told me to take out her armor. I obeyed. "Ariel, you can't tell anyone about what happened. I really do love you. And I love William." "Who's William?" "The human. " "But...but...he tried to kill you!" I studdered. "Never mind. Go to your room and stay there. But don't even think about following me or telling anyone!" I pretended to obey, but instead, I followed her, as she left, in her armor. I followed not closely, but not far. If she swam through a reef, I did too. I finally got up to the surface with her in front of me. In an instant, she, transformed into a human, wearing a black gown. It turned out that William, the himan, had died. One less thing to worry about. She was going to a funeral? I went back home, releived. It wasn't until later when it hit me: my mother, Queen Athena, was on seaweed. Oh gosh. If you asked her where she was going, she laughed like a fool and said her alphabet backwards. The plant itself isn't dangerous, it's just that she had been eating it, and wearing it as make-up too much. It effects you in a weird way. (to be continued)
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Post by tnadav1 on Feb 29, 2008 10:10:58 GMT -5
Ah,neat story thought i didn't liked how she treats Ariel. I loved the sea hourse . Seaweed? you don't mean.....? .
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Post by seaking89 on Mar 3, 2008 14:02:53 GMT -5
Great story. I can't wait to read more.
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Post by pokeria1 on Mar 4, 2008 18:56:01 GMT -5
^Umm... Seaking89, I hate to break it to you, but, I don't think we'll get anymore of this fanfic. I mean, PrincessAriel16 quit the forums, so It's unlikely she would be adding in anymore chapters.
And Tnaday, could this... Seaweed... that Ariel was referring to... could that have been... um... you know... the Merperson version of "weed" (you know... That illegal... um... thing.)
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Post by tnadav1 on Mar 5, 2008 7:49:20 GMT -5
You means.. drugs? . Why did she left? .
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Post by pokeria1 on Mar 5, 2008 20:40:44 GMT -5
You means.. drugs? . Why did she left? . Yeah... let's just say drugs... also, err... You DID see the Autograph from Ariel thread in the "Atlantica" boards, Right? Because if you did see it recently, you'll see the reason why.
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Post by tnadav1 on Mar 10, 2008 10:51:30 GMT -5
Okay . Well,i was in that thread but i still don't understand why she left does it really matters if Ariel from DisneyLand worth it? .
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Post by UmbrellaFish on Mar 14, 2008 10:27:41 GMT -5
Well, people stopped trusting her because she lied to us, not just about Ariel signing it. It was less about the Ariel autograph rather than the lie she told to cover it up.
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Post by tnadav1 on Mar 14, 2008 10:31:55 GMT -5
Ah,okay thanks for explaining .
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