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Post by seaking89 on Feb 28, 2008 3:05:42 GMT -5
Mermaid of my Heart
She swam by my boat one day, as beautiful as can be.
With hair of red, a smile as bright as the stars, and eyes as blue as the sea.
She dove through the wave, very quick and with much ease.
And when she saw me watching she continued her water dance, for she saw that I was pleased.
Then I closed my eyes and dreamed of us on the shore, where the waves crashed, the sun shone and trouble was no more.
We sat on the beach and looked out at the beauty of the sea.
And then I looked into her eyes and asked, "do you want to spend forever with me"
"Yes sweet prince", she answered. "From you I shall never part."
And then we dove into the sea, wild, happy and free.
Soon to reach her kingdom where we would forever be.
Then I opened my eyes to find her still there, and I knew in an instant, my life, she would forever share.
And so my tale ends happily as a new journey I now start. For I know my love will always be with me, my mermaid of my heart.
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Post by Jazzy on Feb 29, 2008 23:33:21 GMT -5
Aww that is such a sweet poem Marc! Well done.
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Post by WickedElphie on Mar 1, 2008 0:23:39 GMT -5
Very cute! Almost a mix of Little Mermaid and Splash in plot.
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Post by Rena Bam Bena x3 on Mar 1, 2008 16:27:36 GMT -5
Cute! Keep up the amazing work :]
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Post by rosa on Mar 19, 2008 8:40:02 GMT -5
Oh, that was so sweet! I especially liked this part: Then I closed my eyes and dreamed of us on the shore, where the waves crashed, the sun shone and trouble was no more.
Amazing job done!
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