The Little Mermaid and Narnia Crossover Fanfic

[tnadav1]

This is just the beginning of the fanfic,can you help me in the story? .
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Chapter 1:Beginning.
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Ariel's sisters were getting ready for the splash fair,but Ariel didn't showed up yet,"Has anyone seen Ariel?" asked Aquata "It's almost time to go to the fair!","Don't worry,i"m sure she's on her way" said Arista and Ariel came,"Hi" she said,"Ariel,we need to go already,are you ready?" asked Attina,"I guess" said Ariel,"Then can you help us get ready? can you bring me a starfish from the clam?" asked Adella,"Okay" said Ariel and opened the clam,"What is that light?" she asked,"What are you talking about?" asked Adella and she also saw the werid light coming from the clam,when all the sisters came along-they found themselfs in a different place,it was a frozen sea.
"Where are we and how did we got here?" asked Andrina,"I don't know" said Ariel "But look!" she saw something on the surface and started swimming there,"Ariel! we can't go to the surface! father said..." said Aquata but Ariel then said "Oh,Aquata! we got to a strange place buy opening a clam!" and was on the surface,"Yeah,come on" said Andrina and they all swam to the surface,in the land near them they saw a lion.
"Gretting" said the lion.

[UmbrellaFish]

Can't wait to hear the rest!

[tnadav1]

Thanks .
I"m thinking of a way to explain why the Witch needs some gem and Ariel and the sisters will have to get it and bring it to Aslan,i thought maybe she can make Narnia creatures obey her,any ideas? .

[UmbrellaFish]

That sounds like a good idea! To be truthful, I don't much about the land of Narnia, and I've only read books 1,2, and 6.

[tnadav1]

Okay,i"ll use it .
You read The Lion,The Witch and the Wardrobe,Prince Caspian and The Magician's Nephew?.

[UmbrellaFish]

I've read The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, The Magician's Newphew, and The Silver Chair (I believe that's number six?). I read a little of The Horse and His Boy, and I'm thinking about reading Prince Caspian. I also read the ending of The Last Battle!

[tnadav1]

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Chapter 2:A Mission From Aslan
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"Who are you?" asked Ariel,"My name is Aslan,i"m the lion who created the land of Narnia" he explained,"Narnia?" asked Attina,"Yes,this land,you're in another world,i"ve sent you here to a mission" said Aslan,"What it is?" asked Ariel,"You see,an evil witch seeks a gem that i"ve hidden underwater after King Frank found it long ago,only you can find the gem,if she"ll find it all of the Narnia creatures will obey her" he explained,"We"ll be happy to help" said Ariel,"Wait" said Alana,"We can help but why us?" she asked,"All of sea creatures of Narnia left after the Witch's spell that got Narnia frozen and also a witch from your world is helping her" he explained,"You mean Ursula?" asked Arista,"Yes,i"ll bring you a map which shows the gem's location",and a map appeared,Aquata took it,"We"ll be going there" she said,"Wait" said Adella "We won't be in the fair? otherwise our father will be angry" she said,"Don't worry about that,you"ll understand later" said Aslan,"Let's go" said Ariel and they swam away,"Good luck" said Aslan and disappeard,the mersisters got underwater.
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[UmbrellaFish]

That's really good tnaday1! I'm intrested in reading the rest!

[tnadav1]

Thanks i"ll make another chapter.

flounderfish said:

I've read The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, The Magician's Newphew, and The Silver Chair (I believe that's number six?). I read a little of The Horse and His Boy, and I'm thinking about reading Prince Caspian. I also read the ending of The Last Battle!

Oh ,i read all the books in the order they were released,not really by a chronicle order,LWW,Silver Chair and Prince Caspian are the best IMO,you"ll have fun reading Prince Caspian ,the Last Battle is nice thought the ending kinda sukcs.
So you know who King Frank is,right? .
I"m thinking if incolding the children from LWW,thought this fanfic is before LWW and after Magician's Newphew .

[UmbrellaFish]

Now, I know who King Frank is (thank you, Wikipedia!). But now I do remember reading that it The Magician's Newphew. I read the book about two years ago, so my memory's a little hazy.
If the story takes place after Magician's Newphew, and before LWW, I don't think I would include the Pevensie children. Your call, though.

[tnadav1]

Ah,okay .
I thought about a sequel and maybe inculde them (thought i need a story line).

[tnadav1]

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Chapter 3:An Evil Deal.
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The White Witch was sitting near a frozen,thinking how she could get the gem,"Do you needs some help?" called a voice,the witch turned saw a sea witch and her eels coming from the water,"Who are you and what are you doing in my kingdom?" asked the witch,"Why i heard you needs some help and came" said Ursula "Don't you want help? i can make a deal with you","What kind of a deal?" asked,"I can find a way for you to breath underwater" explained Ursula,"Go on" said Jadies,"But you must give me something for this" said Ursula,"And that whould be?" asked Jadies,"A potion like the one that helped you creat your wand" said Ursula,"I see,but why do you need that?" asked Jadies,"It's for something that will help me in the world where i come from,have we go a deal?" said Ursula,"Agree,i"ll get your potion" said Jadies,"I"ll wait here" said Ursula while Jadies left.
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