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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 2, 2011 19:59:45 GMT -5
great chapter. i just waiting with agony to find out what happens.
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Post by daytripper on Jan 2, 2011 21:02:02 GMT -5
Ariel fell asleep in Eric’s arms he stayed awake a little longer before also succumbing to sleep. When she woke it was midday and there was a man standing in front of her looking at her his mouth agape he was old and tall. H was skinny and didn’t have any muscles and had gray hair. She looked to see she was still with Eric and that he was asleep. Wait someone was looking at her! She realized that there was a human watching her for the first time. She wiggled around trying to wake up Eric. He would protect her right? Eric grunted waking up he looked to see Grimsby staring at him with wide eyes he realized Ariel had fallen asleep and failed to wake up to leave. She was now trapped as Grimsby blocked the way to the sea. Ariel rolled off of Eric’s lap and hid behind him. “E-E-e-e-e-ERIC” he stuttered walking towards Eric slowly his hands were trembling. He never believed the sailors stories about the merpeople but here one was sleeping with Eric. Now he realized why he didn’t want to see any more suitors at all he had already found his girl. She was beautiful too Grimsby began to settle down a bit but he was still unnerved by what he saw. “Eric what are you doing?” he said with a hint of hysteria in his voice. She was having some sort of staring contest with Ariel both of them never took their eyes off each other. Eric was about to respond when he saw a small red crab running towards them. “AAAAARRRIIIEELLLLLL” he cried running around like a lunatic in every which direction. When we finally made his way over to Ariel he turned to face Grimsby for a second looking him up and down before turning to face Ariel. “Ariel you fadder is coming you you you you got to hide!” he said looking around franticly. He knew her father was going to do something bad. “How did he find out I was up here?” she said eying the crab suspiciously. He smiled nervously then averted his gaze. “Well your fadder was worried when you never came home… we were all worried so we felt we had to tell him. We thought something had happened to you Ariel” he said. Now Eric was worried he always wanted to meet the ruler of the seas but not under these circumstances and he also had a feeling he didn’t like humans all too much. Ariel barely had time to react the next thing she knew there was someone emerging from the depths of the sea. Ariels first instinct was to protect Eric so she got in front of him so her father couldn’t blast him with the trident. “ARIEL” he roared “GET AWAY FROM HIM” he said raising his trident with one hand. Grimsby ran away not wanting to be a part of this he hid behind a nearby rock. “NO DADDY” Ariel yelled back. Triton was taken aback from her reply. Seeing as how she was not moving he lowered his trident. “Ariel don’t be foolish he’s a human you’re a mermaid” he said pointing his finger at her and waving it up and down to emphasize his point. Ariel shook her head. “I don’t care and neither does he” she said now hugging a terrified Eric. He hugged her back trying to be as calm as possible. “So help me Ariel if you don’t come back her right now ill ill…” he started. “Do what? Throw me in jail? Blast me with your trident? What daddy?” she said surprising herself at what she just said. Tears were now running down her beautiful face Eric hated so see her like this so he instinctively brought he closer to him and kissed her on the head. Triton was shocked that this human was showing such affection to her. Triton didn’t know what to do he was so confused, angry, hurt, and shocked at what was happening. He was about to blast the both of them right there on the spot but he saw his daughters surface in front of him. The six merprincesses all swam over to their father. “Daddy please he’s not as bad as you think! He doesn’t eat fish, he loves Ariel daddy please give him a chance” they all pleaded. Triton sighed he was outnumbered. But what made him agree to give him a chance was the fact his daughters who weren’t fond of the human world all stood up for a human. Triton raised his trident and shot a blast at Ariels tail. Ariel and Eric hugged each other and looked away fearing that the blast was supposed to destroy them. After a while when they realized they were still alive they opened their eyes to find Ariels tail gone. It was replaced by a pair of human legs. Ariel smiled at her father widely triton tried his best to smile but only succeeded changing his angry look to a sad look. “You have three days. If Ariel is unhappy or hurt ill change her back and take her with me forever. If you succeed however ill let her stay human permanently” he said turning around so that they wouldn’t see his tears. Meanwhile Ursula was beating her head against her potion cabinet. “NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” she screamed how had this happened? She punched the wall of her cave as hard as she could but only succeeded in splitting open her hand. She fell to the floor crying to herself now I’ll never get the trident she thought. Four days later Ariel and Eric were married.
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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 2, 2011 21:27:58 GMT -5
i like how you put it. keep it up.
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Post by Ariel on Jan 2, 2011 21:50:24 GMT -5
I love it wonderful job
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Post by josh89 on Jan 3, 2011 0:14:50 GMT -5
i love it..but does it have to end there =( i loved ariel's sisters
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Post by daytripper on Jan 3, 2011 0:26:17 GMT -5
i love it..but does it have to end there =( i loved ariel's sisters sorry but yes i kinda messed up the way they meet dont worry ill write another one just like it soon
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Post by ღAmiღ on Jan 4, 2011 5:54:51 GMT -5
This is GREAT! Best TLM Fanfic I've read Keep Writing more please~
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Post by daytripper on Jan 4, 2011 14:51:31 GMT -5
This is GREAT! Best TLM Fanfic I've read Keep Writing more please~ oh thank you that really means alot!
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