Ariel and Eric's meeting

[daytripper]

now before anyone says anything i know this has been done before but i havent been satisfied with the outcome. in the next few hours i am going to post the start to what i hope will be another great story (those following my little mermaid in the 21st century tory DONT WORRY i am going to work on it as well) so the idea behind ths story is what would happen if Eric woke up when Ariel was singing and saw she was a mermaid. would they still get married? would trident still make ariel human? stay tuned to find out!!!!!

[daytripper]

Ariel and Eric

…Ariel sat there on the beach looking at the prince. She had never felt like this towards anyone before she was in love. She looked longingly into his eyes she was tired having swum with the unconscious prince all the way to land. Scuttle landed on the beach next to the prince.
“Is he… dead?” she asked the bird fearing the fate of her prince. Scuttle walked over to the prince and pressed his ear to his foot.
“Oh… I cant make out a heartbeat” he said softy and sadly shaking his head. Ariel felt tears begin to form in her eyes before she noticed him moving.
“No look… he’s breathing!” she said picking a piece of his hair and moving it out of his face. “He’s so beautiful” she whispered to herself.
“What would I give
To live where you are?
What would I pay
To stay here beside you?
What would I do to see you
Smiling at me?

Where would we walk?
Where would we run?
If we could stay all day in the sun?
Just you and me
And I could be
Part of your world” she sang.
Eric was now awake and looking at the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. The sun was blocked by her head creating a halo and making her whole body glow. She was touching the side of his face and he reached up to hold her hand. When he grabbed it her eyes widened an fear and shock.
She was now looking at him and he looking at her. This is bad Ariel thought to herself really really bad!
“You…you saved me” he said smiling never taking his eyes off her. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen she backed away from him up the beach. Eric was blocking the way to the ocean. She hit her back against a rock pain flared up her back.
“Wait please don’t go!!” he said reaching out to grab her. She was trapped but he obviously hadn’t seen her tail yet. She tried to evade him she crawled as fast as she could around Eric who was starting to get up. Once he was fully standing up he looked down at her and saw her tail.
“YOU-yo-u-your-you’re a mermaid” he said in shock and disbelief. “He he I always wanted to meet a mermaid” he said to himself before closing his eyes and falling onto the beach. He was unconscious from the shock of what just happened. Ariel was startled by what just happened and crawled over to him slowly checking to see if he was alive. She needed to get out of here before someone comes looking for Eric! She quickly jumped back in the water and swam out to a rock that she used in the past for spying.
“When you fadder hears about this he’s gonna kill me… you know dat right Ariel?” he said looking up at her. Ariel glared down at the crab causing him to shink back. Her look told him he would never speak of this to her father.
When Eric woke up his head hurt but more importantly he remembered what had just happened. I looked at the imprints in the sand which confirmed his memory. “A mermaid” he said to himself. He walked out into the water to see if she was still watching him.
Ariel saw him coming closer she ducked down behind the rock and swam around to the other side so he wouldn’t see her if he walked by. She held her breath her heart was pounding she could hear him talking to himself.
“TO think I was saved by a mermaid uh grimms not going to believe this!” he said to himself walking over to a large rock which he figured was perfect for hiding. Soon he had to start swimming and when he reached the rock he held on to the edge thinking to himself.
“She was so… beautiful though I wish I could have known her name” he said sadly to himself sighing. Ariel caught her breath… beautiful? He wasn’t disturbed by the fact she was a mermaid? She had so many thoughts and emotions racing through her head. Of course he liked her that’s why he was looking for her all the way out here! She thought. She didn’t realize that he had climbed on top of the rock and was now looking out towards the sea. He cupped his hands over his mouth and yelled “Hello? I know you’re out there please come out I won’t hurt you!” he said sincerely. Ariel hesitated before slowly coming out from behind the rock Eric didn’t see her at first because she was off to the side and he was looking out at the sea. When we finally did see her he was surprised “Ah” he yelped jumping backwards falling off the rock. Ariel giggled at the sight she sounded so beautiful to him he smiled floating there looking up at the sky arms outstretched in the water.
“Are you okay?” came her beautiful voice as she appeared above him pulling him upright. He smiled at her red hair was floating on the surface of the water.
“You’re so… beautiful” he said softly staring at her smiling warmly. She blushed was this really happening? Could it be? Did he really like her? She looked back at him.
“What’s your name?” he asked still smiling he found her hand underwater and held it. Her skin was so soft and smooth.
“I-i-i-um- its Ariel” she stuttered looking at Eric with big blue eyes. She realized he also had blue eyes and they were looking at her with such… love. She wanted to squeal with joy but held her composure.
“Ariel… such a beautiful name” he said with soft eyes. The way he had said beautiful made her blush she knew he meant it. She pulled her intertwined hand out of the water and looked at his and her hand locked together.
“Why did you save me?” he asked her softly looking at her hand. Oh how she longed to tell him she loved him and couldn’t watch him drown. She decided against it though.
“I saw your ship sink and I couldn’t let you drown… I mean um wait” she said thinking of an excuse.
“You loved me?” he asked raising and eyebrow catching on to her confusion and distress he had seen it before in many women. Ariel bit her bottom lip and very slowly nodded her head in confirmation.
“You don’t like me though because I’m a mermaid right?” she asked slowly trying to move away turning her head away from her. He pulled her closer to him assuring her he liked her.
“Ariel I could care less” he said leaning forward closing his eyes. Ariel leaned forward too and closed her eyes. When their lips met it was absolutely amazing her lips were soft and moist and for some reason tasted like lipstick. Ariel swam there trying not to cry, her dreams had come true! For what seemed like a minute he held her there each enjoying the kiss before they finally pulled away.
“Eric” she whispered tears streaming down her face. She leaned in and kissed him again much to his joy. That’s when Sebastian came to see were Ariel was. She had told him to head home and she would be there shortly but when he realized she wasn’t following him he had turned around to find her.
“ARIEL! WHAT ARE YOU…?” the crab trailed off when he realized he was talking in front of a human.
“A talking crab” said Eric smiling. He laughed to himself before slapping himself hard in the face.
“Eric!” Ariel cried.
“Nope not dreaming” he said to himself. “I’m sorry Ariel this is just so… surreal to me” he said.
“Ariel what are you doing kissing a human?” he said. Ariel flicked him off the rock with her finger.
“AHHHHHHHHHHH” Sebastian screamed flying through the air.
Look I’ve got to go” she said sadly. Eric frowned he looked really sad.
“When will I see you again?” he asked his blue eyes growing sad and soft.
“Meet me on the beach tonight” she said. Pointing towards where she had sang to him.
And with that she dove beneath the waves leaving Eric to his thoughts.

[daytripper]

PLEASE COMMENT

[Ariel]

I'm really enjoying this story it is So sweet!
Please continue i love it

[daytripper]

what can i say.... I'm a natural lol thanks i feel like i messed up with the meeting but mabey ill make a different version when im done with this one

[josh89]

i love it ! you never fail me man ! keep it up

[danielle1982]

i cant wait to read the rest of the story. please keep writing.

[daytripper]

you guys rock stay online or check back in an hour or two and ill have then next chapter up

[danielle1982]

i cant wait to read the next chapter. i was just wondering will you put it on fanfiction.net and if you do alot more people will read.

[daytripper]

i dont know i will need to make an account its a good site though

[daytripper]

Ariel was ecstatic he kissed her he kissed her she thought to herself twirling herself around in the water she couldn’t wait to see him again. she swam home and tried to make herself more pretty and presentable she picked a seaflower and put it in her hair. She began humming to herself and on her way into the palace bumped into her father!
“Oh um hi daddy” she said uneasily. Triton could tell his daughter was hiding something from him. But today he wasn’t in the mood to berate her with questions.
“Hello Ariel” he said smiling. Ariel tried not to look him in the face. But she was good at lying so quickly thought of an excuse for her behavior.
“Daddy um I was wondering if… tonight I could stay out… just a little bit longer than usual?” she said looking him in the eyes with her puppy dogfish face. It was usually enough to melt anyone heart. Except her fathers.
“What for?” he asked suspicious. Why did Ariel want to stay out late? This wasn’t like her.
“I wanted to go and try and find some shells that are said to glow in the dark” said Ariel. It wasn’t a total lie she did want to find one and they do exist her father knew that. Triton immediately lost his suspicion he knew she was telling the truth that the shells couldn’t be found in the daytime.
“I don’t know Ariel” he said rubbing hi chin thinking. He knew his daughter would be fine but then what father would he be if he didn’t put up a fight? He didn’t want his daughter thinking she could do whatever she wanted (even though she could).
“Please daddy ill take flounder with me” she said looking at him with big blue eyes. Triton knew he couldn’t win he sighed.
“Alright but be back before sunrise you still need sleep” he said smiling. Ariel squealed and gave him a hug.
“I find one for you don’t worry” she said smiling widely. Now she had to figure out how to find the shells and be with Eric or the maximum time possible.
Her father swam away and Ariel breathed a sigh of relief and thanks. She thought to herself and when an idea came across she smiled and swam out to go find flounder and Sebastian.
“NO I won’t do it Ariel” said Sebastian. Ariel had tried to convince him and flounder to find the shells for her but to no avail. She sighed to herself tears began to well up in her eyes she looked away from them. She would have to cancel her meeting with Eric in order to find the stupid shells she couldn’t come home empty handed could she?
“Ariel?” he asked. She was crying but didn’t realize it.
“What?” she said sharply surprising herself as well as flounder and Sebastian. Sebastian sighed and shook his head what a soft shell I’m turning out to be he thought to himself.
“Fine Ariel ill help you this once” he said sincerely. Flounder didn’t want Ariel to go but he also didn’t want to be bored tonight.
“Fine ill go too” he said upset that Ariel was upset. “But before I do I want to meet this human make sure he’s good and stuff” said flounder not realizing what he just said. Wait humans eat fish! He thought. Oh man!
“You guys are the best I knew I could always count on you!” she said giving them a big hug.
That night after dinner Ariel flounder and Sebastian swam up to the surface. There was a full moon out tonight and it looked so beautiful. She had only recently found out what a full moon was during an incident with Sebastian and magic a year ago. She scanned the shore looking for the man she loved. Sure enough there he was dressed in fresh… what are they called? Oh well she’ll just ask Eric about it. She jumped in and out of the water over to Eric who was waiting with a smile on his face.
Eric was watching the stars when he heard the sound of slashing in the distance. He got up to see Ariel jumping in and out of the water like a dolphin coming towards him. He smiled admiring how beautiful she was and how the moonlight danced on her tail. He wished that he could join her and they could live together under the sea. Leave his castle and “Royal duties” and spend the rest of his days with Ariel.
When she got close to the shore Eric took off his boots and shirt and jumped in the water swimming over to her. Ariel admired how he looked without a shirt but was surprised when she saw he had hair on his chest. She shrugged it off and admired how muscular he was. Swimming over to him they met not too far from shore at least that is Eric could stand up on his legs. They stared at each other for a moment smiling before Eric came over picked her up and gave her a kiss. The sensation was once again wonderful even though they were from different worlds, different cultures, different religions the kiss seemed right and normal and… wonderful. They broke for air before Ariel leaned in again to kiss him this time she deepened the kiss her tongue exploring his mouth his tongue exploring hers.
They broke to catch their breath they were now gasping for air. Not because they couldn’t breathe but because of the pure ecstasy.
“Ariel” said Eric looking lovingly into her eyes. He knew that she was the best girl for him and would never let her go even if the people disagreed with him marrying a mermaid. He decided to wait a few more days though to see if she really was the right girl for him.
“Eric” she said brushing her red hair out of her face. She stared into his deep blue eyes getting lost in them before coming back to reality when something pulled on her flukes. They were almost neck deep in water Eric was neck deep but Ariel had the advantage of being a mermaid so she was also neck deep even though she was shorter than Eric.
“Eric there’s someone I want you to meet” said Ariel ducking her head beneath the waves. Flounder who had reconsidered tried to turn around and swim away but was caught by Ariel. The fish crossed his arms.
“No fair” he muttered to himself. Ariel resurfaced and brought flounder to the surface holding him with both hands. He was directly in front of Eric who smiled at him and reached up to pet him.
“Hey I’m not a dogfish” he said raising his fin at Eric. He covered his mouth in fear oh no what if he made the human angry? Will he eat him?
“Whoa cool he can talk too!” he said being face to face with a talking fish was pretty cool but he said it more out of shock than actually meaning it. Ariel moved flounder out of the way so she could see Eric. When she released flounder he quickly swam behind her head. Ariel giggled watching him hide in her hair.
“Well do you have a name?” he asked flounder directly feeling he would offend him if he asked Ariel. Flounder was actually surprised he was treating him like a person.
“I’m flounder” he stuttered. “You you aren’t going to eat me are you?” he asked cautiously swimming out from behind Ariels hair.
“Why would I do that?” he asked smiling. Flounder smiled back too.
“He’s okay Ariel” he said. Ariel laughed at his statement. Flounder said that he had to go and look for the shells with Sebastian. He swam off in a hurry leaving Ariel and Eric alone together with hours to spend with each other.

[daytripper]

"its a 106 miles to chicago we got a full tank of gas, half a pak of cigarettes, its dark and we're wearing sunglasses."
"hit it!"

[daytripper]

working on the next chapter now

[josh89]

Awesome

[danielle1982]

i cant wait to the next chapter.

[daytripper]

She swam closer to Eric who was happy being in Ariels presence and wrapped her arms around his neck. Eric smiled and slowly leaned in his heart racing he loved her to death and he realized he still hadn’t told her even though she admitted to him she loved him. She their lips met it was as if Eric had struck gold every alarm in his body was ringing and crying out in joy. he allowed Ariel to deepen the kiss their tongues once again exploring each other’s mouth. The world melted away and there was only the two of them nothing else mattered except each other. It was because of this fact that she didn’t see her sister poking their heads out from behind the rock. Their jaws agape at what they saw their sister getting it on with from their vantage point a merman. They watched silently as the two lovers made out.
Eric moved away from Ariels lips to her neck gently kissing it Ariel closed her eyes and gave out silent cries of pleasure. When they stopped Ariel was sweating and gasping for breath. She had never felt a sensation like that before. She then got playful with Eric and jumped on him laughing sending them both in the water Eric legs above the water his entire body upside down. He watched Ariel swimming and he realized she looked even more beautiful at home in her natural environment.
The sisters gasped when they saw the feet. They had suspected he was human but actually finding out still came as a surprise. How could their little sister do that? She betrayed her family and why was this human showing such love and affection towards their little sister? Didn’t he know she was a mermaid? It will never work out. They choose to remain hidden and see what would happen.
Eric surfaced for a breath he stood there gasping the warm water surrounding his entire being. Ariel popped up right beside him he smiled and looked deep into her eyes.
“Ariel… I love you” he said softly, warmly, tenderly, and lovingly. She had known for a while that he liked her but she never imagined she would ever hear him say those words. It brought tears of joy to her eyes to finally hear those words even though they met this morning it seemed like they knew each other forever.
“Oh Eric” she said embracing him in a kiss. The world melted away again and it was just them together forever. She knew he loved her for her and that was all that mattered. When they broke Eric picked her up bridal style and twirled her around laughing. They were in waist deep water now no longer up to their necks.
“Eric I tricked my father into letting me stay out late tonight. So I can be with you even longer” she said. He was still holding her in his arms and began to smile at the thought of her lying to her father just to stay with him.
“Well I thank you for that” he said giving her a kiss on the cheek. “By the way who it your father?” Eric asked still smiling.
“King Triton” she said as if it wasn’t a big deal. Eric’s jaw dropped KING… TRITON? Are you kidding me? She’s a princess that’s perfect! One more reason why he could marry her.
“Eric?” she asked realizing he was shocked. “Are you okay?” she asked scared he wouldn’t like her because she was the daughter or the sea king.
“Your king tritons daughter?” he asked. Ariel nodded her head and smiled.
“You’ve heard of him?” she asked. She was quite curious as to how humans knew of him but one thing was certain her father wouldn’t like the fact humans knew about him.
“He’s a legend…a…a…a…a…a myth!” he said stunned.
“MYTH?” she said playfully but still a little hurt by that. She knew it was better that way but it still felt bad how could she be a myth? Oh if only the humans could know!
“So…you’re a princess!” he said smiling again.
“Yhea but I never really cared about it that much” she said stating the truth. She never really thought about being a princess she was just Ariel to her.
“Finally a princess who’s not stuck up” he said caringly. Ariel blushed and turned away.
“Aw thank you Eric” she said. they were so caught up talking that they failed to realize the large wave that had swept up her sisters and was heading towards them.
“AHHH” Eric cried caught off guard. The next thing he knew he was tumbling around and kept crashing into Ariel… and something else. When they wave crashed on the beach it dumped him, Ariel, and her sisters all along the shore.
Ariel gasped then got red in the face when she saw her sisters strewn along the beach.
“What are you doing spying on me!” she said angrily. How could they how long were they there for?
“What the…” said Eric staring at the six mermaids on the beach. Now there were seven mermaids? How many more were there?
“Ariel! When father hears of this he going to… I don’t know what he’ll do but it won’t be good!” said Arista picking seaweed out of her hair.
“Oh please don’t tell daddy he won’t understand… you don’t understand I love him… and he loves me too!” she said hugging Eric while looking at her sisters. Eric nodded his head in confirmation he couldn’t believe he was staring at six princesses.
“Um… hello” he said weakly after a long silence. All the sisters glared at him with hate causing him to shrink back. But he also saw they were scared of him he realized he shouldn’t scare them away or they might go tell their father he attacked them… and that would be bad.
“Why don’t you like humans?” he asked. He knew the answer but wanted to see what they would say.
“You eat fish” they said flatly. Watching his every move. He smiled and shook his head.
“No I don’t… not after I met Ariel that is… humans don’t know any better we don’t know what goes on in the sea” he said trying to explain. They looked him up and down trying to see if he was lying. Their faces softened and Eric breathed a sigh of relief however they were still pretty tense.
“So you mean to tell us you gave up eating fish for Ariel?” Adella asked. Eric smiled them happily shook his head.
“Well then I guess your okay with me” she said instantly changing the mood. Wow that was quick Eric thought to himself.
Flounder and Sebastian surfaced carrying three glow shells. Sebastian took one look at the merprincesses on the beach and his jaw dropped. Oh no! he thought picking up his jaw and shaking his head. There was no way they could keep this secret from the king.

[Ariel]

Wonderful Chapter. I love that Ariel's sisters are in the story

[danielle1982]

the story is great. keep it up and i cant wait for the next chapters to see what will happen next. what do you have in mind for the next chapters.

[daytripper]

“So Ariel how’s he with kissing?” Attina asked smiling. She other princesses smiled leaning closer so they could hear. Ariel blushed and realized they were watching for a long time. Eric also blushed realizing what was going on.
“That’s none of your business! She said flipping sand in their face with her tail. Eric smiled at the sight her using her tail it seemed so weird to him that it was funny. But he still loved her with all his heart and nothing would change that.
“My hair!” Attina exclaimed brushing the sand off her. She gave Ariel a dirty look and Ariel gave her one right back. Sebastian walked over to Ariel carrying one of the extra shells.
“Thank you Sebastian” she said politely. She took the shell from the crab who was grumbling to himself. The shell glowed a faint red just like Ariels hair. She smiled at Eric and gave him the shell.
“Here take it to remember me by” she said softly so her sisters would have a hard time hearing. Eric took the shell with both hands admiring it he had never seen anything like it in his life. He looked at Ariel then at the shell “It’s beautiful… just like you” he said softly in her ear. She couldn’t take it anymore she didn’t care if her sisters were watching she put her hand on Eric’s cheek and turned his head so it was in the best position. She leaned in and kissed his sweet lips her sisters watched on in awe at what was happening.
“WOW” Aquata said. It was really all she could say she had never seen anything like it before the love they showed each other. She decided that she had to help Ariel one way or another.
“Come on girls let Ariel enjoy the rest of her night” she said softly crawling back into the water. Her sisters all followed although somewhat reluctant to leave her with a human even though they knew he wasn’t like the rest of the humans.
They departed saying good night to Ariel. When they were gone Ariel turned to Eric smiling her beautiful smile. She traced her fingers along his face thinking o how beautiful he was and what she would give just to be with him on land forever. She looked down at her tail moving it around admiring the way it looked in the moonlight. Her green scales shifted with each movement bits of sand sticking to scales.
“I’ve never seen anything more beautiful” he said softly in her ear. She smiled at him and sat there with him for the rest of the night she was sitting on his lap his legs outstretched on the beach facing the water. She rested her head on his shoulder and stared out at the sea watching the moon rise. It was a beautiful night but under water a certain sea witch was annoyed.
“ARR how did this happen how is he so calm about her being a mermaid? How does he still love her? She asked annoyed. The brat had ruined her plans he wasn’t supposed to wake up while she was singing! Now how was she going to get the trident? Unless… she turned Eric into a merman and had him take the trident for her? No Ariel was sure to see him she says hello to practical everyone each morning. And besides he would probably go find her to help him get it and ruin the plans. No there had to be another way! but how?

[Ariel]

This is great! I can't wait to see what happens next