Storm Scene (a poem in palindrome)

[alan]

Flying or swimming flocks and herds
Defying gravity both fish and birds

Blue skies below or above clear seas
To and fro, dancing with ease

Slumbering seas with water lulling
Lumbering ships upon breezes dulling

Vapid Silence to violence rapid

Grumbling currents upon oceans scourging
Tumbling winds with sails surging

Crashing waves, frightening
Thrashing swells and lightening

Overboard! Man, a Prince.
Life to death-near?
A sailor of soul, saved.
Saviour, a Mermaid.
~~Ariel~~
Mermaid, a saviour!
Saved, soul of sailor.
A near-death to life
Prince,
a man overboard.

Lightening and swells trashing
Frightening waves crashing

Surging sails with winds tumbling
Scourging oceans upon currents grumbling

Rapid violence to silence vapid

Dulling breezes upon ships lumbering
Lulling water with seas slumbering

Ease with dancing, fro and to
Seas clear above or below skies blue

Bird and fish both gravity defying
Herds and flocks swimming or flying

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Notes: didn't take too long since most lines are simple structures of conjunctions and prepositions. The TLM is about Ariel so it's only natural that Ariel is placed in the crucial middle of the poem. (Middle part needs some work to make it smooth)

Enjoy!

[arielana]

I've only read this now but i must say I love the way you use the words in here
it's brilliant

[solarlunarxiii]

That poem was great!! ^^ Thanks for sharing it.
Maybe we could start a collective poem-version of TLM? Gather all the TLM fan poets together and make a collaboration!