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Post by Random Prince on Nov 17, 2005 16:31:53 GMT -5
Let's write the story of Ariel's 16th Birthday together! I'll begin by writing the first sentence and then the next person can write the second one and so on... Try and make your sentence about 20 words long (you can have a few more or less if it doesn't fit). You can post as many times as you like, but not twice in a row! What might be a good idea is when the story is really building up, bring in a member of the Little Ariel forum as a new character (not yourself - pick someone who you think will be fun). Maybe make them a sea creature of some kind. Ok, I guess I should set the scene a bit with my opening sentence. Just a suggestion, but maybe we should start the story with a character other than Ariel to make it a bit different. Good luck! Let's begin now... Rays of early morning sunlight filtered down to the depths of the sea and danced, soft and dilute on the ocean floor.
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Post by arielfloundership on Nov 17, 2005 18:19:09 GMT -5
The sea cucumbers were thriving, growing fat and happy.
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Post by swemer on Nov 17, 2005 19:10:35 GMT -5
happily unaware that a sad looking red-headed mermaid swam over them.
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Post by powerdroid on Nov 18, 2005 8:57:39 GMT -5
"What am I gonna do? I can't believe I let this happen!" she moaned,
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Post by arielfloundership on Nov 18, 2005 10:11:44 GMT -5
"I'm just so stupid....RRRRGH, HOW!?"
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Post by Random Prince on Nov 18, 2005 13:58:48 GMT -5
But Princess Ariel's mood brightened when she caught sight of a familiar roly-poly fish with shiny yellow and blue scales.
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Post by preciouscommodity on Nov 18, 2005 15:08:08 GMT -5
Or at least, it seemed to; Flounder looked as if he intended to go and bully some sharks, and Ariel's bad mood paled by comparison. (add an interesting twist... )
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Post by swemer on Nov 18, 2005 16:40:55 GMT -5
Ariel: Flounder what's the matter? Flounder: Ariel?!? Ummm I just cannot talk to you right now... Ariel: But... don't you know what day it is? Flounder: ummmm.... Friday? I gotta go....
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Post by Random Prince on Nov 18, 2005 17:19:45 GMT -5
‘Something very strange is going on today’ thought Ariel, agitatedly running her fingers through her hair as she helplessly watched Flounder fade away into the distance.
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Post by swemer on Nov 18, 2005 17:34:31 GMT -5
Ariel sat down on a rock thinking: No one has never forgotten my birthday before... What can I have done?
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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Nov 18, 2005 23:48:44 GMT -5
Leaving ariel, flounder franticaly went to find sebastian.
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Post by myloveariel on Nov 19, 2005 0:02:19 GMT -5
Flounder got to sabastion. Sabastion: So deed She found out about da party? Flounder: Nope, she doesnt know a thing. This is gonna be great!
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Post by Random Prince on Nov 19, 2005 11:03:54 GMT -5
But Ariel decided that if her best friend had forgotten her birthday, there was nothing to keep her in Atlantica (even under the sea) today.
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Post by swemer on Nov 19, 2005 11:55:42 GMT -5
Lost in thought she began to swim up towards the surface.
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Post by arielssacrifice on Nov 19, 2005 12:52:22 GMT -5
When she finally reached the surface, a grand ship was sailing: she watched as a small trinket fell from the ship and floated towards her.
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Post by LuKkYaQuAgIrL on Nov 20, 2005 0:36:59 GMT -5
Ariel was filled with excitement and question when she picked up the trinket.
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Post by Merstar on Nov 20, 2005 8:00:51 GMT -5
It was a silver locket covered in dust as she wiped it off she saw a saphirre in the shape of a heart in the centre.
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Post by Random Prince on Nov 20, 2005 16:33:03 GMT -5
'A birthday present from the human world!' Ariel thought happily, but then she remembered what had been troubling her earlier and her sinking heart dragged her back down to the bottom of the sea.
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Post by powerdroid on Nov 20, 2005 22:25:52 GMT -5
Meanwhile, back at the castle, the whole place was alive with activity.
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Post by myloveariel on Nov 20, 2005 22:56:41 GMT -5
Sebastian went up to King Triton, who seemed very enthused about this whole thing
King Triton"So did Ariel find out about our little surprise?" Sebastian:"No Your Majesty She dont know a ting!! I cant wait to see da look on her face when she sees this big party. She going to love it!" King Triton:"Good, she will be soo surprised. So where did she go? We have to make sure she doesnt find out. Sebastian, You and Flounder go find out where shes at." Sebastian:"Yes Your Majesty"
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