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Post by Jazzy on Oct 19, 2006 16:31:47 GMT -5
King Triton was entranced by the spectacle before him. Shimmering rays of silver and gold sparkled through out the depths of the ocean. Then vibrantly colored wing-like fins spread open and floated gracefully in the water. It was at the moment King Triton recognized the angelic vision before him.
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Post by Random Prince on Oct 20, 2006 9:28:51 GMT -5
It was the same beautiful creature that had rescued him from danger many years ago, when he was a young merboy. It seemed she was again here to help, as she swam to the surface to face Ariel.
Unaware of her niece's powers, the witch continued to control Ariel's body and manipulate her mind in vain. Ariel glared fixedly down into the deep, black water and pointed the trident where Amanda had landed. Suddenly she fired the trident and King Triton saw Amanda's dress burst into tattered shreds on the seabed. Even in the knowledge that the girl was safe, it was a chilling sight. The witch let out a triumphant and cruel laugh that cut right through the water to his ears. Ariel swam over to the ship and held out the trident.
"No!" King Triton cried, hurrying towards the surface, but the angelic creature stopped him. Triton watched in despair as the witch took hold of the trident, but from underneath the waves he couldn't quite make out what happened next.
As the witch's hand grasped the trident, the bitter coating of malevolence caused her skin to sear with pain and bleed. Her face became a pallid blue and her body stiffened and trembled. Moments later, the flow of blood running down the trident was stopped – frozen into solid ice. The witch crumbled and spilled into the sea, her icy remains frothing into jets of steam upon contact with the water.
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Post by miklc on Oct 21, 2006 14:39:23 GMT -5
Ariel awoke from the witche's spell, the world around her was blurred. In her hands she was holding Daddy's Trident. Suddenly everything went black around her, without any control the fragile little mermaid floated down through the water. Triton immediately swam to his daughter's aid.
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Post by Random Prince on Oct 21, 2006 16:07:28 GMT -5
Early the next morning, sunlight flooded into Ariel's bedroom as she stirred into consciousness. King Triton took her hand, having stayed at her side all night. As soon as she opened her eyes and saw him there, Ariel instinctively threw her arms around him. "I never got to wish you Happy Birthday," her father whispered gently. "I'm so glad you're safe." They talked for a while, about why everybody had seemed to forget her Birthday and why Ariel had decided to stray to the surface. Soon she was feeling strong enough to swim down to the hall and greet her friends and family, welcomed by a belated but magical Birthday celebration. King Triton told Ariel to close her eyes, and fastened something around her neck. Ariel raised her hand and felt Amanda's locket resting there, and holding it tightly, she knew with all her heart that someday soon her wishes, hopes and dreams would come true. And as we all know, they did. The EndWell done everyone! We did it and it only took us a year! Thanks very much for joining in and making this such a fun story!
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Post by miklc on Oct 22, 2006 9:37:33 GMT -5
WOW I am so glad that this is compleleted it's wonderful, I think someone should add it to Atlantica's Library or something, so loads of people can read it
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