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Post by daytripper on Jan 4, 2011 14:59:36 GMT -5
this fanfic is one that got me into reading Ariel and Eric fanfics then into the little mermaid and then to the little Ariel forum. as far as i know there are at least........ 3 Ariel and Eric fanfics about their life after Triton makes Ariel human most ennd at the wedding one isent finsihed but i hope the writer will continue with it or else ill get flounder to beat them up. okay anyways after i write a new chapter to my little mermaid in the 21st century i will start this one so i would say ill have the first chapter up by mabey at the latest 9 oclock
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Post by daytripper on Jan 4, 2011 21:05:11 GMT -5
Chapter 1 Seas Embrace Ariel looked up in horror as Ursula aimed the trident at her. She shielded herself with her hands waiting for the bolt to strike her and turn her into foam. But it never came all of a sudden she was crushed by the sea closing in on her. She was dazed and confused not knowing if she was dead or alive. She blinked a few times to get the millions of lights out of her eyes she was seeing stars. After a while she was able to see. She looked around to see she was at the bottom of the ocean and near Ursula’s lair. She would have swum away if it weren’t for one thing. There were merpeople swimming out of her lair people she had never seen before. She realized the sea witch was dead and everyone was free… but how? How was she dead? What had happened? After a while of thinking she saw a ship heading straight towards her the sea witch was stuck on the front. She swam out of the way as the ship hit the bottom shattering and covering Ursula in a wooden tomb. She realized what happened. Eric! He saved me! Even though I was a mermaid he still loved me! “NO I won’t leave you” he had said earlier to her. Tears began to stream down her face she would never be a human or be with her Eric again there’s no way her father would change her. Wait Eric! Were is he? She thought looking around. Did he swim to safety? Was he okay? Did he go down with the ship? She was going to go look for him and apologize be was stopped by someone’s hand on her shoulder.
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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 4, 2011 21:47:42 GMT -5
i love it. please keep writing the story.
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Post by daytripper on Jan 4, 2011 22:36:41 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Ariel spun around to find her father looking down at her. Ariel was too sad to care if her father was mad… her Eric was gone. “Ariel” he said pulling her into a bearfish hug. Ariel was surprised and happy her father wasn’t mad for once. “I missed you” he said. He didn’t want to mention to Ariel that he saw the human kill the sea witch. For one he was surprised the human had done so much to protect her… maybe just maybe humans weren’t all bad. Ariel hugged him back. Triton could hear his daughter was crying but he knew it wasn’t because she was happy to be home. No it was because of the human… Eric. Eric had managed to swim all the way to land. He had hoped that he would see or meet Ariel considering she was a mermaid and had saved him the night of the storm he had almost expected her to show up. So when he reached land without any sign her… Ariel where are you? Eric thought before passing out on the beach. “Ariel!” screamed all her sisters as she swam in. she was crying and looked terrible her beautiful red hair was in disarray and her face was soaked with tears. The sisters looked at each other wondering what could have happened that caused the once fearless happy bright spirited Ariel, to act like this. “Ariel?” said Aquata reaching out with one hand as if to test the water between them. Ariel didn’t move or blink or even it seemed breathe she just stood there motionless and thinking to herself. When Aquata hugged Ariel she still didn’t move they knew something was wrong with their Ariel. They all swam over to give Ariel a hug and soon Ariel was finding it hard to breathe so hard in fact that she passed out…. Or was that from the shock of what had just happened?
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Post by josh89 on Jan 4, 2011 23:55:52 GMT -5
amazingg
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Post by Ariel on Jan 5, 2011 0:12:14 GMT -5
wonderful.I love it! Great job
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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 5, 2011 7:25:49 GMT -5
great story. keep writing
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Post by ღAmiღ on Jan 5, 2011 12:25:15 GMT -5
I LOVE IT! I wanna read more!!
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Post by daytripper on Jan 5, 2011 19:09:36 GMT -5
Chapter 3 Happy Endings? When Ariel woke up she was in her room surrounded by her protective sisters who had fallen asleep on the floor. Ariel smiled at them admiring their love for her which is why it pained her to leave them yet again. But she had to see Eric she had to know if he was alive she had to talk to him one last time. She quietly swam out her bedroom window and up towards the surface. Triton had been watching his daughters room for the entire night. He knew Ariel would leave and go to the surface it was inevitable. Triton sighed and watched her swim gracefully towards the surface her red hair very distinct in the clear blue water. Her poked Sebastian who was sleeping on the window sill. Ariel surfaced near shore quickly scanning it for sign of her love. She didn’t see him anywhere. “Where is he?” she said softly to herself. She was getting worried and swam franticly along the coast trying to see someone… anyone she didn’t care she just needed to know he was okay. She got to the place where she had sang to him and scanned the beach. Sure enough there he was lying out on the beach his beautiful face was bruised and banged up. She couldn’t bear to see him look like that sprawled out on the beach… thinking about what happened probably…. Unconscious. A tear fell down Ariels face she was about to go and see if he was okay but realized he might wake up. And she didn’t want that she decided to just sit on a nearby rock and stare at him. She got up on the rock carefully so the rock wouldn’t rip her delicate scales off. “What would I give to live where you are. What would I pay to stay here beside you. What would I give to see you smiling at me? Where would we walk? Where would we run? If we could stay all day in the sun?” A tear flowed down her face followed by another and soon she was crying and unable sing anymore. She covered her face with her hands and cried hard. Triton sighed when he heard his daughter sing. He could tell just by the way she had sung and by the words she was singing that she truly loved him. He didn’t know what to do he was torn between losing his daughter or keeping her from what she loved more than anything…. Maybe even himself. Ariel eventually settled down and stopped crying. When she looked up and let the sun start to dry her face she saw Eric stir. As if he was having some sort of nightmare. “It’s all my fault” she said to herself shaking her head. If she hadn’t have gone to the surface she would have never put him through this and he would be at home safe in his bed waking up to another beautiful day. “A-A-Ariel no…. don’t go… ill… never… leave… you” he said in his sleep. Turning himself over so he was now facing the sky.
“She really does love him… doesn’t she Sebastian?” Said triton to his right hand crab. “Well your majesty it’s like I always say kids have got to be free to lead their own lives” said the crab crossing his claws. He was trying to drop the hint to the king that Ariel was much happier as a human and that it was probably for the best. “You always say that?” said the king with a devilish smile. Sebastian waved him off trying to smile. The king sighed “Well I guess there’s just one problem left” he said shaking his head. “I understand your majesty” said Sebastian sadly. “How much I’m going to miss her” he said looking at Sebastian with sad watery eyes. Sebastian was puzzled and before he could ask what he meant the king pointed his trident towards his daughter and imagined her as a human. Light began to flow from the tip of the trident to his daughter who was perched on the rock. When the glowing light reached the rock and Ariel her fin began to glow. I wonder why he keeps saying my name? Ariel thought to herself. There was a tingling sensation on her fin that caused her to look away from her prince. Her tail was glowing and there was a trail of light leading back to…. Her father! Oh daddy I love you Ariel thought smiling widely. She was at a loss for words she was so happy that she jumped into the water before the transformation was finished.
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Post by Ariel on Jan 5, 2011 19:17:18 GMT -5
Wow! I can't wait to read more. It is wonderful
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Post by daytripper on Jan 5, 2011 22:14:33 GMT -5
sorry but i wont be able to post tonight my mom is on my case about staying up till 3 am uhhhhhh sometimes i wish she dident care about me
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Post by josh89 on Jan 6, 2011 0:14:46 GMT -5
dont say that ! she just cares about you.. we can wait patiently just dont take too long lol
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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 6, 2011 7:22:29 GMT -5
its a good thing that your mom is on you. she loves you and wants to do great in high school. she wants you to get a good night rest for the next day and that you dont really tired the next day.
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Post by daytripper on Jan 6, 2011 14:53:32 GMT -5
yhea i know why she does it but she is REALLY over protective somtimes.
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Post by daytripper on Jan 6, 2011 16:21:34 GMT -5
Eric woke up to see the sun high in the sky. Where am I? He thought looking around. He realized that he was on the same beach that the girl sang to him on. But how did I…? He thought before remembering Ariel and everything that happened. Tears began to well up in his eyes because he knew he would never see Ariel again. oh if only he realized sooner that she was the girl who… he trailed off when he saw something red emerging from the water. The red turned out to be hair, which turned into a head of hair. “Ariel” he whispered “Ariel!” he said a little louder but still softly so only he could hear. He stood up which made his body ach with discomfort. He ran over to the water were Ariel stood with outstretched arms and a happy smile on her face. She had tears of joy running down her face and was wearing the most beautiful dress he had ever seen. Eric lifted her up out of the water and twirled her around in the air. She giggled looking him in the eyes never looking away for fear of losing him. He smiled and looked into her eyes too when he stopped spinning her he set her down and gave her a kiss. Oh how wonderful it was to kiss him Ariel thought. She finally got her kiss after all this time and it was wonderful. “Oh Eric” she said sweetly when they pulled away. She was beaming with joy and felt like laughing the night away. “Ariel” he said. He couldn’t believe she could talk and her voice was so beautiful it was like she was an angel. “What happened last night? One minute I was outside and then the next thing I remember I was on the wedding ship. And you could talk…and… and you were a mermaid” he said as it finally completely came back to him. Ariel bit her bottom lip she knew there was no way around this so she might as well tell Eric the truth he had a right to know. “Oh Eric I wanted to tell you but I was afraid you wouldn’t like me because I was a mermaid” she said her smile diminished but still there. His smile never faded it only got warmer. “My father turned me into a human so I could be with you” said Ariel turning around to see her father was starting to swim away his head down. Even from the back Ariel could tell he was sad. “DADDY” Ariel yelled running into the cool seawater that had once been her home. Triton turned around to see his daughter struggling in the water to get to him as fast as she could. When she reached him she jumped onto him laughing and giving him a big hug. “I love you daddy” she softly. Triton smiled and stared at his beaming young daughter he then looked at the human and didn’t see him as a threat anymore. Which surprised him. He had lost all of his hate for humans when the prince risked his life to save not only Ariel but him as well. When triton turned around Eric saw the crown on his head and immediately put two and two together. “You’re a king?” said Eric. It was less of a question more of a shocked response. Triton smiled and shook his head in confirmation. “And you’re a prince” he said as if it was an obvious question Eric just asked. Walking into the water towards Ariel Eric took her hand got on one knee and looked up at Ariel with love and affection in his eyes. “Ariel… Will you marry me?” he said slowly his eyes now full of hope too. Ariel covered her mouth with shock she didn’t know what to say. She took a moment before nodding her head vigorously. “Yes Eric oh yes!” she said so happy that this was finally happening. Triton smiled at his happy daughter he loved to finally see her happy and where she belonged. He was happy the boy proposed and she had accepted he was happier than he has ever been since his wife died. But he kept his cool and continued to smile. Ariel then turned to her father “Daddy can you do me one more favor please?” she asked looking into his eyes with her puppyfish face. “Of course sweetheart” he said softly and warmly. “Can you get Archimedes I want him to know what happened I think he’ll appreciate it more than anyone” she said smiling. “If you wish” he said giving her a kiss on the cheek and swimming beneath the waves.
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Post by danielle1982 on Jan 6, 2011 16:47:51 GMT -5
sure she would be im mean your probably her youngest and she wants the best for you.
i love this chapter. but i was wondering why you put the same chapter up twice.
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Post by daytripper on Jan 6, 2011 18:58:22 GMT -5
Chapter 5 After he left Ariel went over to Eric and gave him a kiss. They stood there in the waist deep water under the warm sun kissing when they broke Ariel put her forehead against Eric’s and smiled looking deeply into his eyes. Ariel was being held by Eric bridal style and so he was able to carry Ariel back to shore and set her down on the beach. She laughed as they rolled around in the sand tickling each other trying to waste time while they waited for her father. “I love you Ariel” he said giggling. Ariel was giggling too and looked into his eyes giving him a kiss. When they broke Ariel heard the sound of someone breaking the surface. Ariel quickly jumped into the water and hid her legs from view. She then walked out farther so the water was up to her neck covering the dress she was wearing. Eric appeared beside her the water was only up to his shoulders. There was a second slash and then the sound of people talking. She could see out in the distance two merpeople making their way towards them. On of them she recognized as daddy the other she recognized as Archimedes. She smiled as they approached. Eric saw king… oh shoot I don’t know the kings name! He thought to himself as the two merpeople approached. Leaning over to whisper into Ariels ear Eric asked “Um… Ariel? What exactly is your father’s name?” he said carefully as not to offend her. Ariel looked at him smiling widely as if it was a silly question. “Why haven’t you ever heard of King Triton?” she asked. Eric stood there with his mouth open. What! But he’s just a myth a legend it can’t be true! Wait! What am I thinking? Im marrying a mermaid of course anything is possible. He said finally regaining his composure. “Ah Ariel how are you?” he said swimming over to her obviously unaware of her being a human. Triton gave Ariel a nod as if to confirm the fact that he had not told him about her being a human. “Archimedes this is Eric he’s a human… and my fiancé!” she said excitedly unable to contain her excitement. Archimedes was from the looks of it very old he had white hair, and a purple tail. “Ah now I see but how did you convince the king to let you marry a human?” he asked. “It’s a long story. But do you remember when I said that someday I would be part of their world?” she said trying to hide her excitement. Archimedes was confused and tried studying her face for the answer. “Yes and I see now that your wish came true” he said looking at Eric with a smile. “More than that” she said walking back towards the beach she revealed more and more of herself with each step. When Archimedes saw she was wearing a dress he didn’t think anything of it. But then he realized she wasn’t swimming. “What the?” he said just as the water got to Ariels waist. He saw she was walking and had two human legs. Archimedes swam over to Ariel splashing his tail on the surface and getting Eric wet. “Hey!” complained Eric. Ariel stood in the knee deep water and giggled. Eric walked over to when Ariel was and where Archimedes was heading. “I wanted you to come here to see me living my dream and so you could ask Eric some questions” Ariel said when Archimedes got to her. A few seconds later Eric waded over to the group. “So I guess I could answer a few questions” he said rubbing the back of his head. He had overheard what Ariel had just said and realized they must not know anything about the human world. “Well there is really only one thing I’ve never been able to understand” Archimedes said rubbing his chin. “And what is that?” asked Eric. “What are coins for?” he said curiously. His eyes grew wide with excitement and it reminded him of Ariel. Eric suppressed the urge to laugh. “We use it to pay for things we need/want” he said. “Pay?” Archimedes asked very confused. “Of course you can get something for free now can you?” said Eric. The entire time Ariel just stood there with her hands together in front of her. Her father swam up beside her and they watched the two go at it. After about five minutes Archimedes said he was done with questions and said goodbye to Ariel and Eric before diving beneath the waves. Ariel then gave her father another big hug before he too disappeared beneath the waves. “Sebastian I want you to watch over her and report back to me tonight” Triton said to the crab as he began to swim back to Atlantica.
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Post by Ariel on Jan 6, 2011 19:26:16 GMT -5
I love it. I'm curious as to what's going to happen next
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Post by josh89 on Jan 6, 2011 23:26:36 GMT -5
love it !
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Post by daytripper on Jan 7, 2011 20:42:22 GMT -5
Chapter 6 Ariel rested her head on Eric’s chest and yawned. She hadn’t realized just how tired she really was until now. Eric stroked her hair and looked down at her lovingly she looked so beautiful and so peaceful that he couldn’t take his eyes off her. “Ariel” he said softly and gently his eyes never leaving her beautiful face and that red head of hair. “Hm?” he replied softly. She was bout ready to fall asleep but somehow she managed to raise her head to look up into his eyes. She was wondering why he would possibly want to break the peacefulness that had come over them when her father left. “We should get back to the castle before everyone starts to worry about me… and I think they should probably know that you’re safe and sound on your own two feet” he said. He wrapped his arm around Ariels shoulder and they walked out of the knee deep water. When they got on shore Eric took Ariels hands and looked at her his eyes full of love and joy. “Tell me about how you first met me” said Eric in a soft kind tone. Ariel was too tired to talk but his tone told her that he was not going to take no for an answer. Ariel sighed and looked at the sand for a moment thinking of where to begin. She looked up at Eric after a few moments and smiled. “It was the night of the storm” she began as they continued walking back to the castle. Ariel told him the story of how she was in her secret grotto wishing she could be a part of the human world, when something blocked the light above her grotto. She had gone up to investigate and saw things lighting up the sky. “You mean fireworks! That’s what we call them” he said interrupting her. She gave him a tired/annoyed look and he giggled. She then told him of how she saw him on the boat and how max had licked her on the cheek. She got sad as she told him of how she saw the ship… what’s the word? … Explode! And him fall into the water. She told him of how she dragged him all the way to shore and how she thought he was dead. Then she told him of how relived she was that he was alive and she started to sing. “Why didn’t you stay?” he asked her. It didn’t make sense to him if she loved him to become human why didn’t she stay? “Oh Eric I wanted to more than anything but…. Then Max and Grimsby came and I didn’t want to be seen by them” she said remembering the feeling she had when she left she had desperately wanted to stay there with Eric but knew if he did things probably wouldn’t have turned out the way they did. “So then what did you do?” he said. They had stopped walking now. Ariel told him of how her father found out what happened and destroyed his grotto and then how Ursula’s two servants brought her to make a deal. “The deal was that she would turn me into a human for three days. I had to get you to kiss me before the sun set on the third day or else I would turn back into a mermaid and…. I would belong to her” she said. She had started to cry at the memory of what happened. Eric gave her a reassuring hug and smiled at her making his dimples show. Ariel soon began to smile too and stopped crying she felt safe with Eric beside her. She continued her story until they reached the palace steps finishing her story just in time. She looked up at him to see him smiling sadly his eyebrows were almost sideways on his head he looked so… caring. She never thought anyone could look like that or make her feel so loved. She knew at that moment that she had made the right choice. “I can’t believe you did all that for me” he said finally. His big blue eyes seemed to look into her soul and stare at her heart. “I would do it again if I had too” she said looking up at him with big blue eyes that seemed grateful for his understanding. Eric leaned forward slowly blinking slowly a few times. Ariel realized what has happening and also leaned in closing her eyes. Their lips met slowly brushing against each other for a brief moment before meeting fully. Ariel wrapped her arms around his neck and deepened the kiss. Their tongues exploring each other’s mouth their saliva mixing with each other. When they broke they stood there and looked at each other smiling… well Eric was but Ariel was BEAMING! “Come on” Eric said motioning his head at the palace doors. He once again put his hand on her shoulder and wrapped his arm around her back and place his hand on her other shoulder. They enjoyed each other’s warmth and prepared themselves for the oncoming ordeal. What would you know the first person who they saw when they walked in was Grimsby who looked absolutely shocked. He was carrying a bunch of papers which all dropped to the floor when he saw them. His jaw moved up and down for a few moments as if he wanted to speak but hadn’t decided what to say yet. “Carlotta!” Grimsby yelled. His reaction and loudness of his voice was so unexpected that both Ariel and Eric jumped. Seconds later Carlotta came running in out of the right side hallway. She took one look at us and froze. Eric smiled and slowly raised his hand and waved at them. “Hi were home” he said sheepishly.
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