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Post by miklc on Nov 2, 2006 15:45:54 GMT -5
This is great I can really imagine Ariel in that yellow dress lol Carn't wit for the next section...
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Post by miklc on Oct 21, 2006 14:26:23 GMT -5
That's great so far carn't wait for more, I updated my fanfic just a little btw
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Post by miklc on Oct 18, 2006 14:51:23 GMT -5
This is fantastic I have been waiting for an update, I carn't wait for the rest. It's brilliant. Oh I'm sorry I havn't really been updating my fanfic I will have to sometime, I will at least try and get Chapter 1 completed, oh and keep up the good work ariel7angel
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Post by miklc on Oct 9, 2006 14:51:16 GMT -5
ariel7angel I am really enjoying the story I can sense some sort of a twisit coming on, and that poor little mermaid she dosn't know what she's letting herself in for :-( when you finish your fanfic are you going to post it on Atlantica's Libary, I think I will with mine (though I have only just started it), btw I posted the start of Chapter 1 on if you want to read it, and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Post by miklc on Oct 7, 2006 14:33:56 GMT -5
Hi ariel7angel, you asked me to read this and I have done and I have to say WOW I am really enjoying it so far. I want to know more, WHO is watching Ariel??? Please continue you have me hooked. Thank you for leaving a comment of my first fanfic this will soon be updated so keep checking back, we can read each others fanfics
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Post by miklc on Nov 18, 2006 15:14:40 GMT -5
Wow scarletbubbles I have just finished reading your story and it is amazing, I love it. It's great that you show Ariel and Eric's relationship growing all the time, and I love it how you are also showing what the ocean's like without Ariel. It's also fantastic to see the conflict you've created with the Eric/Arabella and Triton/Kallon Storylines, and your original charcters are so life like. Keep it up, and I carn't wait to read more of this fantastic FanFic!!!
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Post by miklc on Feb 28, 2007 14:27:50 GMT -5
Oh OK I'll look forward to Chapter 3 later on them
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Post by miklc on Oct 27, 2006 7:41:42 GMT -5
Great to here that Chapter 3 is on it's way I carn't wait
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Post by miklc on Oct 24, 2006 15:10:11 GMT -5
scarlettslipper this is amazing I love the idea of a TLM and BATB crossover, and the new sea witch of the sea, I am dying to read more when will you post Chapter 3 I want MORE Keep it up, you have a great style of writing
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Post by miklc on Oct 21, 2006 14:21:43 GMT -5
WOW, that was amazing it seemed so real, I could really imagine this as part of the movie. I loved how at the end Ariel tells Eric that's she's pregnant
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Post by miklc on Oct 22, 2006 9:37:33 GMT -5
WOW I am so glad that this is compleleted it's wonderful, I think someone should add it to Atlantica's Library or something, so loads of people can read it
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Post by miklc on Oct 21, 2006 14:39:23 GMT -5
Ariel awoke from the witche's spell, the world around her was blurred. In her hands she was holding Daddy's Trident. Suddenly everything went black around her, without any control the fragile little mermaid floated down through the water. Triton immediately swam to his daughter's aid.
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Post by miklc on Oct 19, 2006 14:57:09 GMT -5
Triton powerfully swam through the water, it was then that he caught a glimpse of his daughter, as she ascended to the forbidden world of humans. In her hand she held the precious Trident, his froze in shock. Though his attention was soon distracted for a moment, as floating down into the water helpless, was a little girl. A human girl.
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Post by miklc on Oct 18, 2006 14:54:20 GMT -5
Please can someone add some more to this story I carn't because I was the last person to post, it looks like people have lost intreast keep it going I want to hear more
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Post by miklc on Sept 29, 2006 15:23:10 GMT -5
The cold water rushed around her, the icy cold cutting through her skin. Unable to swim she began sinking, even with all her might she could not keep her head above the violent waves. It was at this point she was completely submerged, helpless and drowning.
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Post by miklc on Sept 29, 2006 15:25:42 GMT -5
intriging i want to know more please continue i belive this goin to be really good fanfic
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Post by miklc on Apr 10, 2008 17:04:43 GMT -5
OMG aquisha this fanfic is amazing, I've just read everything you've posted so far in one go and loved every moment of it. I really can't wait for more!!! Keep up the hard work
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Post by miklc on Sept 30, 2006 9:18:35 GMT -5
I choose the Diary that would be soooo good
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Post by miklc on Oct 21, 2006 14:46:14 GMT -5
That was really nice, I like you lot also love to hear of stories of Ariel and Eric. This was really nice because it was short and sweet, and scarletbubbles is very right you have a really good writing style, you have really inspired me to write more on my fanfic
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Post by miklc on Sept 27, 2006 14:06:48 GMT -5
i think this board is really good
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