Under the sea once again

[scarletbubbles]

Wow, you've really been keeping up with the story! I think your doing a great job. I really like it, and I myself am just one who loves fan fics about Ariel and Eric.

[ariel7angel]

scarletbubbles said:

Wow, you've really been keeping up with the story! I think your doing a great job. I really like it, and I myself am just one who loves fan fics about Ariel and Eric.

Thank you so much, im glad you like it - i love fanfics about Ariel & Eric myself!!!!!

[ariel7angel]

After the wonderful dance with her handsome husband, they walked over to Shie & Ryan, Ariel took Shie hand and they both walk like ran out of the room.

"Where are those two off to" Ryan watched as they waved goodbye

"Oh Ariel is telling her a story about"

"OH is that the one about her home" Ryan said before Eric made something else up, and then he would know they were all lieing to him.

"Yes of course" Eric said

"well at least they are having fun together right?"

"Yes, im so glad that my two favorite girls are best friends" Eric said with a huge smile on his face.

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Well outside, Ariel started to tell her story again "Now where was i?"
She couldnt remember well she had left off

"Oh you were talking about the hills" But Shie knew exactly where they were.

"Oh yes, now i remember well there were hills right after when the land came together, like i was telling you, and they were in rows, but then curvy at the end and around them, like fins. And there were little streams between the hills, so all the mermaids could hang out. And then at the other end of the island it was like a half of a diamond shape, it is where our tail begins."

"Oh so that is why its called Mermaid Island, is that it, because it is kind of boring Ariel" Launging at the same time.

"Hey, hold on to your tail - that is just the begin, off course its going to be boring, but wait i will get to the good stuff soon, or i will never tell you another story again." Which Ariel knew that wasnt true becasue Shie love hearing about under the sea.

"Ok, i promise i will be good, go on" Shie knew she had to be good because she knew Ariel and she would just walk out and never tell her the end, which would kill Shie.

"Well more and more humans were taking over islands that hadnt been discoved yet, and all the mermaids were scared that Mermaid Island would be next, so any sailor that would stop into Mermaid Island, the mermaids were scared them, they would hit there ship late at night when there was no one around - they would sing very very sad and scary songs, and make the sailors go crazy or get lost following the sound of their voices.

So that island became cursed, no sailor would go near it, and everytime a sailor would go by the cursed island they thought they saw mermaids, and they could hear the very sad songs coming from it - so that is how it gots it name Mermaid Island.

You doing ok, Shie - im almost to the good part" Ariel wa worried that she was taking to long, but Shie love every minute of it.

"yes, please go on - i cant wait to hear more." Shie said

"Ok, well it wasnt until a handsome Prince heard of the cursed Mermaid Island, that he wanted to go there and make it his - builted his kingdom there, but eveyone told him not to go, but he didnt care he loved adverture and danger and wanted to tamed this unknown island no one could."

"Wow, he must have been very brave and handsome"

"YEah when i think of this story i think of Eric because all of those things come to mind." Ariel thinking of her one true love.

"Ok, back to the story - So he sailed out the first night he heard about it, and brought all of his best men. They stayed on the boat the first night, and mermaids did what they always did before hit it with tail and sang their very sad and scary songs, but he didnt leave like all the other boats had. Which make the mermaids very mad, so they were going to teach him a lesson the next night, but that is when he came to shore and they all are saw him for the first time. He was so handsome, and strong and he looked like nothing would scary him. And all of the mermaids fell madly in love with him.

So they could not to what they had done to all the other sailors that came along, all the mermaids knew that you should never fall for a human but they couldnt help themselves he was so dreamy - but they knew they had to stay away - but they still had hiding spots on the islands - so when he was alone they would sing to him - not sad or scary songs but songs feeled with love and joy. And he started to think that maybe the league of mermaids on this island were true - maybe if he could capture one, then eveyone would come miles around to see it. And then his kingdom would be famous and rich."

"Wow this story is so good, i cant tell if the prince is good or bad yet" Shie wanted to know more about unknown prince.

"Oh just wait and see." Ariel said knowing what the prince was but not telling Shie til later.

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I hope you all like the new session - please leave comments!!!!! :'(

[miklc]

Hi ariel7angel, you asked me to read this and I have done and I have to say WOW I am really enjoying it so far. I want to know more, WHO is watching Ariel??? Please continue you have me hooked. Thank you for leaving a comment of my first fanfic this will soon be updated so keep checking back, we can read each others fanfics

[ariel7angel]

miklc said:

Hi ariel7angel, you asked me to read this and I have done and I have to say WOW I am really enjoying it so far. I want to know more, WHO is watching Ariel??? Please continue you have me hooked. Thank you for leaving a comment of my first fanfic this will soon be updated so keep checking back, we can read each others fanfics

Oh im so glad that you read it and liked it - you will just have to wait and see who is watching Ariel - and of course i will still keep reading your fanfic too!!!!

YEah 4 reader now - keep the comments coming!!!!

[Rena Bam Bena x3]

I love it! :] Please keep it comming! lol

[ariel7angel]

dancnqueen693 said:

I love it! :] Please keep it comming! lol

YEah now 5th - keep coming i love new readers!!!!

[dreamer]

You have awesome talent with writing. Please continue!

[ariel7angel]

dreamer said:

You have awesome talent with writing. Please continue!

Thank you so much - that means alot to me - that makes 6.

[ariel7angel]

"But the prince didnt know how he could capture a mermaid - it seemed to him that the mermaids would only sing to him when he was alone, so he started going everywhere alone but still the mermaids would not come out of hiding, because even though they loved him they knew humans could not be trusted.

But under the sea, and young mermaid about 17 with beautiful long black hair name Indika heard about this handsome Prince on Mermaid Island who wasnt afraid to leave, but she didnt believe it was true so she had to go see for herself, see she was kind of like me and didnt listen to her family, who told her not to go.

I bet you can guess what she did" Trying to keep Shie into the story as much as possibe

"Yes, she went up to the surface anyway to see this wonderful Prince everyone was talking about - right?" Shie asked

"Yes you're right, and she also fell madly in love with him but she didnt think humans were bad like all the other merpeople through, kind of like me but unlike me who found true love, she was wrong - he only wanted to capture a mermaid to make money and to become famous.

All the other mermaids that hanged around Mermaid ISland told her not to trust him, not to go near him that he doesnt seem as sweet & kind as she thinks he is, but she didnt listen - and one night when all the mermaids were under the sea at one of our royal balls, she went to him and sang to him - and that night he talked to her "Mermaid, mermaid please come out of hiding, i promise i wont hurt you - how could i hurt something so beautiful" But she didnt come out of hiding right away, she wanted him to work for it, and she sang back to him a song about her love for him and again he spoke to her "Mermaid, Mermaid i cant stop thinking of you, you are always swimmming thru my mind, i love you." That is what she wanted to hear, and with that she came out of hiding - she was so beautiful that at first he didnt want to capture her, than he thought that there has to be more - maybe if he makes this one thinks he loves her, she can get the rest to come out of hiding too."

"So he is bad" Shie knew it, that what she was thinking the whole time, he just sounded to wonderful to be true.

"YEs, very bad - Indika shouldnt never had trust him." Ariel saying her own opinion about the story she was telling.

"I was just wondering something." Shie asked

"What"

"YOu are always saying handsome Prine or wonderful, to you know his name or what kindgome he was apart of" Shie asked

"NO we under the sea never learned that, and when i came to the surface i tryed to see what kingdom was there long ago but no one knew, sorry." Ariel was sorry she didnt know everything about the story she was telling because she knew that Shie would go crazy not knowing something.

"WHat are you girls doing out here" Ryan said, both girls didnt see him, and bothed looked at each other and wondered how long he had been standing there.

"Oh Ariel is telling me a story about her home kingdom, how long have you been standing there." Shie hopely it hadnt been long.

"For like a sec sorry to scary you, are you two going to join the party any time soon."

"Oh yes, im almost done - you know Shie if i dont finish something she will be wondering about it all day." Ariel said

"Yeah i know that. Ok well i leave you too - but dont take too much longer because everyone is asking about you, Ariel." Ryan wanted to inform her.

"Thanks Ryan we wont be too much longer." And with that he was gone.

"Ok, finish before someone tries to take you away again." Shie said

"Ok, yes now i was just at the part when Indika had met him, and he wanted to have more mermaids, right??

"Yes, yes yes - please gone on" SHe was kind of getting a litte unpatient.

"Ok, hold onto your seahorses, i mean horses. So he talked to her all night, and he asked if there were more and she said yes, but tonight they were all at a royal ball that the King was giving. And he thought maybe he could capture the King but then again no King would come up to the surface nomatter what a little mermaid said. So he would just focus on getting more mermaids, so he asked if she could bring more mermaids with her next time - but she said that they would never trust her enough to come to the surface to met a human.

They were all taugh long ago that humans were dangerous and shouldnt be trusted, doesnt matter how much they love him - but then he said couldnt you tell them that im kind and would never hurt them, and with that he took her in his arms and kiss her with so much love, well that is what she thought, and then the sun began to come up, he turned his head for moment and she was gone - all he saw was her tail splash in the water."

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I would write more, but im kind of tired so im going to try to rest for a little, and maybe go outside because it is wonderful day - please leave comments - i hope you all enjoy it!!!!!!

[grablegal]

I'm really enjoying this story. Please write more. I can't wait to see what happens. : )

[miklc]

ariel7angel I am really enjoying the story I can sense some sort of a twisit coming on, and that poor little mermaid she dosn't know what she's letting herself in for :-( when you finish your fanfic are you going to post it on Atlantica's Libary, I think I will with mine (though I have only just started it), btw I posted the start of Chapter 1 on if you want to read it, and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

[ariel7angel]

"Well under the water, she told all her friends that when they were all at the ball, that the Prince talked to her, and she went to go see him, they didnt believe her and the ones that did thought she was stupid and dumb to do such a thing. But she didnt care because he loved her and she love him. She try to tell all of them that he was kind and sweet, and the next night - they should all come up with her to meet him. But they wanted nothing to do with it, they didnt mind singing to him, but they would never meet a human face to face.

The next night all of the mermaids were at the island like they are everynight, including INdika. None of the mermaids would let her out of their sight, but she got away and found the prince, and again he said "Mermaid, MErmaid where are you? I miss you so much Mermaid, Mermaid please come to me." And out of the shadows there she was, more beautiful than the last time he saw her." She was about to say more but stop because she felt those eyes again, and they felt like to her that they were gettin closer.

"What is wrong, Ariel - why did you stop?" Shie asked her friend

"I feel them again"

"Feel what"

"Those eyes i was telling you about earlier." Ariel looked worried

So to make her friend feel better, Shie started looking around the room, to see if she saw anyone looking at Ariel, which most people were even though she was outside talking to a friend and not paying any attention to her guests. But then again, most werent - Shie almost knew everyone in the kingdom unlike Ariel, she say a bunch of people she and Eric went to school with, and then she say Ryan who smiled at her when he notices she was looking at him, but who was he talking to, she knew she had seen him before but he didnt go to school with Eric and her, he must be more Ryan's age or older.

There was something strange about him, like even though he was talking to Ryan he couldnt keep his eyes off Ariel even though everytime Shie looked at him - he would try to look away but his eyes would always return back. But Shie didnt think anything of it, he was a friend of Ryan's so he had to be a good guy, he just couldnt stop staring at her friend. Now what was his name, she knew it would drive her crazy until she remember it.

"Do you see anyone" Ariel wanting to know because Shie is never this quiet unless she is thinking,

"Well i see one guy who looks like he may be the one that has been staring at you all night, i know i have seen him before but i can remember his name." Shie explained

"Where is he" Ariel asked

"Talking to Ryan, but i dont think you have to worry - i just think he likes you, that is it, nothing bad."

"No, he doesnt just like me - i can feel it, there is something more."

"How do you know"

"I just do, remember i used to be a mermaid, we are more intune with things, it is really hard to explain - i just know there is something not right about him."

"Ok, well what are we going to do about it."

"I dont know, well it looks like he is friends with Ryan, maybe he knows what is going on, or you could ask him about his unknown friend."

"Ok, ok i will go talk to him about his wierd friend, but when are you going to tell me the rest of the story, i kind of think i know what is going to happen, but i really really want to know if im right."

"Well i have been away from my guests too long tonight, so lets say we get lunch tomorrow just the two of us and i will finish the story and answer any other questions you have about it, is that ok???" Hoping her friend wouldnt be to upset.

"That sounds like fun, but you know i wont be able to sleep tonight because i will be thinking about nothing except the story." Laughing as she was walking over to her handsome Prince, well she wish but in her mind he always would be her Prince.

Right as Shie walked away, ERic came to join his beautiful wife, he put his arm behind her and gave her a kiss.

"Is everything ok, angelfish." Eric asked

"Everything is fine, but i think Shie found the guy who has been staring at me all night, she is going to talk to him and Ryan right now." Ariel told her husband.

"So i right, it is just some guy who has the hots for you, which i can believe it, you are beautiful, sweetie."

"Well thank you, but again i dont think it is just that, i think there is something more."

"HOney please dont worry, if it is one of Ryan's friends then it is ok, we will work it all out. I dont want my gorgeous wife worring about anything, we are having a party - so lets have fun." And with that, Eric picked up Ariel and twist her around, and they started dancing.

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Sorry it has been so long seen i wrote - it was just a busy and long week, i hope you like the new post - please comment, the good and bad, thanks!!!!!

WOw when i just tryed to post this, it loged me out and i thought i was going to lose all this work, im so glad i got to go back and copy it, i would have been so mad!!!!

[scarletbubbles]

Nice post - and so were all the ones that I didn't give a post to because I was gone. I just wanna say they were all good!

[miklc]

This is fantastic I have been waiting for an update, I carn't wait for the rest. It's brilliant. Oh I'm sorry I havn't really been updating my fanfic I will have to sometime, I will at least try and get Chapter 1 completed, oh and keep up the good work ariel7angel

[ariel7angel]

As the party began to end, Ariel & Eric said all of their goodbyes to their guest, and thank them all for coming. But not everyone was leaving right at that moment, Shie & Ryan were still talking to their unknown friend who Ariel didnt like.

"If you want to know who he is, just go over there and say hi" Eric said to Ariel while watching her study her friends with the strange man.

"No i couldnt do that, i have to say goodbye to all of our guests." Ariel said back

"When have you done anything that you are suppose to?" Eric asked

"I know, i know but there is something about him that i dont like, and i dont want to go talk to him, i just want to wait until Shie & Ryan come over here"

"Ok sweetie, whatever you want, you know i just want you to be happy." Eric said after he gave her a kiss on the cheek.

"I know, and that is why i love you so much." Ariel told her handsome husband.

Finally most of the guest were gone, and Ariel turned around to see her friends and they were also gone, why would they leave without saying goodbye or tell her who the strange man was. She couldnt believe that they would do something like that, she had to know that Ryan wanted to spend time with Shie, and he didnt want her to say bye to Ariel, because he knew that they would talk for a very long time.

"Finally it is all over" Eric said as the last guest left

"YEs, im so glad but Shie & Ryan left without saying bye or telling me who that man was."

"Oh im sorry i forgot to tell you, when you went to the bathroom Ryan said goodbye and that Shie was really tired and that she would see you tomorrow for lunch." Eric said

"Oh ok, well i guess that is ok, but you would think they would wait for me to come back to say goodbye."

"Well like i said, only Ryan said goodbye, i didnt even see Shie leave." Eric thought that was kind of strange to him

"Well You know Ryan, he can be kind of wierd sometimes." Ariel said with a smile on his face

"Yeah he can be" Eric said while laughting

"i cant wait to crawl into to bed with you, honey" Ariel said as they were walking to their bedroom

"I know, i never get tired of you sleeping in my arms - i just love it so much." Eric said back to his wonderful wife

They had finally got to their bedroom, Ariel walked in as Eric held the door for her, they had a great room and the best part is the huge view they have of the ocean. Once they were inside, the couple got all ready for bed and then both crawled into bed, they made love like they do everynight and then they went fast asleep, they had a busy day!!!!!

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More to come soon, i just wanted to end the party and see what i see for the next part - comment please - i hope you all like it!!!!!

[miklc]

That's great so far carn't wait for more, I updated my fanfic just a little btw

[ariel7angel]

Eric woke up in the middle of the night, he looked down but there was no Ariel, she was standing by the window looking out to the sea, thinking about missing it, he thought to himself.

"Ariel what is wrong" Eric asked

"Nothing really, i just couldnt sleep - when i close my eyes are i see is me as a mermaid, i just cant stop thinking about it, i mean the party last night help, but." Ariel stoped to look out the windown to see how the moon shine off the beautiful sea.

"But what honey." Eric wanting to know more, so he could help his lovely wife

"But then i start thinking about Shie and why she didnt say goodbye and who was the strange friend of Ryan's. i just cant get my mind to calm down, i need help honey." Ariel looking worried

"well i know something that always makes you feel better, and makes you mind turn off." Eric said with a smile and knew Ariel knew what he was talking about without even have to say it, it was one of his favorite things since they got married.

Ariel looked out the window one more time before she walked over to her prince, and gave him a kiss and joined him back into bed but not to go to sleep, oh they would do that later when she was so tired she couldnt think about being a mermaid and about Shie and their friend.

Later that morning, Ariel & Eric woke up in each other's arms, just the way they do evey morning - and Ariel was in a much better mood than she was just a few hours ago, and she had Eric to thank for that.

She looked out side and it was a beautiful day, so beautiful that she wanted to spend all day outside, she couldnt wait to Shie would come over, they could eat on the beach and put their toes in the water, and maybe even see Flounder if he came around today.

"HOney, look outside its a beautiful day." Ariel said with a huge smile, Eric knew she was in a better mood which made him in one too.

"Oh yes sweetie, im so glad you are happy."

"well i have you for that." Ariel said with a cute smile and a sparkle in her eye

"Well im just glad i could help" Eric tryed to say all serious but couldnt.

Ariel went into her huge walk in closet, and looked for the perfect sun-dress she could wear to spend a day with Shie, she found her favorite light yellow dress, sleeveless with a tight middle which made her look thin but she really didnt need any help with that, and then the bottom flared out, so when she turned around, it made a big circle.

When she was in the bathroom putting on the last of her make -up Grimsby knocked on the door. Eric opened it, and he said "Ariel, Shie just arrived"

"Oh thnak you Grimsby, tell her i will be down at once." She said from inside the bathroom.

She walked out, and did a little twirl " How do i look" Ariel asked

"WOnderful as usually, and i just love that dress on you." Eric said

"Oh thank you, i love you" Ariel said as she gave him a huge hug and then she ran out of the room and down the hall to see her friend.

"Have fun, and try to stay out of trouble." Eric said out the door and down the hall, hoping that she heard him, and she did b/c she said

"We will" But even Ariel knew that wasnt true!!!

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Sorry it has been so long, i hope you like the new section of the story - maybe tonight if i dont get home too late i wll tell you all about the day with Shie, if i think of it. More comments please

Thanks!!!!

[miklc]

This is great I can really imagine Ariel in that yellow dress lol Carn't wit for the next section...

[ariel7angel]

As she ran down the stairs, she almost flew by Shie.

"Hey Ariel, slow down there." Shie said while laughing at her friend.

"Oh sorry, Shie i almost didnt see you, isnt it a wonderful day - im so glad you are here, we have so much to talk about, like why did you leave last night without saying goodbye to me, i was like mad for a whole minute" Ariel said by to her friend with a little attitude

"Yes it is beautiful day, oh am i so sorry about last night, i was so tired and i really didnt feel that good, so i told Ryan to say goodbye for me and that i would see you today, he did tell you right." Shie looked concerned that Ryan didnt say anything.

"Oh yes Ryan said goodbye to Eric not me, but i would have thought you would have at least say one word goodbye to me." Ariel looking kind of hurt b/c her friend didnt say bye

"Oh im so sorry Ariel, i would never want to hurt you like that - you know i love you, and think of you like a sister but i just didnt feel good, i think i ate or drank something bad, i dont know - but lets not let this ruin our day." Shie said with a smile

"Deal" Ariel agree

Grimsby entered the room that the two girls were in, and said "WHere are you girls having lunch today, and please say outside because it would be a crime to eat inside on a beautiful day like today.

"Of course we are eating outside, i was thinking on the beach, if that is ok with you Shie." Ariel asking her friend

"That is a wonderful idea Ariel, and maybe if we are lucky Flounder will come by, i love seeing your other best friend." Shie said with a big smile on her face

"Yeah i was hoping to see him too."

"So its settled, your girls will be having lunch outside on the beach today." Grimsby just wanted to make sure, you never know about woman they can change their mind like "that", he was thinking to himself.

"YEs Grimsby that will be great, that is all." Ariel answering him

And with that Grimsby returned to the kitchen to finish preparing the lunchs for the girls, and the two girls intertwined their arms and walked outside into the warmth of the sun.

"So when are you going to tell me the last of your story." Shie asked her friend

"When are you going to tell me who the stranger is." Ariel said back

"I asked you first"

"I asked you second"

"But you dont understand, i asked first - so you have to answer me first."

"But i asked second, so you should answer me first." Ariel said just to confuse her.

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i hope you like the new part!!!!!