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Post by ariel7angel on Nov 5, 2006 20:22:52 GMT -5
"No, me first - im not telling you anything about the guy until you finish your story." Shie said
"Well ok then, im not telling you any of my story until you at least tell me who he is" Ariel said right back at her while they were walking from the castle to the beach, Max had seen them so he had ran behind them. As Shie picked up a stick to throw to Max, she said " No tell the story first then i will tell you everything about your mystery man"
Max went into the ocean, and came back with the stick driping wet, Shie took it from him trying not to get her dress wet, she was also wearing a new sun-dress that Ryan had brought her at Mermaid Island, it was a little more girly than she like but Ryan really liked it, and she knew Ariel would to. It was pink at the top, and it change to purple by the end, it look really good with her cute short blonde hair.
"No, i cant stop thinking about him - i need to know who he is, and what he wants - its driving me crazy." Ariel stop walking
"Ok, fine you win - but im only telling you, who he is then you finish your story and then i will tell you everything else i know, we have a deal or not." Shie said right back to her
"Deal" Ariel said while throwing the stick to Max, he just loves to run after stuff.
They had finally found the perfect spot to eat, and have a wonderful day together, and Flounder is known to swim by this rock everyday just to see if he can talk to Ariel!!!
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Post by miklc on Nov 6, 2006 10:51:16 GMT -5
Wow ariel7angel that's brill well done keep it up
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Post by ariel7angel on Nov 7, 2006 15:39:42 GMT -5
"So this is killing me, please tell me who this guy is and how Ryan knows him" Ariel asked right after they sat down on the beach, and put their toes in.
"Ok, Ok i will tell you who he is just give me a second" Shie aswered, as Max finally stop running in the water, and sat down beside Shie to get some love.
"Sorry i just couldnt sleep last night because i was thinking of it so much." Ariel said while she was getting in a better mood b/c she loved the feel of the water on her skin.
"Ok, the guy is a strange one - he is one of Ryan's old friends from school awhile ago, and he just showed up at the party - i think he lives on Mermaid Island now."
"So what is his name??" THe is really what she wanted to know.
"Ok his name is Trick, now tell me the rest of your story" Shie said
"Wait a minute, tell me more."
"NO, that was are deal - i tell you his name and then you tell me the rest of the story, i even told you more about him - i shouldnt have even told you that much." Shie said
"But, but...."
"No buts a deal is a deal"
"Ok, fine i will tell you the rest of the story, but dont think i have to be happy about it" Ariel said while she was lightly laughing
"Yeah, i finally can hear what happen - i can wait"
"So where was i???" Ariel asked because she couldnt remember where she left offf
Right when Shie was about to tell her where she left off, Flounder swam up " Hey girls, what are you two up too"
"Oh hey Flounder, we were hoping to run/swim into you" Ariel said with a huge smile on her face.
"Hey flounder, Ariel was tellling me the rest of the story about Mermaid Island, and you are just going to have to listen and wait til she is done b/c i have waited so long to hear the rest of it" Shie also said but kidding too.
"That is cool, i love this story - and Ariel tells it so well. Which part are you at Ariel???" Flounder asked his best friend
"I was justing finding that out, i dont remember myself - so SHie where was i again." Ariel asked Shie again for the second time.
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So what do you think, i hope you all like it - please comment!!!!
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Post by miklc on Nov 11, 2006 14:37:24 GMT -5
That's brill ariel7angel I carn't wait to here the rest myself lol
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Post by ariel7angel on Nov 12, 2006 1:33:53 GMT -5
"YOu were at the part when the prince sees Indika for the second time." Shie said
"Oh this is when it gets really good" Flounder said before Ariel could start.
"Oh yes, now i remember - Indika was looking more beautiful then ever that night - her long black hair covered her gorgeous breasts and her purple tail shined in the moonlight, and she couldnt stop thinking about him since the last time they were together. The prince step closer to her, and took her in his arms and kissed her with so much passion, that he almost believe it. They thought they were alone but they werent - in the water behind the rocks, all the mermaids watched with worried eyes, but that was not the other eyes that were watching them that night"
"WHo else was watching, i want to know" SHie had to asked, she wanted to know so bad.
"Well if you would just wait one minute - i would have told you but now you have to wait even longer now, because i had to tell you this." Ariel said to her friend, while Flounder was laughting at the whole thing.
"What do you think this is funny" Shie turned around and said to Flounder
"Very" Flounder said in return.
"Ok, you two - do you want me to finish this story or not."
"Yes, yes i wont be able to sleep tonight - if you dont finish, Flounder stop talking so she can finish." SHie said to Ariel & Flounder
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I know it not much, but it is something - my brain isnt really thinking of anything new, sorry!!!!! But i will write more when i get back from Miami - please more comments!!!!!
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Post by miklc on Nov 12, 2006 8:35:36 GMT -5
It great, loving it and carn'r wait to read more
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Post by ariel7angel on Nov 19, 2006 15:36:32 GMT -5
"Needless than they know that the other eyes that watching them didnt have the same caring eyes that the mermaids had, these eyes were amazed with the sight of the mermaid, and even more with the sight of their prince kissing her, but then their eyes turned to greed, and they all thought to themselves how they could use this to make them more money, and more powerful. They watched as the prince and the unknown mermaid talked and kiss all night, but just like the night before when the sun came up - she was gone with the endless night!!!" Ariel said "What are they planing to do, wait a minute - now i dont know who is going to capture her - is the prince bad or his men." SHie couldnt wait to know what happen next, she was saying it so fast like the minute she thought of it, she would say it without even thinking about it, but she did that all the time. "Will you stop asking questions, and just let her finish the story - if you wait and listen, you will find everything out." Flounder said what Ariel was thinking, as Ariel laughed because her and Flounder were always thinking the same thing. "Im sorry you too, you know me - i just get so carried away with the story and i just cant help it." Shie said with a sad face "Its ok" Ariel said - she knew her friend, she did this everytime she would tell new story about under the sea. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ But as the girls and the fish talked and laughed - they too had some watchful eyes over them. "I wondered what they are talking about, and why there is a fish - did i just see him talk to Ariel & Shie, no i must be losing my mind." Ryan said to his friend, who ever seen Ariel arrived has wondered many things about their new princess. "Well they are best friends, they probable talking about girls things." Trick said "I know, but i want to know what they were talking about last night, and why Shie wouldnt tell me - i mean everytime i would come close to them, they would stop talking - like they didnt even trust me." Ryan said - which he didnt like, i mean it is one thing for a new princess not to trust you but his own girlfriend - come on, he thought to himself. "I know what you mean, there is something strange about our new princess, and i have a feeling that Shie knows all about it - and i am going to find that out, nomatter what i have to do." Trick said with a little smirk on his face. "I bet they are talking about whatever they were talking about last night, because Shie said that she had to go see Ariel before she left, so she could finish her story about her home kingdom - which i dont believe for a second - because even I have heard that story" Ryan added to what he was saying before. "Well maybe we should get a little closer and try to hear for ourselves." Trick suggested to his friend. "Lets do, whatever ever they are hiding, we will get to the bottom of it." Ryan declared to his friend. Trick smiled to himself, now he has Ryan to help him with his little investigation, and now he also has a man on the inside, whatever Ariel was hiding - he was going to find out, if it was the last thing he did. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I hope you like the new post - sorry it took me so long to write some more, i know Ariel's story is taking forever - im just trying to think of how to finish it - any help would help - please comment!!!!
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Post by ariel7angel on Dec 4, 2006 15:37:20 GMT -5
"Ok back to the story, when the prince was walking back to his ship - he saw the men who were hiding, he came up behind them and scared them out of their minds, which the prince thought was pretty funny - so he was laughting, the men didnt and they were asking him what he was doing with a mermaid, and how this could make them rich & famous, the prince said that was his plan all along but he wanted her to bring more mermaids, the only reason why he told his men this is because he didnt want them to be around when Indika came back, and he didnt want them to hurt her b/c in the time they had spend together - he had fell in love with her, and his plan had changed. His men believed him at first, so they didnt come around for awhile but the days, turned into weeks that turned into months - and they knew that their prince had had a change of "heart" or he would have done it already. So one night they hear their prince call out to the mermaid "Mermaid, mermaid please come out of the shadows and into my arms, i love you" and like everynight before that she did - she looked even more beautiful then the last night, the prince thought to himself and she swam up to him, and she didnt leave his arms until the sun came up, and the next night when he called her again - he said the same thing. Wow you are not saying a word, are you all right Shie" Ariel asked her friend "Well im trying not to ask any more questions like Flounder said so i can hear the rest of the story." Shie said back "Very good, Shie - im so proud of you." Flounder said with a laugh "Ok, i just wanted to check on you, but back to the story - so they thought that if they got one of their guys that looked like the prince from afar - then they could trick the mermaid in to coming out of hiding so they could get her" but then Ariel stoped "Did you hear something" Ariel asked her two friends - it kind of sounded like someone was listening or something - and those eyes again - she felt them on her. "NO, what are you talking about?" Shie asked Right when she was about to say something about those eyes, Shie & Flounder saw to men coming up behind Ariel and before Shie could say anything Flounder was gone - it was Ryan & Trick - what were they doing out her, Shie thought to herself. Ariel hear them too - and turned around and knew right away that it was him without even knowing - it was those eyes that she felt. She looked at Shie and she mouthed yes to her friend b/c she knew what she was think, and after that Shie stood up and when to go greet her boyfriend & his weird friend. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry it took me so long to write more - i hope you alll like it - please read it if you havent, and lots of comments please!!!!!
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Post by ariel7angel on Dec 6, 2006 1:33:49 GMT -5
Shie got up from her place in the sand, and went to go give Ryan a huge, and to say hey to Trick, if she remembered it right.
"WHat are you guys doing here" She asked her boyfriend and his friend, that she didnt like.
"Oh we were just taking a walk on the beach, and saw you two talking, and thought we would say hi, we arent going to stay long - i know you girls want to have your girl time." Ryan saying all the right things.
"YEah we are about to have lunch, it was such a beautiful day that we thought we would enjoy it outside on the beach." Shie said back to her boyfriend and his friend who wasnt paying any attention to her but looking at Ariel the whole time.
Ariel saw how his eyes didnt leave her, so she stood up and said "I dont think we have met, im Ariel, and you are" Ariel said while walking up to him
"OH im sorry, how rude of me - my name is Steve, but all of my friends call me Trick, kind of a nick name, i just moved her from Mermaid Island - i know Ryan from school a long time ago. But unlike you not knowing me, i know you Princess." He said while taking her hand and kissing it, she pulled it away as soon as she could without it looking weird.
"Nice to meet you Steve." Ariel said
"OH please Princess call me Trick, eveyone eles does" He said with a smile on his face.
She thought to herself, now how does one get such a name as Trick, and what was so weird about him that made her hair on the back of her neck stand up everytime she saw him or felt him for that matter.
"Ok then, Trick nice to meet you, how does one get....."
But she was cut off by Grimsby walking up with their lunchs "SOrry girls it took so long but Eric needed me for a second" as he was saying he saw the two guys standing there "Should i make more for you two as well." Grimsby asked the two men.
"Oh no thank you Grimsby" Ryan said " we were just saying hi, and was about to leave."
As Grimsby was laying out the blanket for the girls and taking out their lunchs for them, the men said their goodbyes, Shie gave one more hug & Kiss to Ryan, and said "I will see you tonight honey"
"Ok have fun with Ariel" Ryan said back, wanting so hard to know what they were just talking about before they heard them coming.
"It was so nice to meet you Princess, i hope we can talk again" Trick said to Ariel, knowing for sure that he got out of answering a question about his nick name, he didnt want her to know why everyone called him Trick - he didnt want her to see him coming.
"Nice to meet you too, Trick (NOT is what she wanted to say but she just thought it) - goodbye Ryan" Ariel said while they both walked away, Ryan just waved bye.
"Anything else i can get you, Princess" Grimsby asked before he left the girls to eat their lunch.
"That will be all Grimsby, thank you" Ariel said
"Very well, enjoy" As he walked away.
"That was very weird that they came out of no where - dont you think Ariel" Shie asked her friend
"I was thinking the same thing"
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Please Please Please comment - i dont care what it is, just so i know that someone is reading it - i hope i not just making it for myself.
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Post by ariel7angel on Dec 11, 2006 11:52:06 GMT -5
While they ate their lunches, Flounder return from under the sea - they were both so happy to see him again but Ariel couldnt stop thinking about Ryan and Trick, and how they came out of nowhere, she was wondering if they had been listening or something - and then when she was worrying that maybe they had been listening - her mind when to dreaming about him, Trick. Which she thought was very odd.
"What are you thinking" Shie could tell something was wrong with her friend, they had only been friends for a very short time but she already knew her pretty well.
"NOthing really, well ok - but you are going to think it is very weird, but well i will just tell you anyway"
"NO i wont - just tell me"
"Well i was thinking about Trick" Ariel finally said
"I know, isnt he creepy?" Shie asked her friend
"Yes, but that is not what i was thinking about"
"well, what were you thinking about" Shie didnt know what she was talking about.
"Well, you are going to think this is strange but i was kind of dreaming about him, the way i think about Eric." Ariel said as she looked at Shie not really believing herself.
"WHat???" SHie didnt know why she would be thinking that.
"I dont know, you know it is almost like some kind of spell is over me, because i didnt feel it until he was gone, i mean i watched them walk away so i could tell you the rest of the story when they were out of sight, and when i was about to start telling you both about the rest of the story that is when i started dreaming about him." Ariel said, and thought to herself that had to be it, because she had never felt the way she had felt about Eric about anyone else.
"Well what should we do?" Shie asked
"I dont know, i will just try to think of something else, and maybe it will go away" as she was saying that she just finally stop thinking about him, like he knew that it was getting to her, or that she figured it out that it was a spell and he didnt want her to get even more worried about him. "THat is weird - it is gone, it must have wore off, ok what a wierd afternoon."
"You telling me" Flounder said - his first word seen he had came back, because he didnt want to talk if their was people watching.
"You can say that again" Shie said
"So how is your lunch" Ariel asked Shie, trying to get herself back to normal, and trying to have a great afternoon with her two best friends.
"Great, Grimsby sure knows how to make a good lunch" Shie said backed to her friend.
"He sure does" Ariel said while enjoying her sandwich and salad.
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"That was close" Trick said to Ryan
"What happen???" Ryan wanted to know
"She figured it out that it was a spell, how did she do that"
"I have no idea"
"The only reason that she could tell that it was a spell, is if she isnt human or something, nobody else has ever been able to tell that i was using magic on them" Trick was telling Ryan, but he couldnt understand why his magic wasnt working on her, and why she could tell it was a spell - maybe she was just lucky.
"How could she not be human?? Maybe she just got lucky, and just quess it was a spell, that has to be it." Ryan finally said
"Yeah, maybe you right, but im going to keep any extra eye on her, she may be the key to Eric's undoning" Trick said to Ryan with a very evil loook in his eye!!!
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"So when are you going to finish this story" SHie finally asked after both had finish their lunchs.
"I guess now"
"YEah i cant wait to hear what happens next, this has been one of the best stories that i have ever heard - you should put it in a book, so everyone can enyoy it." Shie was telling her friend.
"WHat are you talking about, then everyone will know im a mermaid or at least know that mermaids are real" Ariel couldnt believe that her friend was saying this.
"Oh im sorry, i forget that everyone doesnt know that mermaids are real, and that would putted mermaids more in dangerous, i guess im the only one that gets to enjoy it." Shie said
"Oh well dont forget - all merpeople get to hear it too - so they dont go to mermaid island." Ariel said back to her friend.
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Please Please Please comment good or bad. i hope you all like it, and ii hope you can find the line that i took from TLM, just change a word or two!!!!
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Post by miklc on Dec 11, 2006 13:03:37 GMT -5
Sorry I took so long commenting I havn't been round much lately, anyway this is brill carn't wait to hear more ariel7angel
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Post by ariel7angel on Dec 13, 2006 19:51:42 GMT -5
"I see, so back to the story" Shie said she couldnt wait for her to finish it.
"Ok, the next night - the moon sparkled on the night sea, fuller than it had ever been those nights they had been together - the Prince looked more handsome then he had ever look, he wasnt wearing his usually white shirt & blue pants but something different - nicer - Indika thought to herself when she saw him walk up to their "place". He had a dreamy look on his face, when he said what he always said everynight "Mermaid, Mermaid please come out of the shadows and into my arms, i love you" and like everynight before that she came to him - but before he kissed her, he told her that he loved her so much, and that he couldnt live another day without her being his wife - that he would do anything he could, go to anyone that could make them be together forever - kind of remind of someone??" Ariel asked her friends, but they both didnt have to answer because they knew that she was talking about her and Eric.
"So what happen next?" Shie asked so Ariel would go on.
"Well she said that she would do the same, that she would go under the sea and see if she could find anyone who knew what she could do, they didnt care if they lived on land or sea - they just wanted to be together. Funny thing about not caring, when it happens sometimes you miss what you left behind." She took a pause and was about to keep going until Shie said
"What do you mean, are you talking about you or them." Shie was worried because she thought Ariel was talking about herself.
"Oh nothing, dont worry i will tell you later, just something i have been thinking about lately." Ariel said
"We miss you too" Flounder said to his friend,
"DOnt tell me not to worry, if something is wrong with my best friend, we should talk about it."
"Its not really that big of a deal, i have just was thinking about, and the story has made me think about it a little more, its ok - like i said we will talk about later." Ariel told her friend, and gave her a look that made her feel alot better.
"Ok, if you promise"
"YEs, i promise. Ok back to the story, then he did what every man in their lifes to when they find the right girl - he got on one knee and asked her to marry him, and of course she said yes - he took the most beautiful rock and put it on her finger - she didnt understand, but he explained what it meant in the human world. And then for the rest of the night, they kissed under the full moon, and like everynight before that - she was gone with the moon when the sun came up, if only they had known that would be the last night that they would ever see each other again."
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Please read it, and commment it - if you read it just comment one word or something - i just want to know that someone is enjoying it and likes it or doesnt like it!!! THanks!!!!
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Post by ann on Dec 27, 2006 0:42:33 GMT -5
cute ,romantic and so deep , you are awsome .
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Post by attinabubbles on Jan 3, 2007 13:42:44 GMT -5
nice! keep going
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Post by ariel7angel on Jan 15, 2007 10:42:47 GMT -5
"What do you mean that will be the last night they will see each other, what happens, tell me tell me" Shie acting like she always does.
"HOld your seahorses, just listen and i will tell you - silly girl" Ariel said while laughing at her friend.
"Ok, im sorry - please go on" Shie said back to her friend.
"Well like i said Indika was gone with the moon, and the prince was walking back to his ship but wasnt paying attention to everything like he always does because the woman of his dreams had just agree to be his wife, now if only they could find away to be together on the land or sea but as he was deep in thought, his men came out of nowhere and captured him and a threw him in the lowest part of the ship, so he couldnt get out - but been at the lowest part of the ship, sea creatures could hear him better - so he called out for help all day trying to warn his mermaid, but no one hear him or so he thought"
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Sorry it took me so long to write stuff, i have been really busy and sorry it is so short but i have to go to work soon, maybe i will write more tonight - please comment!!!!
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Post by Kimberly on Jan 15, 2007 14:25:34 GMT -5
You are going to drive me crazy, I feel like Shie with Ariel's story I love it and can't get annuff please right more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by ariel7angel on Jan 25, 2007 1:00:46 GMT -5
"So did someone hear or what" SHie asked impatiently like always.
WHile laughing "YOu just cant wait until i say another sentence, can you?" Ariel said to her new best friend.
"Sorry again, Ariel please gone on"
"Ok, but you have to promise no more questions, ok?"
"I promise, no more out of me!!!!" As she took her fingers up to her month like she was zipping her mouth shut, and then locked it and throw away the key - Ariel really didnt know what she was doing, but giggled anyways. "ITs a human thing, oh whoops, sorry" as she did it all over again.
It took Ariel awhile to stop laughing at her friend, but when she finished she went right back to where she was at the story "The little mermaid was all over the sea, trying to find out how she could be with her prince, not knowing what had happen to him, while she was swimming around the other mermaids who loved Mermaid Island during the day were swimming by the ship when they hear something yelling, it wasnt something, it was someone - their prince, the one they had all fell in love with but were too scaried to go to him. They went closer, and this is what they heard "Mermaids, mermaids - i need help, please if you can hear me, say something just so i know that you are there, INdika is in great dangerous", and he kept saying that til one of the Princess of the sea like me said something back." She was about to say what the Princess said but then Grimsby came out of nowhere.
"I didnt mean to scary you girls, i was just wondering if you were all done with your lunchs, and needed anything else."
"YEs, we are done, and no thank you we are fine." Ariel said back to him.
"Very well, you girls have a wonderful afternoon, if you need anything just yell" As he picked up their finished lunchs and walked by to the castle.
"Thank you, Grimsby" Both of the girls said as he walked away. Sheie looked at Ariel without saying a word, but telling her to keep going with the story, as she said no more would be out of her til the story was done.
"Ok, ok - the princess said back to the prince, "how do we know you are not lieing, and just trying to capture us" and this is what the prince said back to the mermaid princess "you dont know that im lieing but you do know that i love INdika, and i would never do anything to hurt her, i want to marry her - yes a human wants to be with mermaid, i know it sounds strange but i dont care - you cant choose who you fall in love with, i would die for her, please help me, i will surely die without her - please please help me, i will do anything you want" After hearing that the princess knew that he was telling no lies, and sent out some of the mermaids to look for Indika to warn her, and tell her about his capture."
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I hope you all like the new post, i will try to write more soon, sorry it took me so long!!!!!!
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Post by Kimberly on Jan 25, 2007 10:14:29 GMT -5
Thank you I love your story please continue.
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Post by ariel7angel on Jan 25, 2007 19:30:19 GMT -5
"IT felt like they had been swimming all day, and it was almost nightfall, and Indika would be returning to land to wait for her prince that wouldnt be there, they had almost given up when they saw her on her way up to the surface, "wait" they called out to her "Indika please wait" as she heard her name, she turned around and saw four mermaids swimming faster than she had ever seen, when they got to her, they couldnt even speak for a sec, but once they got a moment, they all told her about the prince, and what had happen to him, but she did not believe, she thought to herself they never wanted us to be together in the first place, so now they are trying to keep us apart, they all love him and if they cant have him, they dont want me to either.
She told them "stop lieing, he loves me and wants to be with me, i know a human wants to be with a mermaid, wierd but it is true, stop telling these lies". They tried to explain that they talked to him, and that he was captured, and that she was in great dangerous but she wouldnt listening to them, right in the middle of them trying to stop her from going up to the surface, she just swam away up to her prince, oh so she thought." Ariel took a minute to remember the rest, unlike her and her prince, it didnt have such a happy ending.
Shie looked at her friend, almost knowing what was going to happen next because Ariel looked sad, not like her usual happy self, but she didnt ask her b/c she promise she wouldnt ask anymore questions until she was done with the story.
As Ariel took a deep breath, she begin to tell the rest of the story "She swam up to same spot she always waited for her prince to call on her, she didnt find a way to be with him yet, but she knew she would find one soon. As she waited for him, all she could think about was about the four mermaids, and thinking were they right but then at of nowhere, they he was "Mermaid, Mermaid please come out of the shadows and into my arms, i love you""
"NO, dont do it" Shie yelled at her friend, "whoops sorry, please go on"
"And like everynight before she came out of the shadows, and into his arms, but wait it wasnt her prince but before she could return under the sea, a net came out of nowhere and got her."
"Oh no, poor INdika" Shie said with a sad look on her face.
"THe four mermaids were watching from one of the coves, and when they saw her go up into the net, they swam right away to the boat to tell the prince of what had happen. Meanwhile Indika cried out, and sang such sad songs, the sailors couldnt take it anymore, they all thought that they could keep her, and show the world a live mermaid but after hearing all the pain they knew they would have to kill her." Ariel said as a tear fell from her eye.
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I know its kind of sad, but good stories need happy & sad times too - tell me what you all think - please lots and lots of comments!!!!!!
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Post by Kimberly on Jan 26, 2007 8:48:31 GMT -5
wow it vary moveing. Its vary good I love reading it and I'm looking forwerd to reading more please keep it comeing.
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